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Rhythmic Freedom by sunkissed
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She shyly looked and met the brunette’s gaze bringing her arms down to her lap. “Well…” looking down, “that was embarrassing.” The gallery owner laughed whole heartedly and Tina quickly joined in, only now she had to fight the thought of Bette topless from dancing around in her head due to the slip. They trailed off from the laughter and remained quiet for the next few minutes. Bette was fairly certain she knew where the blushing virtuoso’s mind drifted since the color in her cheeks had not relented and subsequently the brunette was battling the same thought of Tina. As if rehearsed, they both shifted in their seats to sit straighter before the silence was broken. Clearing her throat quietly, “We’re just about there.” Bette said glancing at Tina. The gallery owner had arranged with a colleague and gained access to the beach through his private oceanfront property, giving them a more private view of the days end. Bette took Tina’s hand as the cellist stepped out of the car and on to the path to the shore. The brunette followed the virtuoso’s lead as they neared the water’s edge and fell captive to beauty of the blonde; the corners of her mouth held a tranquil smile, her chin raised slightly into the ocean-breeze that was having its way with her golden hair. So lost was the brunette in the cellist’s she felt the saltwater before she saw it and couldn’t contain a giggle when it tickled her bare feet. Glancing down at her feet, Bette caught sight of the lovely toes of the blonde just as they curled into the wet sand. She fixed her gaze on the rooted stance trying to recall if she had ever been so turned on by someone’s feet. When a new wave washed just over the top of the ivory skin, the brunette felt Tina give her hand a gentle squeeze. Struggling to swallow, the gallery owner brought her gaze up the profile of the blonde and felt dizzy from the enchanting look on the virtuoso’s face. Her eyes were closed, cheeks flushed and her lips were ever so slightly parted. Bette’s heart raced; everything in her wanted to kiss those lips, those amazing alluring lips. Again, she felt Tina squeeze her hand only this time it came with a message that eased the urgency for a kiss. The blonde didn’t change her posture of worship she merely squeezed Bette’s hand, but somehow the brunette knew the cellist was telling her to wait… it’ll come… just wait. In awe, Bette stood in the presence of the blonde, taking in the connection that now humbled her heart. The virtuoso had formed a bond with the earth, ocean, sun, and wind, and through the touch of their hands brought Bette into the moment shared. The brunette turned and faced the salt filled breeze and dug her toes into the sand. She closed her eyes and when the water caressed her feet, vertigo spun her senses causing her to grip tight Tina’s hand. Her lids were too heavy to open, Bette felt panic begin to rise, and then her anchor took hold and broke through her fears with tender words. “I’ve got you.” “Look Bette!” The brunette fluttered her eyes open to the clear voice of the cellist and she turned to look at the blonde. Confused, had Tina reassured her or had the vertigo toyed with her mind? She followed the blonde’s outstretched arm to view the horizon hosting the setting sun. The sky was free of clouds and displayed a gradient of vibrant orange emitted by the spectacular setting sun. They watched, hand in hand, as the ocean tucked away the daystar for the night. Tina turned and stepped closer to the brunette and took hold of her other hand. “Thank you.” She said expressing joy in her hazel eyes. Bette’s heart began its race anew, this time there would be a kiss. TBC...
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07/10/2008 ,
02:42:36 AM
From:
2005fanforever
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So not a nice place to stop ;o) I really am enjoying this story! Thanks!

07/10/2008 ,
03:06:59 AM
From:
Rau
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beautiful...lovely...what happened to the kiss??? did that fall off too??? Lovely story. PPS.

