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Title: When You're Gone ~ Chapter 10
Author: ZLFan  [ Send a Private Message ]
Copyright: ZLFan 2007
Content Rating: PG
Disclaimer: As Usual...The girls belong to Ilene Chaiken and Showtime...the others are ALL MINE!!!
Author's Note: Hello everyone!

I must apologize for getting this up so late. There is something you should probably know about me. I tend to have somewhat of a one track mind. Well, I started the chapter and I got sidetracked with Harry Potter. Yes, I am a proud Harry Potter fan. Anyways...my lovely one track mind had to read the 5th and 6th books of the series and I just couldn't put the books down long enough to get the chapter out to you. For that, I am deeply sorry...but, Who isn't excited for the new Harry Potter book, I mean...honestly? I was in elementary school when the first one came out (That dates me a bit doesn't it?) Anyways...I CAN'T WAIT to see how the story ends!

Anyways, sorry this took so long to get out. I hope I still have a few readers who are interested...we are just getting to the good part ;)

shout outs -
ayesha23 - Yea, they need to be tactful with their pressure. I think you will be proud of them.

akshay - It will be fun for you to see..hopefully!

Lamentamini - Dang Spanish Inquisition.

patpez - Yea, i think the girls are going to have to be patient with their mothers...but at points, they are going to try to take things into their own hands..

Ann Ticipation - Haha...I liked writing that line too. I had it a different way at first, but I am glad i decided to change it at the last second...It added some needed comic relief. Thanks for reading and for supporting my story. You are kind!

mc - You are right...there is going to be a bit of a tussle, but the girls aren't going to show all their cards up front.

azmama - Sorry this update is so late. I hope you are still enjoying the story.

ceetime - Sorry it took so long

curious - haha love goofy grins. Hope you like this one too!

mnj33pp - hmmm....good thinking...;) and as for alice...I am bursting to write her reaction. I have been thinking about it for a LONG time!

kant_help_it - Thanks again for your amazingly nice PM. it was very nice of you. HOpefully this chapter is more than a disappointing 2 pages ;)

dcgirl1789 - Thanks. Hope i can deliver with this one as well.

Chicki - You are very welcome. thanks for your nice words. Hope you enjoy this chapter as well. It was kinda fun to write!

marijejip - Yea, i am also glad i decided to go the honesty route. In my opinion, they have had enough of all the bull...they need to be upfront and honest and over the years, that is something both of them have learned. HOpefully i can portray that as the story progresses.

Jany0923 - I am glad you are enjoying it. Hopefully, you will enjoy this chapter as well!

Jwet - Thanks for reading Jwet..I have recently read ALL of your stories. They are absolutely brilliant. I am really enjoying your current story. It is a great idea. What will happen to Angie? I can't wait to see!

AshleyRoth - Thanks for reading!

Rau - haha..no worries about the car. anyways, let the fun begin!

kbergin47 - Thanks for reading. I am glad you liked that line. It was certainly fun to write!

mamat@mamab - I know...helaceous should be a fun scene to write!

Probie - Thanks, when i wrote the front porch scene, i had this mixture in my head of the Bette/Tina scene at the end of the first episode, and then the feelings of the conversation they had on the porch in season 4 just after Jodie left bette...now, i know that the sadness portrayed in this fic was not due to losing Jodie, but i still tried to portray some of those emotions.

bilto - I will try! Thanks for reading!

akalittlered - Nah...i have other uses for alice...you'll see...

hope4tb - Oh, here is that missing piece. Sorry...

McFracky - Yea, this is going to be a fun chapter for you...i think. Please, enjoy!

ladichi - Sorry this was so slow, I hope you still enjoy it!

fan4life - Gracias! Hope you like this chapter as well!

coop - Thanks for your nice comment. The girls are going to be...well, I guess you should just read and find out for yourself. haha..but, yea, i think you will like what alice has to say, when she does come into the story...she won't be around quite yet...but she comes in soon, I promise. Thanks for reading. As for finals..yes, they are over, you are right. I shall try to be more diligent with my writing!

vam - Yea, you have no idea...I hope you enjoy Alice's reaction..when it comes...

Chelseagal - sorry sorry...I know I should never disagree with you and Chicki...I will never make that mistake again ;) as i said eariler, i am sorry for the slow update. I will be better next time..Thanks for your kind words and support. They really do mean a lot to me and push me to keep trying to write somthing great. Please enjoy!

famaxii - sure you can hope for them...I hope for them too!! LONG LIVE TIBETTE!!

bandtfan - I am glad you enjoyed that line. I feel like that is exactly the point for both bette and tina, the real reason why they cannot truly move on...because their children deserve the other mother that they need. Thanks for your support. I am unsure of how good of a writer i am..but maybe that is good, it always keeps me trying to write something better! Please enjoy the chapter!

