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As the nurse was pulling Bette from the room, she took one more look over her shoulder. Bette would keep this vision of a joyous Tina, cradling her new born baby with a look of complete unconditional love. With that one last look Bette exited the room.

Bette successfully slipped out of her gown and through the staff door. As she was exiting the birthing suite she could hear Helena in the waiting room tell the girls of the glorious event. The screams of joy could be heard all the way down the hall as Bette exited the floor on her way out of the hospital. As Bette was exiting the hospital with the sight of Tina and her, not their perfect little girl in her mind, Bette knew she would have to be a force in this babys life. But how was the question. Bette pondered this question for quite a while afterwards, one thought became entwined with the thought that was Dr. Wilsons question Bette can you do that can you stay in the background? That was the seed that started Bettes mind working. The thought that she needed to be in her daughters life in some way even if it was only in the background started Bette on her new mission in life.




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03/31/2005 , 07:18:49 AM
From: slacker
Comments: Interesting. Now how I'd like it to turn out, but that's a different matter. Nicely done.



03/31/2005 , 07:46:46 AM
From: Nikki
Comments: I loved that! Good work! However, she should have stuffed the doc at the scream :P



03/31/2005 , 07:49:42 AM
From: DenisE
Comments: sob sob, that was soo touching...love it..sob sob..thanks..sob sob sob



03/31/2005 , 07:51:32 AM
From: Jobadge
Comments: What a great way to start, very emotional! You go get your girls Bette!



03/31/2005 , 08:03:57 AM
From: girl drummer
Comments: interesting story line. pls. continue



03/31/2005 , 08:26:29 AM
From: nix
Comments: Omg, I'm so glad you're back and already I'm hooked on your new story.... I can't wait to see where you go with this!! =0)



03/31/2005 , 08:58:55 AM
From: Chasemenow
Comments: Welcome back Jwet! Great premise for a new story. I truly wish that Bette had made her presence known in the delivery room but I'm going to trust that you will eventually bring these two together.



03/31/2005 , 09:06:50 AM
From: petluvr
Comments: I loved your story. It would have been nice if Tina and Bette could have made eye contact even if it was for a second. I have faith you will lead us to a happy ending. Please continue..



03/31/2005 , 09:31:51 AM
From: mc
Comments: quite an interesting story. where will you take us?



03/31/2005 , 10:02:16 AM
From: Shaz
Comments: Loved the story, please bring Bette and Tina, back together. Get rid of Helena, she is so agravating.



03/31/2005 , 10:13:12 AM
From: Kabby
Comments: I am glad she was there but she can't go that far in the background she need to be in the babies life..Please continue




03/31/2005 , 11:19:17 AM
From: just me
Comments: that was amazing. i don't think i've been so enraptured on a story like this before. please continue.



03/31/2005 , 13:00:12 PM
From: M99
Comments: Very nice, hopefully Bette won't stay in the background for too long.
Thank you.




03/31/2005 , 13:14:58 PM
From: lost1
Comments: i feel so bad for bette right now!! please post soon!!!



03/31/2005 , 13:53:21 PM
From: Firecracker
Comments: Ahh J,you have such talent, this made me want to cry. Hopefully with Bette being a force in this babys life, even if it is in the background, Tina will realize how much Bette wants to be there...and yeah. I luv you for for writing with such origiality. I cant wait for more.



03/31/2005 , 16:49:46 PM
From: Bette&TinaForever
Comments: i think Bette has t declare her intentions and be present in baby's life, not in the background, it's totally her daughter and maybe Tina will understand, i mean she screamed Bette's name...it's time to kick Helena in the a** and move on with Bette



03/31/2005 , 17:43:27 PM
From: chakasb
Comments: I'm so glad you are back - I love your stories. Tina screaming Bette's name was so intense. Looking forward to amazing chapters.



03/31/2005 , 17:54:42 PM
From: angelak
Comments: now this is interesting..hmmmmmmmm



03/31/2005 , 19:32:55 PM
From: Tamaratag
Comments: Your writing is so amazing. The question remains Can Bette stay in the background? I will definitely read to find out. This premise and your writing is so moving. Thanks for this story and I'm anxiously waiting for more.



03/31/2005 , 20:37:46 PM
From: skipton
Comments: interesting, very, very interesting...



03/31/2005 , 22:48:54 PM
From: techgal
Comments: Bette needed to hold that baby.
She has more restraint than me...



04/01/2005 , 01:02:59 AM
From: Revolution
Comments: yes!! GO Bette GO! make a beautiful little plan to be in your daughter's life! awesome story! can't wait!



04/01/2005 , 04:49:50 AM
From: Mates
Comments: Fascinating new story Jwet.......your writing always captures the emotion so well.......I'm eagerly awaiting what you have in store for us...Thanks:)



04/01/2005 , 09:03:55 AM
From: Down Low
Comments: Jwet this is magnetic I'm totally drawn in. Wonderful start can't wait for me.



04/01/2005 , 09:05:22 AM
From: South Paw
Comments: Love the story. I'm glad Bette was there for the birth of their baby, can't wait for them to get together.



04/03/2005 , 20:21:52 PM
From: Lyn
Comments: Like the story and so emotion and so sad for Bette. Post soon, thank you!



04/04/2005 , 14:05:40 PM
From: marsupial
Comments: POOR BETTE.WHAT A BEAUSTIFUL STORY



04/06/2005 , 23:21:20 PM
From: giasony
Comments: I love the story seeing Bette with selfless love is so refreshing. Great start




06/25/2005 , 10:47:19 AM
From: tylo
Comments: loving it so far. But bette porter dose not do backround well this is giong to be so hard, but interesting



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