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After a few more moments of silence, Tina stated… “I am not really sure where to begin…”

 

“When did you get here?”

 

“Last night…although I must admit, I did not know where my new house would be.”

 

“How could you not know?”

 

“Well, I was very busy, getting things ready for the move, I saw the house in some pictures and I was pleased with it so Annie took care of all the transactions for me.”

 

“Annie…yes, I think I have met her…so…did she tell you that she met me?”

 

“Not exactly…”

 

“What does that mean?”

 

“Well, she told me that she met one of the neighbors…who has a daughter, she told me your name was Bev.”

 

Bette laughed… “Ok, so when did you know that I still lived here?”

 

“About an hour ago….when I met your daughter…she is beautiful by the way.”

 

“Thank you.  I love her so much.”

 

“I can see that…”

 

“Lizzy…she is gorgeous as well.”

 

Tina smiled…“She is my angel…how did you know?”

 

“Well…as you said, she has your eyes and your smile…but I have seen her before…”

 

Tina was confused… “What…what do you mean?”

 

Bette took a deep breath…“Years ago…when we first found out that you were pregnant…before we knew the baby was a boy, I had a dream…it was…it was of her.  After we found out that we were having a boy, I always thought the dream was very odd…now I finally understand it.”

 

“Why didn’t you ever tell me?”

 

“There were lots of things we didn’t tell each other Tina…That was just one of the many.”

 

“Yea…” They both sat there, engulfed by the horrific memories of their demise. 

 

Bette, not wanting to spoil the moment anymore continued with her questioning… “So, why here Tina…why now?”

 

“Promotion…you know, better job, more pay, more time with Lizzy…it was a win-win situation.”

 

Bette smirked…“And you got to come back to California…where were you ?”

 

“New York”

 

“Ah so Alice was right.”

 

“Huh?” Tina waited for Bette to continue…

 

“About 6 weeks ago, Alice started talking about some hot blonde movie exec in New York…I told her to shove it.”

 

Tina chuckled…“Well…Alice was right, although I am not too sure about the hot part…Chrissy said that she and Dana are together and that they have a son.”

 

“Yea…great isn’t it?  They are really good together.  They make a nice family.”

 

“Yea…a nice family.” Tina uttered softly

 

“I think I already know the answer to this question, but I am going to ask it anyway…You used Marcus’s sperm, didn’t you?”

 

Tina took a deep breath…“It is a long story but in the end, yes…I did use his sperm.”

 

“So did I…”

 

Trying to lighten the mood, Tina joked… “Well, it looks like Lizzy is finally getting that sister she always asked for…my body thanks you…”

 

Bette burst out laughing.  She could not control her emotions anymore.  They had been up and down and everywhere in between.  Her laughter was contagious and soon Tina was in hysterics as well.  “Tina this is fucking crazy…’

 

As their laughter faded, Tina asked…“Oh God, why does everything have to be so fucking complicated?”

 

Bette grabbed Tina’s hand, and took a deep breath… “Because it’s us.”

 

“What are we going to do?  Once they find out that they are actually sisters…they aren’t going to want to be separated…I mean, look at them already.”

 

“I know, I could tell Chrissy was forming a bond with her when I talked with her on the phone…They already love each other so much.”

 

“It is so hard to grasp.  First, realizing that I moved into the old neighborhood, then finding out that you still live here and then to top it off, not only is your daughter my daughter’s best friend…but she is also her sister.”

 

“Hey…at least you have had some time to process this... It is all hitting me at once.”  Bette looked down at her hands which were nervously wrapped tight in a ball. 

 

“I know Bette… I am sorry.  I thought that if I was ever going to see you, well…this is not how I wanted it to happen…trust me.”

 

Bette looked up… “You wanted to see me?”

 

Now it was Tina’s turn to look down sheepishly… “I don’t know…yes…I guess so.”

 

“I thought you would always hate me…”

 

Tina looked up into Bette’s eyes…“Hate you?  No…hurt, upset…maybe. Bette, it has been so long.  There are so many things that we left unsaid.  So many questions unanswered.”

 

“We have a lot to talk about don’t we?”

 

“Well, if we want to get a long for the sake of our daughters, I think we are going to have to go through it.”

 

“Yea, I guess so…But…Can we save that joyous conversation for a little later?  I have a few things to digest first.”

 

Tina smiled lightly… “I think that is a good idea…so…what should we tell the girls?”

