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“and ripe” Helena added.

 

“and full” Shane nodded.

 

“and sexy” Alice added.  “It makes me just want to...” looking at Tina and Kit she stopped talking. 

 

Tina looked at the women seated at the table and not one of them could meet her eyes except Kit.

 

“Tina I know I said that thinking is cheating but Alice forgives me and I forgive her” Tasha admitted.

 

Tina’s mouth dropped open.  Alice? Tasha? She looked at Helena who looked away.  Helena? Cindy nodded.  Shane dropped her head.  Jenny watching everyone and seeing that they were all just as affected as she was shrugged. 

 

Tina recovering from the shock spoke “at least I can count on Kit and Max.”

 

Max came in on cue as Bette exited the bathroom.  They watched as he too seemed mesmerized and met Bette in her approach and escorted her back to the table strutting like a peacock.  

 

Once seated beside Tina Bette murmured to her.  “What’s going on?”

 

“I’ll tell you later.”  Tina replied glaring at their friends for good measure. 




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07/04/2008 , 18:13:22 PM
From: Rau
Comments: So hilarious...U had me laughing out loud and lusting a little myself but for the daddy..yes, I have a thing for Tina...she is so alphahot!!! Je t'adore...PPS



07/04/2008 , 18:31:09 PM
From: beachlife
Comments: tina's comment was funny...their friends drooling over bette,lol...:)PPS



07/04/2008 , 18:57:32 PM
From: Dainty
Comments: LOVED IT!!!! Yes, it was funny but also very realistic. Been there, done that, seen it first hand. Some women are uber hot when pregnant and they do glow, it's so lovely to watch. I do so Understand all their feelings, and attention toward Bette especially Tina wanting to kick them all. You just don't want people lusting after your wife, your very pregnant wife. Love alpha Tina. Great chapter Kelika. Post when you can.



07/04/2008 , 19:13:13 PM
From: sgtmags
Comments: That was hilarious! I loved alpha Tina. I could just see that stunned look on her face we she realized her whole family was lusting after Bette!



07/04/2008 , 19:26:19 PM
From: azmama
Comments: Pregnant or not, Bette is hot!.



07/04/2008 , 19:49:07 PM
From: bettyvhall
Comments: That was so hilarious. We all seen how beautiful she was pregnant. I though that Tina was so very very beautiful in a old fashion way. Thanks



07/04/2008 , 20:21:19 PM
From: toby4ever
Comments: Hahahaha....that was hysterical! I could just see the camera panning in on each of the friends faces as they said their line about Bette. Great stuff Kelika!



07/04/2008 , 20:27:26 PM
From: dancemaple
Comments: Pregnant or not, Bette is smoking HOT!



07/04/2008 , 21:19:16 PM
From: lucero2557
Comments: Wow! The way you described the scenes really showed what an spectacle pregnant Bette must be. Alpha Tina is sooo cute! Watching the whole family together is a complete full circle of love and joy. Thanks, K! This update was just beautiful and the details were not only funny, but realistic, too. Sincerely, Lucero & Marsha (JC's Salsa Aunties)



07/04/2008 , 21:42:17 PM
From: rsa
Comments: That was a fun chapter. Great writing as always. Looking forward to more.



07/04/2008 , 22:46:59 PM
From: ntnrml61
Comments: that was too funny!!! i could just imagine them all with their tongues hanging out...lmao....KEEP ON POSTIN!!



07/05/2008 , 01:11:26 AM
From: mette hartmann
Comments: Great chapter - a pregnant Bette - no wonder they´re all drooling. I suppose their ability to speak will go next. Such a great story.



07/05/2008 , 01:56:21 AM
From: badaboumbabou
Comments: HA HA HA HA :D EXCELLENT !!!



07/05/2008 , 02:59:10 AM
From: ut
Comments: That was funny and Bette is hot, yes if its me there I'll do them same at everyone doing lol. Please post more, thanks!



07/05/2008 , 06:01:37 AM
From: without labels
Comments: Wow that was incredible to imagine, I mean I don't blame them if they droll over Bette, she is everything they say she is. Keli You are so amazing and you make every chapter you write an amazing experience to go through. Thank God we have you as the talented writer that you are, I can't wait for what's coming next. Have a great dayLove



07/05/2008 , 09:11:10 AM
From: jp22
Comments: Lol, no matter how much Tina growls about it, facts are facts: her wife is really hot. Her friends' reactions are only natural. Great stuff, Kel. thanks!



07/05/2008 , 11:45:48 AM
From: hawkchic
Comments: Tina just got hotter the more Alpha she got with the 'family'. And the way you describe Bette..whoo-ee!!! I was dying laughing though seeing everyone fall apart in lust and bringing out Alpha Tina.



07/06/2008 , 00:19:21 AM
From: pattifloatn
Comments: What will Alice do when she finds out that it was Tina's female sperm that did the deed? Not only does Bette look gorgeous pregnant but Tina produced some major drool in her pregnancy with Angelica. Man they are one awesome, fantastic, and gorgeous couple.



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