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“You don’t think its important ? “Bette smiled

 

“Its not everything no “

“I agree its about friendship and affection and being there for the other person “

 

“Do you think its about feeling safe with your lover ?” he asked slowly reeling her in

 

“Ollie - shut up “ Tina could feel her fear rising in her throat

 

“Of course it is “ Bette replied

 

“You would never hurt Tina ?”

 

Bette went red “I resent the accusation - I would never harm a single hair on her head “

 

“What about the other way round ?”

“What ?”

 

“I am sure you have been told what a bastard I am -how I left Tina when she was suffering from post-natal depression “

 

“Pretty much “

 

Ollie pulled his shirt out of his trousers

 

“Ollie “ Tina almost begged “Don’t “

 

Bette was lost - what the hell was going on ?

 

Ollie pulled his shirt open and Bette saw a knife scar just below his right nipple

 

“Ask me who gave me that ?” he challenged

 

“You’re a cop “

“No - closer to home - just don’t annoy Tina when she is drunk and has a knife in her hand “

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07/03/2007 , 11:22:16 AM
From: coop
Comments: Its not going to let Bette feel any less for Tina, though she may have some questions. I'm still having a hard time trying to figure out where all of Ollie's anamosity came from. He's got his life and his boyfriend, why is he so determind to destroy Tina's happiness.



07/03/2007 , 11:31:15 AM
From: blackcaro
Comments: Well Good Work T i think i wold go more south and cut his..Brainholder and i dont need to be drunk for this....I love these Story....



07/03/2007 , 11:48:10 AM
From: Catb
Comments: At least Tina got one good stab in.



07/03/2007 , 13:17:25 PM
From: funnyone
Comments: Too bad she didn't stick it up his ass. And the snide bastard can't be that concerned (neither was the court that granted their divorce) or he would be fighting for custody. Here's hoping Paul knocks some sense into him or leaves his sorry ass to suffer in solitude.



07/03/2007 , 13:36:43 PM
From: jp22
Comments: FFS, Ollie is *such* a prat. Completely loathsome. Really, just *what* is his malfunction? He's got his cake, can't he just eat the bloody thing, and let Tina be? And yeah, I agree with funnyone, if it was such a big problem, the courts would've taken the kids and granted that jumped-up little fart custody of the girls. GAH. *Decompresses* Right, glad you had a nice time, and it's good to see you back. Cheers



07/03/2007 , 13:40:01 PM
From: albeez
Comments: what an ass. glad you had a very good time. thanks.



07/03/2007 , 13:54:49 PM
From: andreaulens
Comments: oeps that was a low stab from ollie i wonder how bette will react..i'm happy you had a great weekend i wish you two all the best !!!!



07/03/2007 , 14:16:39 PM
From: azmama
Comments: Glad you're happy and smiling after your rendezvous w/Cheryl. I'd be scared to see what s/l you'd develop if you were in a bad or sad mood. ;-) PPS.



07/03/2007 , 15:06:43 PM
From: chelseagal
Comments: That guys is such a dumb ass and a king size prat.... as he really does not know that this will not amek a difference in their relationship.Great story ... pps



07/03/2007 , 15:14:20 PM
From: akalittlered
Comments: WOW!!! Did not see that comming!!!! Great CHapter



07/03/2007 , 15:42:14 PM
From: Keisha
Comments: Obv this man has got some beef with Bette!, and this thing rofl, I duno why Im laughin coz stabbin someone is no joke, but his Jacka$$ probably deserved it. Post sooon.



07/03/2007 , 15:49:22 PM
From: StormyOne
Comments: My gosh I have missed this story. Glad to hear you had a good time though.. Ollie probably deserved the knife wound, but feels great in keeping Tina guilty about it. Power to Bette and Tina.



