”She said and instead of shaking her hand, she leaned over and kissed one cheek and then the other in a gesture of affection.Tina was a bit taken aback, from the tingles that ran up her spine as much as the gesture itself.
Bette likewise questioned why she got slightly light headed from the action.
07/19/2007 ,
00:41:02 AM From:
ZLFan Comments:
LIke i say with all Tibette stories, Jody HAS TO GO!!! He is an ass...great update! Please continue with the story. I love it already1
07/19/2007 ,
01:00:28 AM From:
Audi Comments:
Jody is a dick. Wonder what the deal with the daughter thing is.. does Tina have an ex lurking? Did she have some romantic entanglement with Marina too? Hope Jody is out of the picture soon. Even if B/T have a slower burn.. that guy is just a disgusting golddigger.
07/19/2007 ,
01:40:25 AM From:
Braz Comments:
Hehehe I almost felt sorry for Jody...Such an asshole! Great...Great story darling. ppS! And, here in Brazil, we kiss three times on the chicks in a gesture of affection...
07/19/2007 ,
03:10:38 AM From:
jp22 Comments:
I think Jody's sensed somehow that he's on his way out already, hence the hissy fit. And I'm sure someone that dismissive and proprietary towards his wife has other marriage-ending issues as well, so I hope Jody doesn't get a penny after the impending divorce. ;) Post soon, Robi.
07/19/2007 ,
03:30:05 AM From:
yws Comments:
I love the fact that Bette is Latina in the story! PPS.
07/19/2007 ,
06:44:54 AM From:
darkhawkdown1 Comments:
Hello Robi Cheau, I have really enjoyed the first few chapters of this new story. As a fellow writer I can understand how hard it is to get motivated especially when a story is particularly challenging to write, but it is these challenging pieces that help us reach those creative treasures buried within our literary souls... keep up the amazing work and I cannot wait for further stories from you. PPS, Sincerely, JC
07/19/2007 ,
07:11:37 AM From:
OneStorm1 Comments:
Glad Bette is taking some control back where her career is concerned. She and Tina really seemed to click. Jody is just an opportunist and wants to syphon as much money and prestige off Bette as he can.
07/19/2007 ,
07:12:21 AM From:
Lamentamini Comments:
Jody is a royal asshole. Tina's little girl will probably have Bette wrapped around her little finger. :D
07/19/2007 ,
08:50:35 AM From:
pattifloatn Comments:
So Tina is not talking about Marina, wonder why. Yes Jody needs to take a hike because of the way that he treats Bette. Bette and Tina can have the baby that Bette wants so bad. Can not wait for more of this story.
07/19/2007 ,
09:10:15 AM From:
Probie Comments:
Very nice, but how fast can we get rid of Jody. He sounds like bad news. I'm sure he won't make it easy for B&T.
07/19/2007 ,
09:31:17 AM From:
brighteyez07 Comments:
Great update, really like the writting. I hope u can post soon.
07/19/2007 ,
10:15:08 AM From:
kbergin47 Comments:
This was a great chapter. Jody needs to take a hike!! PPS!
07/19/2007 ,
10:29:21 AM From:
robbeedee Comments:
Hiya Robi, Strange to read about Bette's husband and lack of realtionship between them. More fabulous wasd the introduction of Tina and how she is already feeling the tingle between them. Good to see she was upfront about who she is and her daughter. Many possiblities as their connection builds. Can't hardly wait. Please continue soon. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
07/19/2007 ,
10:29:24 AM From:
robbeedee Comments:
Hiya Robi, Strange to read about Bette's husband and lack of realtionship between them. More fabulous wasd the introduction of Tina and how she is already feeling the tingle between them. Good to see she was upfront about who she is and her daughter. Many possiblities as their connection builds. Can't hardly wait. Please continue soon. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
07/19/2007 ,
11:18:18 AM From:
Christy Comments:
So you have a small crush on Gabby? I wonder what she is doing now? My partner's legs turned to jelly when we saw her in the clubhouse at Hilton Head during the Family Circle cup one year. She got a great picture though and loves to tell the story. So, of course I am loving this story as it brings back my younger years of following the WTA and all the gossip it generated.
07/19/2007 ,
12:08:20 PM From:
coop Comments:
Just caught up with this story. LIke the twist with the names and characters. Jody so needs to go. Just know Bette is gonna fall for Tina's daughter,along with the mother. Hey, ZLFAN,if you can comment you can write, were waiting. Please
07/19/2007 ,
14:41:45 PM From:
Milovich Comments:
Tina should kick Jodi`s ass! Jodi sucks!Bette and Tina all the way! Great chapter and please post more soon
07/19/2007 ,
19:09:22 PM From:
gigi1976 Comments:
Maybe Bette and Marina will have a sowdown on the court, spurred on by their mutual desire to have Tina - winner take all!! LOL. PPS
07/21/2007 ,
16:26:58 PM From:
chelseagal Comments:
Robi .... you can write so just bring it on... This will be one good Tibette story and having Bette in a relationship with a man certainly mixes it up.So dont worry you are doing great and please continue you are doing great.BTW... Jodi has to go and real soon !!!!
10/21/2007 ,
19:08:41 PM From:
ut Comments:
Cute about B&T, jody is an ass!