 

“I don’t think I want to get into specifics with them just now…especially because we haven’t even talked about them yet.”

 

“I agree…it really doesn’t concern them anyways…Maybe we should just say that you and I used to be a couple and that after we broke up, we both decided to have a baby and inadvertently, we used the same donor and so they are sisters?”

 

“Yea…ok…obviously, they are going to have questions…If they ask something too personal, we can just tell them that we aren’t ready to answer that question and we will get back to them.”

 

“Ok, that sounds fair.”

 

Bette gets up from the step and holds her hand out to Tina to help her up.  Once Tina gets to her feet, Bette steps back…

 

“It really is great to see you Tina…You look…Bette glances over Tina’s body… Really great!”

 

Tina smiled as a slight blush ran to her cheeks and once again, she reached for Bette’s hand… “You don’t look so bad yourself…” Tina said with a wink.

 

Bette laughed…“Ready to go in there?”

 

“What and face the inquisition?”

 

Bette grinned…“Something like that.”

 

Bette and Tina walked hand in hand up the stairs and to the front door, finding comforth and strength in their tight grasp, both women unsure of the course their impending conversation with their daughters would take. 

TBC…




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06/25/2007 , 22:08:51 PM
From: ayesha23
Comments: the girls will be so happy to know they are sisters. i think they should put pressure on their moms to get back together. you know, that good pressure! again great chapter. pps



06/25/2007 , 22:09:01 PM
From: akshay
Comments: I love this story. I can't wait to see how the giirls react when they find out they're sisters.



06/25/2007 , 22:14:59 PM
From: Lamentamini
Comments: At least they aren't facing the Spanish Inquisition. No one expects that.



06/25/2007 , 22:30:32 PM
From: patpez
Comments: AL I must say that I am so enjoying your story,,,,I loved how Bette just kept her emotions intact her tears,her smile and how she just held on the Lizzy cause she was a part of Tina and the baby she wanted together. I liked how both the sisters deciced to leave them alone and ask questions later, and I can only imagine the questions they will ask,,LOL,,,I loved how you had B&T talk to each other and listen which was very pretty. You could see that after all those yrs they still love each other, but can they make it this time around? Great chapter ZL



06/25/2007 , 22:33:54 PM
From: Ann Ticipation
Comments: This is such a delightful tale you are weaving, ZL! I especially appreciated the humor of this line: "Trying to lighten the mood, Tina joked... "Well, it looks like Lizzy is finally getting that sister she always asked for...my body thanks you..." Thank you for making my otherwise boring evening quite enjoyable!



06/25/2007 , 22:50:51 PM
From: mc
Comments: These two don't know their daughters if they think they can get away with a brief foggy story of the truth of their past. Not to mention that their future is already being planned by their offspring I believe. Great chapter and more please



06/25/2007 , 23:21:28 PM
From: azmama
Comments: great update. I do love TiBette and this unusual twist on the typical TiBette story. PPS.



06/25/2007 , 23:49:42 PM
From: ceetime
Comments: can hardly wait until the next post.



06/26/2007 , 00:21:44 AM
From: curious
Comments: yaahhhh u got this big goofy grin on my face!! plz keep em coming



06/26/2007 , 00:36:46 AM
From: mnj33pp
Comments: OK, THE GIRLS WILL BE HAPPY THAT THEY ARE SISTERS, BUT NOW THEIR GOING TO WANT TO LIVE TOGETHER AND HAVE BOTH THERE PARENTS TOGETHER AS WELL. LOOK FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER - BRILLIANT



06/26/2007 , 00:49:18 AM
From: kant_help_it
Comments: Another disappointing 2 pager ZL. C'mon we all know your not busy now!!! JK.......I pm'd you!!



06/26/2007 , 02:47:10 AM
From: dcgirl789
Comments: Don't worry, you definitely delivered with this chapter!



06/26/2007 , 02:58:03 AM
From: Chicki
Comments: Brilliant!!! How could you think you could ever disappoint me huh??? I love the way you are writing this Fic. It is clearly well thought out, developed, and paced perfectly. You can feel the emotions on your sleeve when reading this one. Thank you for such a loving and light storyline. ~hugs~



06/26/2007 , 04:24:05 AM
From: marijejip
Comments: Without raising the standard of writing too high, you did a great job. You made the reunion between the two lovers so real, because hate is the one things that fades over time. I respect how honest you have made them, confessing to their daughters about their relationship and more so about using the same donor. I thought that they would just tell their children that thay used to date and be done with it for now, untill they had some clearity themselfs. But I like the chorse that you are taking, very honest and nice. I love the embrasse between Tina and Bette. If only all reunions could be like that. Post soon.



