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The start of a beautiful romance- Pt 4 by bntfan
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But you know she isnt half bad. When you get to know her. She really tries to be a friend rather than just a boss. Shes smart, and she cares. Shes beautiful. And when she smiles, its like. And when we danced and she held me. There was a period of silence, still twirling the blade of grass she let out a long sigh then Tina finally admitted, Mandy, I think I am falling in love with Bette and it scares me.
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9/15/2004 ,
10:17:22 AM
From:
tinawho?
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Love the pace and love the dialog...between them and with themselves...you've got a keeper here girl...excellent, can't wait for more!!!

9/15/2004 ,
11:41:14 AM
From:
Nan
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How sweet *sign*. Can't wait to see how Bette will court Tina or the other way around.

9/15/2004 ,
11:47:50 AM
From:
Galaxy
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Okay now you are getting some where. Excellent chapter. Can't wait for the next one. Thanks

9/15/2004 ,
11:58:57 AM
From:
Hotpepper/Amanda
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finally someone writes a story where they are falling in love with "EACH OTHER" and not other people...please continue

9/15/2004 ,
1:22:27 PM
From:
s
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Nice work! Like this scenario. Haha.. the authors have made them work in different industries, which is neat.

9/15/2004 ,
1:23:39 PM
From:
avid reader
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Hotpepper, i didnt quite get your comment. There are lots of stories here where tina and bette falls for each other.

9/15/2004 ,
4:23:44 PM
From:
the reader
Comments:
Nice, very nice... good scenario!

9/15/2004 ,
8:36:31 PM
From:
MyBody
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Bette better keep Shane away from the bars, she's too young! LOL..I love this story, please post soon..

9/17/2004 ,
12:06:10 AM
From:
liz
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love the love!

9/17/2004 ,
1:01:16 AM
From:
gemini
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The board is really slow tonight, so I thought that I would re-read some of the stories that I've enjoyed these past days. I hope that youmpost soon, this is getting interesting. I do love a Bette & Tina love story. Thanks

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