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  They are a crazy couple.  Alice is so odd sometimes but I still love her.  So does my mom.  She says the weirdest things sometimes.  And my Aunt Dana, you have to love her.  She is so sweet and kind.  She is so thoughtful.  A few years ago, she had a scare with breast cancer and that ended her career in the pro circuit but, she was a professional tennis player.  Anyways, for the past 2 years, she has been speaking out because she is sorta a public figure being a tennis player and all.  She teaches people about breast cancer and the screening process and stuff.  It is actually pretty cool.  Everyone thinks that she is sorta dumb sometimes because sometimes she just says things without thinking but, I think she is actually very smart and very thoughtful and she is one of the strongest women I know. 

 

Moving on…we have your mother, and my mother…whom we both know now.  You know my mom a bit from what I have told you, but you are just going to have to wait and see…figure her out for yourself.  She is a great mom.  Anyways, moving on…we have my Aunt Kit…

 

“Yea, she is awesome!”

 

“Yea, you know her from her music career, but she is so much more than the singer…she also owns this café here and my mom and I go there all the time.  My Aunt Alice is basically there every day.  Oh my gosh, I just thought of something…you have to come to Sunday brunch tomorrow.  It is tradition.  Ok, this will be so good, you can meet our aunts because all of them will be there and then, your mom can see all her old friends.  This will be good.  Getting more and more excited, Chrissy continued…Oh, and then after they all know that your mom is back in town, I am sure that Alice will be dying to help us with our plan.  I know she is older, but she still acts like a kid sometimes and she will be a good partner to help us in Operation Kennard-Porter.”

 

“Operation Kennard-Porter?”

 

“Yea, I just came up with it…like it?”

 

“yea, that is a pretty good name for it.  After all, that is our final goal isn’t it?”

 

“Exactly!  Anyways…oh this will be great!  Ok ok, so then we have Aunt Shane.  She is the cool one.  She is always so chill.  My mom always brings her in when I don’t want to talk to her about things. I don’t know how she does it but Shane always gets me to talk about what is bothering me.  She is freaking amazing.  And she hardly says anything.  It is actually quite weird if you stop to think about it.  How can someone get you talking about some things without even talking to you?  Yea, it is odd… Anyways, she is married to Carmen. 

 

Carmen is pretty awesome.  She is pregnant right now with their first baby.  She used to be a DJ but now she works in this music production studio.  It is a pretty awesome job.  She gets paid some big bucks to chill out with music stars.”

 

 

“That kinda sounds like my mom’s job…although she hangs out with movie stars.” Lizzy said proudly.

 

“I know that is awesome.  We are so going to have to go to work with your mom one of these days.  Maybe she can introduce us to some stars.”

 

“Yea, that would be cool.  After we finish with ‘Operation Kennard-Porter’ then we can move on to schmoozing my mom into letting us come to work with her.”

 

“Yea, good idea.”

 

“God Chrissy, this is so amazing.  It is still just so hard to believe.  I mean, I go from having my mom and Annie to having a whole family with a zillion aunts.  I mean, before, in New York, it was just us and then there was my Aunt Helena, but she stopped coming around after my mom dumped her a while ago.”

 

“Well, you are going to love it…we have a really great family.”

 

Lizzy rested her head on Chrissy’s shoulder, instinctively, Chrissy rested her head on Lizzy’s. 

 

“Chrissy?”

 

“Yea?”

 

“I love you…there is no one else I would rather have as a sister.”

 

“Yea, I love you too.”

 

Both girls drifted to sleep, clutching the photograph, dreaming about their family and all the wonderful times they were sure would come, regardless of what their mothers decided to do, they both knew that there was no force that could stop them from having the family they always dreamed of…nothing…not even their stubborn mothers…

 

 

TBC…




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06/30/2007 , 15:01:40 PM
From: akshay
Comments: Such an awesome story. You just reminded me how old I really am when you wrote that you were in elementary school when the first Harry potter came out. I'm crying on the inside. LOL Please post soon. I can't wait to see everyone being introduced to Lizzy.