07/10/2008 ,
03:08:49 AM
From:
geek in the pink
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i love thier shyness! PPS

07/10/2008 ,
06:30:40 AM
From:
beachlife
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tina is adorable with all her giggling...nice to see that shane made something of herself and she has a degree...yes i like the way this is unfolding but uhmmm the places where u leave off illegal moves!! LOL :)PPS

07/10/2008 ,
08:04:56 AM
From:
tibetteporter
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gah! why did you stop? why?! excellent as always SK, you write beautifully, I can always see the scenes you are describing. Looking forward to the rest of the date :)

07/10/2008 ,
10:12:20 AM
From:
akalittlered
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WOW!!!! So beautiful and sweet!!!! Thank you PPS

07/10/2008 ,
10:24:46 AM
From:
dannylc
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You know I was the one advocating that weshould all wait till our favorite couple got to the beach, but that was really not nice to stop there. ha ha ha. That's ok, I'm more patient than most. I'll hang on another chapter. They will kiss in the next chapter right???!!!! ha ha Lovin' the story.

07/10/2008 ,
10:37:01 AM
From:
BetteAndTinaForever
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kiss? what kiss? where's the kiss? you can't stop now......oo, this was beautiful, i think i'm going to watch sunset tonight, in my new green dress, maybe someone special will find me ;)

07/10/2008 ,
10:40:39 AM
From:
bettyvhall
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Love how sly there are with each other. If they kiss they are goner. thanks

07/10/2008 ,
10:50:59 AM
From:
2bU
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SK, i know how you writers like to leave your readers at the edge of their seat but please don't go MIA for 6 days again. I don't know how I would be able to handle it, especially now that we're getting into the good part! I can't help but fall in love with your story. I like how B&T are so shy with each other and the chemistry that you've created between these two are so palpable I could swear I was there with them watching the sunset. Your attention to detail is unparalleled. I feel like I'm seeing a painting when you described the sunset before B&T's eyes. Please post soon and bring on the kiss! :D

07/10/2008 ,
13:42:40 PM
From:
sgtmags
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Yet another "cliffy"...you're so bad it's good. Don't stay away so long next time.

07/10/2008 ,
13:57:30 PM
From:
OneStorm1
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Very sweet I'm loving every minute of this story. Tina's mom seems very, very protective of her I hope Bette can win some points for being a grad from the same university she went to. I don't remember if Bette's past was full of one night stands in this fic hopefully not so that will be another plus for mom and Shane likes her so that has to be a good thing. PPS

07/10/2008 ,
14:46:40 PM
From:
coop
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A, hello, did we miss the KISS? They are just too cute. Tina's already so protective of Bette. Interesting twist on Tina's family, but I love it.

07/10/2008 ,
16:13:14 PM
From:
ntnrml61
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the elusive kiss!! you are very very bad!! ok...lets try this again...sunset,ocean,kiss. who will make the first move...Bette or Tina? they both are so shy...it's so cute....

07/10/2008 ,
16:14:37 PM
From:
banana
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SK, if I'm a good girl, please oh please can I get a Cellist Tina for my very own this Christmas? I think I'm in love. Haha! I know I can't compete with a certain Ms. Porter, who'll probably kick my ass for looking at Tina anyway. Just thought I'd ask. ;-) This is fabulous. Your description of B&T at sunset took my breath away. It was cruel to leave us hanging there, but I forgive you because the sunset scene was so very good. PP very S!

07/10/2008 ,
20:10:39 PM
From:
toby4ever
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Wow, that was really lovely Sunkissed! I especially liked the ocean scene...that was so sweet. Tina is so sheltered...like a child almost and Bette is captivated by it. Can't wait for that next update since you left us all in the drink there!

07/10/2008 ,
20:42:28 PM
From:
phyl
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Such a lovely, sweet story. Can't wait til they actually kiss...

07/10/2008 ,
20:53:14 PM
From:
hawkchic
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Wonderful, Amazing, Beautiful! I wonder if Rachel Kennard has heard of Bette Porter??? That might make things interesting. I love that they fall into sharing so easily but are somewhat bashful still. :)

07/10/2008 ,
21:42:34 PM
From:
momadukes
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"She closed her eyes and when the water caressed her feet, vertigo spun her senses causing her to grip tight Tina's hand." VERTIGO, is that what were calling it now, HOLY SPIN can we get that kiss any time soon? Excellent chapter Sk. Thank you, Md

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