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Comments:Leave Comment (pop up window) 05/18/2012 , 14:19:39 PMFrom: JDM Comments: I love her punishment! :) What comes next!!! More please!  05/18/2012 , 14:28:44 PM From: Tibette23 Comments: oh, wow, what an awesome chapter!!! I absolutely LOVE this Tina :) thanks SO much, BenMac!! 05/18/2012 , 14:35:27 PM From: gmg1973 Comments: As always a great chapter!! PPS 05/18/2012 , 14:54:42 PM From: jp22 Comments: More foreboding... I'm worried again, despite the deceptively "mild" consequences of Bette's actions, I feel like further evil is afoot. Tina greying at the temples, and missing a further sign of danger... I guess Begonia's havoc hasn't fully been wreaked? I'm wary, even though I'm immensely looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks, BenMac! :) 05/18/2012 , 16:23:06 PM From: Dainty Comments: My goodness, you do love to drop little hints and leave us with cliffies don't you. I don't quite understand how weezy plays into this story but she is one of the carpenters the begonia was talking about and some of the foreign people hired was also begonia or some of her minions. I know begonia isn't finished with Bette yet. You would think the idiot would leave well enough alone especially after Tina and Anthony had her running from them but no, she's coming back for more, fool. This is one of the most interesting stories I've read in a long time. And I love it. Thanks. 05/18/2012 , 18:44:39 PM From: supershock Comments: Why do I get the feeling we haven't seen the last of this? And Whats with Andy's dream of Alice and loads of blood? Awesome update, can't wait for the next one =] 05/18/2012 , 18:46:28 PM From: bumsue Comments: YES! As Dainty says... This is one of the most interesting stories that I've read on FanFic. It's intriguing and so different than most. I like the inclusion of the Woowoo. There is always more to life than meets the eye. I love your imagination and keep it coming! Thanks for the posting. 05/18/2012 , 19:10:09 PM From: talaula Comments: Not out of the woods yet. Thanks BenMac!!!! 05/18/2012 , 20:19:07 PM From: Hellbent Comments: This is such a COOL STORY!!!!! 05/18/2012 , 21:30:42 PM From: Cieraa Comments: Perfect again. Although I sense the storm has yet cleared.. I will fall asleep now with a smile on my face, again. Thank you! 05/18/2012 , 23:07:35 PM From: favcouple Comments: This one of the most interesting stories I have read here. I can't get enough and this was an excellent update. I still feel that something evil is going to happen and that Bette's not out of the woods yet. Thank you for this amazing story. 05/19/2012 , 06:55:34 AM From: Merlion Comments: Whoa!! 😁What a great surprise! So happy to see your update. Ok this update is not answering why bette is the target! And why Andy has that kind of dream!? And Alice has something also?! And 3 days!? OMG... 😱and wheezy! Is she Begonia's cronies too? Foreign worker as in from Columbia?! I am so sure this is not end yet! Begonia will be back once she knows that Bette is survive! I hope Bette remember the punishment and won't be tempted to disobey and expecting this kind of punishment again 😜 I am in awe on Tina's character ... And I always laugh whenever you describe her ninja agility and speed! uhm.. 😍 so hot! Well, thanks for another great update and ... Now pining for more update from you! :-) enjoy the weekend ✌😊 05/19/2012 , 11:31:33 AM From: Liah x Doll Comments: I didn't get to post on your last chapter but I absolutely loved it ! The confrontation between Tina and Begonia was .... Jesus, there are no words for it lol. I was on the edge of my seat the entire time, I loved how Begonia was portrayed in that chapter. This post was simply amazing as well. I agree and hope that Bette takes her punishment to heart though I have to say ... it was incredibly hot ! 05/19/2012 , 13:44:13 PM From: Tibetter24 Comments: Woo super hot love it!! 05/20/2012 , 15:50:30 PM From: OneStorm1 Comments: I feel the evil creeping in. Bette doese not fully believe so she doesn't put two and two together as quickly as she should. I hope Andy tells her about his dreams so she sees it is not about her getting hurt, but her hurting Tina then maybe she will see it coming especially with the hint abiut a foriegn company interupting her time table for Bette's work. With Bette believing more and more each day maybe she will be able to make the right coice and since Tina has seen that these things are a real possibility will chooseto make better choices than turning to a man to get revenge I always hated that story line. Tina better rest and start t scratch that itch for Bette before it starts to take over her sences. Now that Andy is learning to handle his new found gift maybe he will be the one to get Bette to see that the carpenter is not a good choice. Ok sorry to ramble so long loved the chapter, love the fic PPS 05/21/2012 , 00:09:55 AM From: didi1956 Comments: Amazing as always.Thank you. 05/26/2012 , 12:32:07 PM From: ut Comments: That was awesome, love it |
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