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Comments:Leave Comment (pop up window) 03/22/2008 , 08:57:12 AMFrom: kbergin47 Comments: Perfect!! Very well written. More please.  03/22/2008 , 09:31:03 AM From: ayesha23 Comments: nice start. bette is so cute when she is insecure or unsure. And you captured so well how only Tina reads her so well and has the ability to quell those insecurities in Bette. pps 03/22/2008 , 09:31:46 AM From: dannylc Comments: It's off to a good start. I look forward to the next installment. 03/22/2008 , 09:57:51 AM From: beachlife Comments: good start, the akwardness... tina getting angie ready, while bette makes dinner role reversal... Please continue... :) 03/22/2008 , 10:12:24 AM From: lovelyangel Comments: Great start. Hope you continue soon. 03/22/2008 , 10:23:55 AM From: azmama Comments: Sweet beginning. I can't believe that IC didn't show us a few minutes of the family getting resituated in the house. 03/22/2008 , 10:27:52 AM From: toby4ever Comments: Excellent! Great insight as to the dynamics of what that night must have felt like for both of them. 03/22/2008 , 11:07:17 AM From: Nanc Comments: ''fully experiencing a new and filling sensation. Happiness.'' - cute! 03/22/2008 , 11:07:51 AM From: honda90 Comments: Wonderful start!!! 03/22/2008 , 11:33:17 AM From: banana Comments: This was great! Perfectly imagined, every detail just right. Thank you! 03/22/2008 , 11:43:00 AM From: geekygal Comments: Yes, please write more soon. 03/22/2008 , 12:08:06 PM From: akalittlered Comments: Great Start!!!! I like the fact that Bette is going to make them dinner. I can not wait to read more. Thank you PPS 03/22/2008 , 12:54:04 PM From: hawkchic Comments: Bette is adorable when she is being vulnerable and insecure. And I adore how only Tina seems to be able to read her and set her right. Fantabulous start of a gooey loving story! 03/22/2008 , 14:26:02 PM From: OneStorm1 Comments: Great post. 03/22/2008 , 14:26:09 PM From: rufus Comments: "Romance and gooeyness and emotional development." In other words, everything that's missing on the show. You're off to a wonderful start and I can't wait for more! 03/22/2008 , 14:34:06 PM From: without labels Comments: It was really nice, but why short??Continue please. 03/22/2008 , 15:03:15 PM From: dragspel Comments: You can't leave us hanging like that! I was desperate to see how this scene played out on screen and was really disappointed that IC didn't follow it through. But now we have you to do it for us instead. So, more please!! 03/22/2008 , 17:27:46 PM From: kaseyhardbody Comments: Very enjoyable start... I can't wait to read more.. I love a good romance 03/22/2008 , 18:45:31 PM From: momadukes Comments: Great start, if I were Bette I would run in the kitchen and make that stir fry, look what happened last time. Md 03/22/2008 , 19:30:52 PM From: valenkat7 Comments: Great start...more please! 03/23/2008 , 00:51:04 AM From: Rau Comments: yeah [pout] where's the rest of the chapter... 03/23/2008 , 13:34:10 PM From: Dainty Comments: Liked this alot. Yeah, Bette cooking dinner, her skills have improved in that area, so she should do well with dinner, hopefully. She is a bit unsure about what she should be doing. It will go well, because they love each other and as in most things that is the key ingredient in anything one wants to do. PPS 03/24/2008 , 14:15:47 PM From: brigbeach6 Comments: Very Nice...hoping you will continue! |
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