06/30/2007 , 15:12:37 PM
From: andreaulens
Comments: great chapter!! i just loved it ! so i read your a fellow HP fan, i know what you mean when you say you coudn't stop reading so your forgiven ;0) but plz post again very soon !!



06/30/2007 , 15:21:44 PM
From: Keisha
Comments: thas cute, altho lizzy and chrissy, their confusin me already, which one is who's daugther? its chrissy-bette, and lizzy-tina right? or the odda way round, see this is why I couldnt have twins roflmfao, post soon



06/30/2007 , 15:23:40 PM
From: chelseagal
Comments: ZL... what can I say other than "outstanding" and exceptional writing... You did not fail me and I enjoyed more than word can express every bit of this chapter.Please post soon ..And by the way glad that you have stopped disagreeing with Chicki and I :-)



06/30/2007 , 15:23:54 PM
From: ninety9percentsure
Comments: Great Job!!!! Love the way Bette and Tina handle the telling of the sisters connection. Also love the sexual thoughts of Bette and Tina. Maybe a little making in the kitchen is what they both need. Please post soon!!! Cann't wait for the Sunday's brunch and Alice's reaction!!!!



06/30/2007 , 15:35:41 PM
From: azmama
Comments: This story is just delicious. I love it. PPS. The girls are wonderful.



06/30/2007 , 16:05:21 PM
From: kbergin47
Comments: Awesome chapter!!! Let Sunday brunch begin...



06/30/2007 , 16:11:05 PM
From: patpez
Comments: ZL may I say BRAVO!!! This was an awesome chapter,,,,,,loved the banter of all the women when B&T were telling thier daughters they were from the same donor and didnt beliieve it until T asked what was the name,,and BMA it hit them....and I love how you have both women thinging to themselves of how good each one looks and they want more after all this time aprt,,LOL,,loved it,,,



06/30/2007 , 16:17:47 PM
From: ayesha23
Comments: this is getting very interesting. what will all the aunts say when they see Tina again. eagerly awaiting the next chapter!!



06/30/2007 , 16:37:06 PM
From: akalittlered
Comments: Your story just keeps getting better and better. I can not wait to see what the girls come up with to get there mom's back together. I am so loving this. Wait until the gang see Tina and Lizzy. Thanks Great CHapter!!!!!!



06/30/2007 , 17:05:12 PM
From: Therese_Belivet
Comments: Wonderful ! This story is SO endearing, really, I mean it... One can literally feel the unbreakable connection between our favourite two, that's enthralling. Years passed only officially : feelings are timeless... and attraction too ! Such a great work you do with this lovely story, I truly adore it. And I simpy cannot wait for everything that will inevitably happen : the gang reunited, B&T boiling more and more, the new sisters conspiring... That's great ! Many, many thanks for this jewel ! ^_^



06/30/2007 , 19:04:56 PM
From: Probie
Comments: Too sweet, I kept thinking of the show with the twin sisters. Sister Sister. Let get Operation K-P underway, and I can wait for Alice to get herself involved.



06/30/2007 , 19:40:32 PM
From: ceetime
Comments: it was worth the wait. looking forward to the next post



06/30/2007 , 20:53:43 PM
From: Rau
Comments: 'not even their stubborn mothers'...lol...I'm sure their stubborn daughters will sort this out in no time at all... as for Harry Potter...wow...I took my 13 year old to the first film when he lived with me and that seems like aeons ago... and young people really do seem to love Harry Potter but he's into some other series...I can't even remember the name of them but I must and get him the next book for when I visit in July...he lives with his other mom now...we take turns about according to his wishes...very liberal or is it indulgent? I dunno...it works for us...anywayz pleasz post soon I'm hanging out wanting to see what happens next...I guess Alice will have a big hand in bringing the stubborn moms 2gether???!!! hint, hint.