Pattifloatn - Yea, the family will be overwhelming, but at the same time, i feel like it is something that Lizzy has always really wanted to have. I think she will love it...then again, i do have some insider info ;)

OneStorm1 - Yea to all of your wonderful insights. I don't know exactly how rocky i am going to make their road though...still have much to decide...

phyl - Thanks. I hope you enjoy this chapter as well!

TMerlin - haha you are so nice. I hope you enjoy this chapter!

Therese_Belivet - Thank you for your kind comment. It was honestly very touching. I am in awe that you can see those characteristics in my writing. I shall try to continue to keep up the good work and be more accepting of praise. Thanks for reading. I hope you can enjoy this chapter.

brighteyez07 - Yea, they are getting along...hope nothing happens...hmmm....

scaper - Yea, well, actually, you should climb up the side of the house...Chrissy's room is upstairs...it added for some cool lines...)

gigi1976 - Thanks for reading! The next stage should be fun. I hope you will stick around for the ride!

Thanks for the comments and for the wonderful PM's...I got a few PM's after this chapter which were so very nice. Thank you to everyone for reading. Your continued feedback is great.

Anyways, please...enjoy!
ZL....

Summary: "Yea, but now we aren't just friends anymore, we are sisters. I think I can safely speak for Lizzy when I say that we want to be a family. We don't want to be just friends."
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Previously... 

Tina smiled lightly… “I think that is a good idea…so…what should we tell the girls?”

 

“I don’t think I want to get into specifics with them just now…especially because we haven’t even talked about them yet.”

 

“I agree…it really doesn’t concern them anyways…Maybe we should just say that you and I used to be a couple and that after we broke up, we both decided to have a baby and inadvertently, we used the same donor and so they are sisters?”

 

“Yea…ok…obviously, they are going to have questions…If they ask something too personal, we can just tell them that we aren’t ready to answer that question and we will get back to them.”

 

“Ok, that sounds fair.”

 

Bette gets up from the step and holds her hand out to Tina to help her up.  Once Tina gets to her feet, Bette steps back…

 

“It really is great to see you Tina…You look…Bette glances over Tina’s body… Really great!”

 

Tina smiled as a slight blush ran to her cheeks and once again, she reached for Bette’s hand… “You don’t look so bad yourself…” Tina said with a wink.

 

Bette laughed…“Ready to go in there?”

 

“What and face the inquisition?”

 

Bette grinned…“Something like that.”

 

Bette and Tina walked hand in hand up the stairs and to the front door, finding comfort and strength in their tight grasp, both women unsure of the course their impending conversation with their daughters would take. 

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Meanwhile…

 

Lizzy and Chrissy hastily made their way into the house.  Once the front door had closed, Chrissy led Lizzy to the front window and both girls peered around the curtains to get a glimpse at their mothers.

 

As they stole a glance, they saw Bette slowly trace her fingers over Tina’s cheek and then, the two women fell into a tight embrace.  Both girls were in awe.  They could not comprehend the scene that was playing out before their eyes. 

 

“Chrissy…what is this?”

 

Chrissy still staring out the front window replied… “I have absolutely no idea…I think there is more to this than we realized.”  Tearing her eyes away from the view outside the window, Chrissy grabbed Lizzy’s hand… “Come on, let’s go to my room.”

 

Chrissy and Lizzy quickly ambled up the stairs and down the hall to Chrissy’s bedroom.

 

After closing the door and turning to Lizzy who had taken residence on her bed, Chrissy spoke… “So, I think there is more to this than we thought.”

 

“Yea, I think you’re right…”

 

Chrissy sits down next to Lizzy. “That was weird…wasn’t it?”

 

“Seriously…your mom had me in a freaking death grip…what was that all about?”

 

“I have no idea.  She really did have you in a death grip didn’t she?  I mean, I don’t know…it is like they recognized us or something.  Like, when I first met your mom, she knew I was a Porter.  I mean, most people say that I look like my mom, but we have to be standing next to each other in order to make that comparison.”

 

Lizzy jumps up from the bed and starts pacing…“And your mom… she started crying when she looked into my eyes… and then she called my mom T…and it wasn’t like she was saying my mom’s name and then lost her voice because she said it twice…What is that all about?”

