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She closed her eyes and concentrated on the feeling that followed the trail of her fingers. She worked her hand higher up her arm, moving silently over her bruises, reaching her shoulder she suddenly stopped.

 

"Angelica was here."

 

Bette watched in wonder as Tina placed her hand in the crook of her neck. "I felt her in my arms."

 

Astonished, all Bette could do was silently nod.

 

"She was cradling up against me, sleeping, with her little head on my neck. I felt it."

 

Bette saw the emotion that swept across Tina's face when she spoke of their daughter.

 

Tina continued to move her fingers up, across her neck and shoulder. Moving them silently across her chin, up over her nose and eyes, gently touching her forehead. The only sound heard was the occasional whimper of pain, when her fingers swept across her injuries.

 

Suddenly Tina stopped what she was doing and blinked her eyes open. She still wasn't used to the light, the excessive blinking and frowning was still ever-present. She turned and faced Bette.

 

"I heard you. Talking, I mean. I heard your voice."

 

Bette stood glued to her spot.

 

"You said you wanted to tell me something". Tina shyly looked up at Bette.

 

This was the moment she had been waiting for. This was it. Damn it, it shouldn't be this hard.

 

Bette took a deep breath before speaking.

 

"I wanted to tell you that-."

 

"Bette?"

 

"- that I love you".

 

Tina couldn't respond. She shook her head, willing the tears to go away, but they weren't.

 

Bette, was in turn, beginning to tear up again. "I'm in love with you."

 

She had taken a step towards the crying Tina. She didn't even know she was doing it, or how; someone else was making her walk towards her. Before she knew it she was standing right there, right beside her.

 

"You're the love of my life."

 

Bette sat down on the bed, taking hold of Tina's hand.

 

"I can't live without you."

 

Bette was smiling and crying. She didn't know what to expect. She was finally saying what she felt, her deepest truest emotions.

 

"You're the only person I wanted to tell."

 

Bette cupped Tina's cheeks with both her hands ever so slightly, gently rubbing her thumb against the smoothness of her skin. She leaned in and rested her forehead against Tina's. Tears were silently falling from their eyes. Time seemed to stand still, neither one knowing how long it would last.

 

Tina broke her long silence and softly whispered.

 

"I've never stopped loving you."

 

A sudden intake of breath followed. Tina felt Bette's body stiffen and felt her hot tears fall against her chest. Bette's crying was so silent you almost couldn't hear her, but Tina knew; she felt Bette tremble against her body.  

 

"With all my heart."

 

Bette opened her eyes and stared straight into Tina's.

 

"I'm still yours."

 

Tina's eyes were alive and sparkling. She was smiling. The look. That look. Bette knew. She saw it. Her heart was soaring. The emptiness she had felt was leaving her. The love she once had felt was finding its way back in. They were home. They were back. They were together.

 

As if she knew what she was thinking, Tina looked into Bette's eyes, speaking softly.

 

"Always and forever".

 

And with one silent breath Tina leaned in and whispered.

 

"Come here".

 

 

THE END




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08/05/2007 , 15:24:34 PM
From: andreaulens
Comments: i'm sad to see this come to an end and i can't wait for the sequel because you still haven't revealed what happend to tina. And ofcourse i want some great B&T moments ;0)



08/05/2007 , 15:38:48 PM
From: September
Comments: I just started reading this chapter and I'm really impressed. I'm hoping that I will find the time this week to start from the beginning. And not just the last chapter of a whole story. I can't wait to read more of your work. TY for letting us read it.



08/05/2007 , 15:45:05 PM
From: Eddy
Comments: Thanks that you has gotten over you writers block. Thanks for this great Story. I have worried about Tina's lives with Bette. I look forward on the coming stories. You spoke of a Sequel - I hope we hear in this who has attacked Tina so badly.



08/05/2007 , 15:48:21 PM
From: azmama
Comments: Wonderful storytelling. Please continue. I am glad that you're unblocked.



08/05/2007 , 15:49:30 PM
From: mc
Comments: Beautiful.



08/05/2007 , 15:50:02 PM
From: mc
Comments: Oh yeah, and a sequel sounds goood!



08/05/2007 , 16:01:02 PM
From: OneStorm1
Comments: Ditto, we need to know what crazed person did this to Tina. They need to be found, tortured, and then arrested and made to pay the price for what they did. Death penalty sounds good to me.



08/05/2007 , 16:26:43 PM
From: Akiracolorblind
Comments: OKAY! I'm really looking forward to a sequel because I want to know who the hell did this to Tina..I mean I love how it ended--it was really sweet and loving, but I need to know--WE need to know who did this to Tina!! I need answers!!! LOL Lovely ending!! PLEASE POST THE SEQUEL!!!!



08/05/2007 , 16:46:53 PM
From: Dainty
Comments: Sorry to ssee this one end but I will be waiting for the sequel. So happy they were able to give voice to their love. Just great. PPS



08/05/2007 , 16:56:44 PM
From: chelseagal
Comments: Okay Cerdi, you have been officially nominated as the devil, the best at leaving a few cliff hangers. And even in a final chapter you have managed to leave us all wanting me. So please post the sequel real soon !!.thanks for a wonderful story and I am glad that your writers block has been lifted.



08/05/2007 , 17:15:47 PM
From: brighteyez07
Comments: GREAT chapter, Excellent story.