06/30/2007 , 22:15:43 PM
From: Chicki
Comments: First I high five Chelsea!!! So glad we are in agreement hun *wink* ZL, you are one prolific writer. As this story progresses, your writing skills have developed more and more as you bring your readers through such a beautiful, funny, and endearing story. Thank you so much for putting the time you do into your writing, and sharing it with all of us. Please Post soon...PS: Loved Tina checking out Bette's ass. *Yummy*



06/30/2007 , 22:26:31 PM
From: Dimples
Comments: aaww sooo friggin cute =) i can't wait until they're one big happy family just the way it's suppose to be =)



06/30/2007 , 22:59:12 PM
From: McFracky
Comments: This story is "fracking awesome" and sugary sweet - I so didn't want this chapter to end. I especially enjoyed Tina checking out Bette's bum.



07/01/2007 , 00:20:22 AM
From: BetteAndTinaForever
Comments: nice, very nice...things are going good and with the girls and crazy aunts help, B&T will be back together in no time



07/01/2007 , 01:40:28 AM
From: kant_help_it
Comments: Hey ZL; you are such a great writer, I'm so enjoying this story. I think the girls should sneak downstairs to spy on their Moms as the tension builds over dinner.....maybe catchem in a lip lock...whaddya think??



07/01/2007 , 02:07:51 AM
From: mnj33pp
Comments: Operation Kennard Porter here we come and yes get alice's help. I hope b&t see the girls sleeping with the photo in there arms. Great chapter just please don't leave us waiting too long for the next one. thank you



07/01/2007 , 05:47:56 AM
From: Lamentamini
Comments: There's a new Harry Potter book coming out? I missed that one. I haven't read any of them nor have I seen any of the movies. I almost busted out laughing when Bette mentioned getting something going in the kitchen. xD



07/01/2007 , 08:55:25 AM
From: OneStorm1
Comments: OK first of all great chapter, the aunts are just going to love Lizzy and I know Alice will have a million schemes to get T & B back together. I know the authors of the fabulous fanfic have lives that don't revolve around writing so don't worry about the delay. You know that as long as you come back to this story from time to time we loyal readers will always continue to read. Do try to be gentle with our girls they have been trampled on enough for a while I think ;).Lots of us are HP fans as a matter of fact a group of friends and I are eagerly awaiting 7/11 so we can go to the debut of O of TP. We also can't wait to see what the end of this very entertaining series has in store for us. Hope to see another chapter soon.



07/01/2007 , 09:18:36 AM
From: brighteyez07
Comments: I so love the relationship between the girls, and B & T. I was curious though..marcus allens umm donation, wasn't it given to B & T as a couple. Thus making both their respective daughters umm both of theirs? I remember Bettes argument with Tina after finding out she was pregnant.



07/01/2007 , 12:24:32 PM
From: gigi1976
Comments: Great update ZL! Can't wait for aunt Alice to get into the act! Maybe cousin charlie is a chip off the old block and can add to the hilarity that will surely ensue! PPS



07/01/2007 , 12:58:19 PM
From: bandtfan
Comments: ZL, fantastic update! I know that B&T have alot of talking to do, but you can see that the love is still there. I can't wait to see the aunts surprise when they see Tina and Lizzy, especially if they are with Bette and Chrissy. WOW, that is going to be some scene. Don't worry about how long it is between updates because your story and your writing are worth any wait. Thanks as always.



07/01/2007 , 19:02:10 PM
From: t-boz
Comments: Very cool. Can't wait for your next post. It'll be some Reunion, that's for sure!



07/02/2007 , 14:24:40 PM
From: coop
Comments: Can we join operation Kennard-Porter? Though I truly believe that with your help our girls can figure it out on they're own. they so need to show up Sunday for brunch, but without telling anyone. Damn, you need to post soooooooooooooooooon.



07/22/2007 , 21:06:39 PM
From: ut
Comments: Love this story and love Chrissy and Lizzy!



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