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”  Tina said jokingly and proceeded to mess up the brunette’s messy hair.

 

Shane reached her bed, turned her back to its side and dropped Tina gently on the mattress.  She walked over to her wardrobe chuckling.  “Is that so?”  She said pulling out a pair of black jeans and throwing them on the bed next to blonde.

 

Tina dropped back on the bed and looked dreamingly up at the ceiling.  “I don’t know whether to thank you for getting Bette to come by today or kick you ass for interrupting what was sure to be the best kiss I’ve ever had.”  She said playfully. 

 

Shane laughed and threw a red t-shirt on the bed next to the jeans.  Looking at the blonde virtuoso with her hands on her hips, she challenged her choices.  “Well… it seems to me there wouldn’t be an interrupted kiss if I hadn’t of told Bette where and when to find you.”  She said as she kicked off her shoes.  “and besides that…”  unbuttoning her shorts.  “Unless I’m wrong, you have a date with her tonight.” stepping out of her shorts.  “So you have another chance at the kiss.”  She said with a smile in her voice walking into her bathroom.

 

Tina raised herself up on her elbows and brought her feet up on the bed bent at the knees.  “You know what Shane?”  She said bending her head back and looking at the door to the bath upside down.

 

Shane peered around the corner of the bathroom door.  “What?”  Grinning at the pose of her friend.

 

“I really like her.”  Tina said with a big smile.

 

First shaking her head with a chuckle, Shane replied with a nod. “I know.” 

 

 

 

 

 

 

TBC

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 





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07/03/2008 , 02:00:25 AM
From: ntnrml61
Comments: Shane and her impeccable timing! ok....beach...sunset....kiss..... i love this story ;)



07/03/2008 , 02:56:25 AM
From: Rau
Comments: Shane is as bad as Alice for her rotten timing!!!! The build up was GREAT but the let down made me miserable.Ok. I will try to update "If it wasn't" over my holidays. Thank you for the lovely comment. PPS



07/03/2008 , 03:14:44 AM
From: Dainty
Comments: As Tina said, Shane's timing is lousy, but Bette will make up for it at their dinner date and then some. Tina will be lovingly initiated into the fold. Love the story. Thanks for posting.



07/03/2008 , 03:55:43 AM
From: aqueous_one
Comments: Well in spite of the averted and interrupted attempts of a kiss..they now have the anticipation to hold them for a few hours until they will have the opportunity to have a lovely first kiss at the beach....and then they can "..drive off onto Sunset Blvd" [for those that watched the GLAAD awards, ya know who I'm quoting ;) ]



07/03/2008 , 09:30:43 AM
From: Seahurst
Comments: Anticipation...it's making me late...it's keeping me waiting. Carly Simon was right! LOL This is how I feel about your story! Thanks!



07/03/2008 , 09:48:20 AM
From: banana
Comments: Tina so sweet and shy. Sigh. I can imagine the life of a touring musician is a lonely one, especially for someone not given to casual encounters. I love the Tina-Shane friendship in this story, lots. Look forward to dinner with bated breath! I'm sure Bette will plan a date to remember.



07/03/2008 , 11:16:20 AM
From: BetteAndTinaForever
Comments: well, there's always time for more kisses, bring them on...i can't wait, my palms are sweating from excitement



07/03/2008 , 12:04:11 PM
From: coop
Comments: Shane is showing a bit of a resemblence to Alice. But, tonight, the beach, Bette, Tina, sunset that should be enough.



07/03/2008 , 14:42:47 PM
From: mightymouse
Comments: Uhhummm... I bet they'll redeem that almost kiss at the beach as the sun begins to set. The virtuoso is lonely and painfully shy. Hope their sunset date will give Tina more reasons to smile and come back to LA on her break. They are starting to hit the right notes together, SK! Huge thanks again for this post! Btw, I'm glad you're not pissed I blew your cover. When I figured it out, I couldn't resist sharing it; it was too funny. LOL! Don't worry, other writers use different screen names too. I don't know if you noticed but you already have a bunch of regular readers. And for whatever it's worth, I think this is a unique, interesting, lovely, thoroughly enjoyable and well-written story, just like your first one and GTKY. Thank you for taking time to write and share in between your work and studies. More, SK, more!!! :)



07/03/2008 , 14:50:27 PM
From: momadukes
Comments: Wow Sunkissed this is really good, I started reading yesterday morning and had to keep sneeking in to get a little more. I sneek back often to look for updates. Thank you, Md



07/03/2008 , 16:30:35 PM
From: beachlife
Comments: is it time for their date yet? :)PPS



07/03/2008 , 19:45:21 PM
From: phyl
Comments: This is a really good story.



07/03/2008 , 20:03:39 PM
From: dannylc
Comments: I think that Shane has perfect timing.Good things come to those who wait.That first kiss on the beach will be waybetter than in that ole hotel room. Great story. PPS



07/03/2008 , 20:11:22 PM
From: toby4ever
Comments: I love this story. Tina just starting to experience the passion that she has missed most of her life with being a prodegy and Bette sensitively pursuing her. Makes for one good story in my books!



07/03/2008 , 22:06:25 PM
From: pattifloatn
Comments: Oh man, that would have been a sight to see, Tina laying on Shane's bed with her head tilted back. Bette and Tina bring on crackling tension when they are in the same room. That non- kiss was shiver producing for me, I can only guess what it did to Bette or Tina. Can't wait for their dinner date.



07/04/2008 , 12:04:33 PM
From: 2bU
Comments: I love this story! Can't wait for their date. Post soon, please:D



07/05/2008 , 11:12:07 AM
From: hawkchic
Comments: OMG, how did Shane's timing get off like that...so very close to kissing...I can't wait until dinner at the beach. I think Bette is going to show Tina just why she should spend her off time in LA instead of Chapel Hill.



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