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"I...", Richard stammered.

"Listen. I’m going to make this very simple for you. Ok? You do not look at Tina. You do not touch Tina. And you especially do not kiss Tina! Am I clear?"

He silently nodded his head. Hating to be dressed down by a woman but as the booze fog cleared his mind he knew he deserved it. He imagined that his face must have shown his immediate regret because Bette’s features softened as she looked at him. She slowly invaded his space and brought her eyes within inches of his. "I know this has been a very emotional time for you, Richard. Losing Faye. And now we have Cora." She put a hand on his shoulder and smiled. A smile he gratefully returned. She quickly brought her knee up to his groin. "But I don’t give a damn. Pull yourself together." The quickness of her movements delivered the desired affect. Her primary goal was to shock him. The pain was just a bonus. He doubled over in agony, coughing harshly. He slumped helplessly to the floor as Bette walked away. Leaving him to his shock and pain and regret.

TBC




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02/18/2008 , 11:08:54 AM
From: SydneyWade
Comments: I tell ya...don't mess with Bette! I guess Richard had to learn the hard way. Glad to see that Tina was able to give Cora some comfort. Let's just hope she sticks around long enough to talk to them. Great chapter.



02/18/2008 , 11:10:07 AM
From: SHAZ
Comments: You show him Bette, great story but so sad about Cora finding about her mum, lets hope B&T will be able to helep her. Please post again soon.



02/18/2008 , 11:26:40 AM
From: kbergin47
Comments: Go AlphaBette!! That had me in stitches. Have a great time in Florida.



02/18/2008 , 12:17:46 PM
From: OneStorm1
Comments: You go Bette let Rich know who in is charge. Hopefully Tina comforting Cora will make her feel safe enough to stick around long enough to hear everything she need to about her mom and the danger from her father. Please let her feel the love and trust B&T to help her get out of the world she has been living in. I hope Richard learned his lesson and gets back to business before he lets her fathers people get the chance to find Cora.



02/18/2008 , 12:32:40 PM
From: superdaddy
Comments: this story was missed and enjoyed on the 1st posting since so LONG ago!!! PPS!!!!



02/18/2008 , 13:04:58 PM
From: jb621
Comments: Great post and let me know how our boys are doing in FLA. Go TIGERS!! PS.



02/18/2008 , 13:12:46 PM
From: jp22
Comments: Oooh, Richard so had that coming. He's been taking way too many liberties, and that should put him right, the idiot. I really like how well Tina did with Cora. Bette's right to be proud. Thanks for the post + have fun in the sun, red. cheers!



02/18/2008 , 13:18:30 PM
From: Dainty
Comments: Wonderful chapter and so happy Tina was able to comfort Cora to some extent, just hope she does not run away from them before hearing everything. So glad that Bette helped Richard learn to keep his damned mits off Tina. She is totally and completely off limits t him and anyone else. No matter how justified and innocent he thinks his actions are. I'm sure Tina will also break his left testicle when she gets the opportunity as well. As grown up as Cora thinks she is she still needs to listen to them and take their advice about protecting her from all the dangerous people looking for her. Have a great time in Florida and come back with reneewed vigor and we wait with great anticipation for the next chapters. Post when you can.



02/18/2008 , 13:22:29 PM
From: rufus
Comments: Mission accomplished, AlphaBette, at least as far as pesky Richard is concerned. Thanks for the update, and have a great time in Florida.



02/18/2008 , 13:53:27 PM
From: ntnrml61
Comments: woohoo..go Bette kick his ass for messin with your woman...i hope your nest post wont be so long...but i will wait ;-)



02/18/2008 , 15:44:38 PM
From: trecelovinit
Comments: Woohoo!!



02/18/2008 , 19:52:29 PM
From: pattifloatn
Comments: Have fun in the sunny state of Florida, just hope those tornados stay away. The Tigers look ready to go. Bette sure let Richard know that Tina was off limits to him. He is lucky that Bette did not remove his eyes or cut off his hand.



02/19/2008 , 00:53:37 AM
From: bettyvhall
Comments: Bette is very protect of Tina and I guess Richard felt it. That was bad for Richard but good for Bette thanks



02/20/2008 , 02:35:48 AM
From: Bailey
Comments: Poor Cora. I fear she is in for a long and painful recovery. Hopefully TiBette will be there for her. Thanks for the update :)



02/20/2008 , 05:45:43 AM
From: Rau
Comments: Go, go have a wonderfully warm holiday.



02/22/2008 , 21:46:42 PM
From: hawkchic
Comments: I am so glad that Tina was able to reach Cora. I hope that Bette and Tina can help her through the rough time ahead. Richard had every bit of Bette's punishment to him coming and probably then some. I hope he realizes that is actually a small price to pay for the disrespect he showed both Tina and Bette. Fantastic chapter!



03/02/2008 , 13:59:20 PM
From: ut
Comments: Yeah Richard don't mess with Bette, you gonna regret it, Bette is awesome, good move girl. Poor Cora but glad Tina is there with her. Please post more, thanks!



03/12/2008 , 21:44:35 PM
From: lucybelly
Comments: "The pain was just a bonus." Love that! Can't blame Richard for his attraction to Tina, but gotta love Bette for showing her kick-ass side. Powerful emotions with another wonderful chapter. Enjoy your time in Florida. I don't know where the Tigers train, but I'm in Naples and the weather could not be better! Look forward to seeing where you take Cora and the story.



03/26/2008 , 12:42:47 PM
From: Anngie Mosby
Comments: Another fantastic chapter Red! I love this story and can't wait until you get back so you can send us some more! Loved the line about the pain just being a bonus - Richard should know better than to get touchy feely with Bette's woman! Mooooore please please please???!!!!



04/27/2008 , 11:35:57 AM
From: mlyn0325
Comments: Where are you? I love this story so much, I've read it three times and it always stops here. Please come back and finish it soon.



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