 

“I think we have asked that question too many times already.”

 

Lizzy, bringing her head down to hear hands in frustration…“AAHHHH I know.  This is infuriating.  We know absolutely nothing.”

 

“Ok, I know…So, let’s look at what we do know.”

 

“Ok, there is the old picture, which means that they knew each other before we were even born.  Because they look way young.”

 

“Yea, and we know that they know each other well enough to…ummm…see aspects of each other in us…right?”

 

“You’re right…and then there was that big hug thing that they had going on out there.”

 

“I know, and I have never seen my mom hug another woman like that.  I mean, she has had girlfriends…I think, but…I have never met any of them.  So, she must like her a lot to do that in front of me…right?”

 

Lizzy with questioning in her voice…“Yea, I think so.”

 

“So, there must have been something really serious there.  We have got to figure out what that was because that adds like a whole new dimension to our plan.”

 

“I know, it could either make getting them together easier, or harder…hopefully easier.”

 

“Hopefully…” Chrissy replied wistfully…

 

“So….that means we have to get them to talk…right?”

 

“Yea, we need to get them to tell us some stuff. Any information we get, the better our chances are.”

 

“Right, but…we better be careful…you know what I mean?”

 

“Yea, we don’t want to get them suspicious or anything.”

 

“Good idea!”

 

Downstairs…

 

“Wow…it looks…” Tina said with awe, glancing around the house.

 

“Yea, it’s different, but then some things are just the same.”

 

“Yea, it is nice.”

 

“Yea, we added onto the house about 8 years ago.”

 

“It looks good.”

 

“Well, anyways…Chrissy’s room is upstairs.”

 

Exhaling deeply, Tina spoke…“Right…I guess we should get this over with…why am I scared of two 10 year olds?”

 

“Well, I don’t know about Lizzy, but Chrissy can pretty much get anything out of me if she tries hard enough.”

 

“Yea, unfortunately, Lizzy is the same…well…after you.”  With that, Tina let go of Bette’s hand, and moved it to her back, pushing her forward towards the stairs.  Tina followed closely.  She couldn’t help but admire Bette’s butt as she ascended the stairs to Chrissy’s bedroom… Oh God…her ass is still amazing, Oh I just want to touch it, feel it.  It still looks very…firm…God Tina, you can’t think about that, you are just about to tell your daughter something very important.  Get your head in gear. Tina took in a deep breath, puffed out her cheeks, and then exhaled quickly which evoked a loud noise. 

 

Bette stopped quickly and turned… “You alright?”

 

“Yea, yea, fine…” 

 

Bette continued to mount the stairs.  Tina followed Bette down the hall and quickly they stopped as they reached the bedroom door. 

 

Exhaling deeply, Bette knocked… “Chrissy…Lizzy, can we come in?”

 

From within, Bette could hear her daughter calling back… “Yea, sure mom…come in.”

 

Bette opened the door and she and Tina filed into the bedroom…

 

“Cool room Chrissy.” Tina said, trying to get conversation started.

 

“Thanks, my mom let me decorate it all by myself.” Chrissy responded confidently.

 

“Well, you did a great job.”

 

“She did, didn’t she?” Bette said proudly…. “Right, girls, sit down will you?  Tina and I have a few things we would like to tell you.”

 

“Umm… ok” Chrissy and Lizzy sat back down on the bed, sliding up it so that their backs were resting upon the headboard, they sat patiently for their mothers to begin with the ensuing discussion. 

 

Bette waved for Tina to take a seat on one edge of the bed while Bette claimed the other for her own.  The four women sat there for a moment in silence

 

Lizzy could feel the tension rising in the air.  She couldn’t take it any longer… “So…what’s up mom?  Bette?” 

 

“Right, well…ok.  First I should tell you that there are things that Bette and I have some things that we would like to tell you but, at the same time, there are many things that we have not discussed yet.  There are questions that you guys might want to ask that we are not going to answer…fair?  She waited as the two girls hesitated, and then nodded their heads… Right, so…I guess we should start at the beginning…right?”

 

Bette piped in, “Right”

 

“Ok, so Bette and I met each other about 20 years ago.” Tina admitted timidly.

 

“20 years ago?” Chrissy spit out

 

“Yes, we met about 20 years ago and we were partners for about 8 years.” Bette added, gaining confidence in the conversation.

 

Chrissy was baffled… “Mom, you were in an 8 year relationship?.




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