08/05/2007 , 18:22:02 PM
From: Kword75
Comments: Great great great story, Cerdi! At so many levels! Thank you. And like the others, I think a sequel would be extremely welcome! I want to know what happened to Tina and I want Bette to hunt him down and make him regret ever touching one of her Tee's hair... Oh, and Chelseagal, you might want to re-read your comment, mate.. we, of course, know it's a typo, but that's quite funny... Not that we wouldn't all want you, but I guess that's not what you meant to say... ;)



08/05/2007 , 18:26:18 PM
From: bandtfan
Comments: Okay now Cerdi for all your evilness throughout this story you made up for it with this chapter. I actually teared up when reading the last part and even sighed at Tina's signature last words "Come Here". I hope you do return with a sequel or another story because even though stones were thrown I think we must all admit that we liked your cliffys. Before I read this last chapter I went back and reread all the others and I must say that you do have a way with words and each chapter flowed smoothly from one to the other. Sometimes it does take a near tradegy to realize what someome really does mean to you. Thanks again and will anxiously await your return.



08/05/2007 , 19:01:06 PM
From: akalittlered
Comments: Cerdi, That was great, but also very mean. We need to know who it was that hurt Tina. Please let there be a sequel. Great story. I love the way you write. Thanks



08/05/2007 , 19:57:43 PM
From: Floridagirl
Comments: Brilliant...I loved this story, you have me on the edge of my seat through the entire story. I am so happy! She is alive, awake, and Tibette have found each other ...again. The only thing you could change would be that you ended it. Will be waiting for a sequel and any other stories. Thank you.



08/05/2007 , 20:36:31 PM
From: BetteAndTinaForever
Comments: i love happy endings :)



08/05/2007 , 20:50:48 PM
From: Braz
Comments: :) Congratulations! Thia was great! :)



08/05/2007 , 21:56:15 PM
From: Seahurst
Comments: This was wonderful...although it really feels like it is just the end of Part 1. There are still so many questions, that will hopefully be answered in Part 2? Thanks!!!!



08/05/2007 , 22:15:23 PM
From: lucybelly
Comments: Absolutely perfect! What a great story from start to finish... well, hopefully not finish. So happy you came back to it and will anxiously await the sequel. Thanks for a great read!



08/05/2007 , 22:50:08 PM
From: AmandaMG
Comments: i had to re-read all of the chapters... i'm glad she woke up and all was well... but who the hell was responsibe for this... i hope your writing a sequel as i am typing this... please come back some



08/05/2007 , 23:20:36 PM
From: hope4tb
Comments: Thanks for the ride .... I had my doubts along the way but I'm glad I stayed in it with you!! AWESOME writing... I'm sure you don't remember but once upon a time at Disneyland (and before Disneyworld) you needed tickets to ride and this was definately an E Ticket ride!!!! Thank you can't wait to read the sequel and find out who did this and how he/she is going to be caught!!!!! Again truly WONDERFUL writing and a great story - you had me all the way to the end - glad it is a HAPPY ending!!!!



08/06/2007 , 04:15:56 AM
From: jp22
Comments: Lovely, lovely, lovely. Great way to end the story... but I'm with the others: sequel, please! Thanks for the post Cerdi, I hope you're back to writing soon.



08/06/2007 , 07:34:18 AM
From: Jwet
Comments: Oh my God, Oh my God, Oh my God the perfect end. I can see how you could put this thought in your mind and want to express it. You had me so wrapped in your tell of the Glorious story. Thanks and I pray there will be a sequal I still have so many unanswered questions.



08/06/2007 , 09:35:16 AM
From: Kendra35
Comments: I want moooooooore!



08/06/2007 , 11:37:08 AM
From: Skipton
Comments: looking forward to a continuation and thanks for this.



08/06/2007 , 14:32:55 PM
From: Rau
Comments: yes!!!!! perfect ending...thank you



08/06/2007 , 16:30:21 PM
From: coop
Comments: I'm gonna cry. Sequels sound good, more stories please.



08/06/2007 , 16:47:12 PM
From: majhouvilica
Comments: Thank you for this amazing story Cerdi. Looking forward to the sequel... After this I vow to religiously follow all your stories. =)



08/06/2007 , 16:54:22 PM
From: Probie
Comments: That was a great story, although I would have like to see the person that harmed Tina get caught and go to prison. Hopefully you will right an espilogue letting us now how B&T did after the hospital and tie up any loose endings.



08/07/2007 , 14:55:06 PM
From: pattifloatn
Comments: I will always associate "come here" with Bette and Tina. Thanks for allowing them to finally open up to their love. Bring on the next story.



08/07/2007 , 22:09:28 PM
From: miamigrl
Comments: What a spectacular ending. I will be looking forward to the Sequel. I'm intrigued as to who would want to hurt Tina that badly!



08/20/2007 , 14:35:38 PM
From: anker
Comments: Okay.... Cerdi.. my gaymo... You told me somewhere else that you no longer have doubts. What can I say, my sweet... if you'll write me a story like this one once or twice a year you'll have me forever. This story... this last chapter... wow!!!! So beautiful... so emotional... so true. I cannot tell you how happy it makes me that you made a promise to come back with another story... cause I know it will be great. So.... see you soon, right? Right there on the bridge? Thank you for this!



09/09/2007 , 16:35:24 PM
From: ut
Comments: Happy to see the happy ending but sad its ending. Hope you will have a sequel for us soon. Thanks for a wonderful story and hope to see more, thanks!



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