07/03/2007 , 16:07:39 PM
From: Lamentamini
Comments: Shit I thought he was going to whip out his pecker. =O Hopefully none of the kids will run in and see what is going on. Glad you had a great time on your trip. :)



07/03/2007 , 16:43:12 PM
From: Audi
Comments: Are we going to get alcoholic Tina? Dealing with the pain by pouring herself some brandy on an empty stomach. Weilding a knife drunk. Sounds like a bad custodial environment for the kids. So I hope there is some other explanation. I hate Ollie.. but still.



07/03/2007 , 17:30:09 PM
From: Kendra35
Comments: Fucking jerk.



07/03/2007 , 19:43:55 PM
From: trecelovinit
Comments: Great update! Can't understand why Ollie holds so much animosity towards Tina and her newfound relationship with Bette.



07/03/2007 , 19:55:40 PM
From: Dainty
Comments: Ollie is a bastard personified. He should not have done that to Tina, and maybe she should have slipped the knife a bit lower and she could have made him sing soprano for the rest of his life. The asshole.



07/03/2007 , 20:52:12 PM
From: Anngie Mosby
Comments: Does Ollie really think that Bette would believe for even half a second, that Tina (even with a knife) is any kind of threat against Ollie, a 6ft cop - with a GUN? I'm sure it was either an accident or Ollie totally deserved it. Tina was probably defending herself. Try as he might he's not going to come between them. BIG question here Ally...WHY? Why is he so determined to cause problems? Why doesn't he like Bette? Why doesn't he want Tina to be happy??? I just don't get it. He went about leaving Tina the wrong way (he should have left Tina before he started seeing Paul) and now he's going about "letting Tina live her own life now" in the most completely absurd manner. He's very sinister...sneaking around the house...I wouldn't take my eye's off of him for a second if I were Bette. It's almost like he has some sort of vendetta against Tina and of her finding any kind of peace and/or happiness. Why is he lurking around the house instead of outside enjoying Hannah's birthday? It's like, he knows he's the bad guy here; and so does everyone else...including his children...poor little Becky, pleading with Bette to not let Ollie mess up Hannah's day...like Ollie has caused problems before at previous family gatherings. I really think that Bette will have Tina's back 100% here. If I were Tina, I would arrange the children exchanges through Shane or someone so I wouldn't have to have any contact at all with Ollie...something is not right with him...I have to wonder if he would cause harm to one of the children, he is so malignant. Great post Ally! Glad you had fun over your special weekend - love that you've got a goofy grin on your face! PPS Ally!



07/03/2007 , 21:16:32 PM
From: gigi1976
Comments: Yeah for Ally!! Boo for Ollie!! What is this guys deal? I hate to say this but I'm kinda glad Tina got at least one good jab in. This guy "beats" her up constantly...anyway, glad you had a good time. I've read a bunch of stories tonight so I'm leaving off here and will pick up with your other post manya!!



07/03/2007 , 22:30:02 PM
From: gogk
Comments: Well i will love make him next scar! what a bastard! i hope Bette give him a lesson of love, understanding and support! welcome back is so good to know that you have a good time!



07/04/2007 , 02:22:27 AM
From: mette hartmann
Comments: I´m sure Bette would want to hear that story, but I don´t believe it´ll harm their relationship . . however a little harm to Ollie wouldn´t be too much to ask . . would it. I mean you don´t have to actually kill him, but that bouncing castle has got to be good for something.



07/04/2007 , 04:44:30 AM
From: OneStorm1
Comments: He is such a dick! Tina was depressed at the time, but she needs to have a serious sit down with Bette and tell her everything. I hope she got therapy after that incident. What am I saying of course she did because dickhead would have probably tried to sue for custody if she hadden't.



07/05/2007 , 09:19:28 AM
From: prasnil
Comments: oh gosh! I know its not gonna make a difference to Bette.



07/05/2007 , 18:24:34 PM
From: Rau
Comments: ollie's just a shit who shouldn't be allowed near his children, becky is right!!!



07/24/2007 , 21:47:47 PM
From: ut
Comments: Holy shit, well he deserved and hope Paul will kick his ass to get his brain back out of his ass!



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