06/26/2007 , 04:57:24 AM
From: Jany0923
Comments: I can't get enough of this story....thank you for a great chapter. PPS :)



06/26/2007 , 05:52:37 AM
From: Jwet
Comments: Wow just caught up and love the last two chapters. The way you discribe the connection just sends chills down my arms so incredible, great discription. I'm totally in love with your story. Thanks for telling us



06/26/2007 , 05:57:14 AM
From: mnj33pp
Comments: I FORGOT TO MENTION, I CAN'T WAIT TO READ WHAT ALICE HAS TO SAY ABOUT THIS!!



06/26/2007 , 06:10:20 AM
From: AshleyRoth
Comments: Just amazing. Thanks.



06/26/2007 , 07:27:21 AM
From: Rau
Comments: Lovely...superb even...great dialogue and s/l...getting them back 2gether shouldn't be too hard huh??? yes I forgot about the model of car...pps



06/26/2007 , 07:49:40 AM
From: kbergin47
Comments: YEH!!! They finally meet! What a great story to wake up to. I love the line....my body thanks you... so cute. Can't wait for more. PPS!!



06/26/2007 , 08:27:20 AM
From: mamat@mamab
Comments: The story was great as always. Not only will the girls be pushing to get them back together but so will the family, especially Alice. I can't wait for Bette to find out that Tina is the woman that Helena was talking about. Please post soon.



06/26/2007 , 08:53:42 AM
From: Probie
Comments: Noting wrong with this chapter. I love the conversation and especially sitting on the front steps. I'm sure the girls are going to jump for joy when they find out they're sister. Will be interesting to see how you finally join the two families and rebuild B&T relationship.



06/26/2007 , 09:15:31 AM
From: bilto
Comments: Keep em comin....Keep em coming. Please, pretty please.



06/26/2007 , 10:04:38 AM
From: akalittlered
Comments: ZL, I am so loving this story. Now do you think Alice is going to here the girls scream when they find out there sisters. Thank you



06/26/2007 , 10:13:09 AM
From: hope4tb
Comments: Another AWESOME chapter - but you know again I must be missing the rest of it...LOL - hope you can post the missing pieces SOON!!!! thank you!



06/26/2007 , 10:27:46 AM
From: McFracky
Comments: I'm digging this story immensely - it's delightful. Can't wait for the girls to find out they're sisters.



06/26/2007 , 10:55:48 AM
From: ladichi
Comments: Another fantastic chapter! Anxiously awaiting your next post!



06/26/2007 , 10:58:33 AM
From: fan4life
Comments: brilliant as always :)



06/26/2007 , 12:11:12 PM
From: coop
Comments: What the heck are you talking about? Worrying about not measuring up to the last chapter, raising the bar too high, nonsense. You are doing a fantastic job with this story. It flows so smoothly, never going to high or too low, just always kinda right in the middle. Now I'm not saying we want any lows, cos we don't, but some highs would be good. the girls are so gonna go crazy to find out they're sisters. Great line,"my body thanks you". Then maybe they can work on getting they're Mother's together, all though I do think Tina and Bette probably can handle that themselves. Alice is just gonna die, can't wait for her imput. I'm sure she'll point out how they chose the same daughter, ended up in the same neighborhood, you know like hello does a brick have to hit you in the head. Can't wait for next update, is it coming soon. Aren't you done with finals, its not like you need a break or anything. LOL.



06/26/2007 , 12:34:08 PM
From: vam
Comments: The "sisters" are going to be thrilled - and it's going to be very interesting to hear Alice's reaction! Great post.



06/26/2007 , 12:38:49 PM
From: chelseagal
Comments: Well my dear ZL.... how on earth could you even think that your writing would not live up to the very high standards that you have already set. I am sorry that I frighten the crap out of you, but praise must be given when it is so rightly deserved. Your writing is so visual and your switch between , the sensitive moments and the humour is so exquisite. I love the line ,"my body thanks you". It was "expertly" placed in the storyline and at the right moment. You leave your readers wanting more and that is such a skil... So keep up the good work and as usual my only request is to reward us all with another chapter real soon.From one of your adoring fans....Okay now I have most likely have freaked you out and for that I smile ;-) as it is a little revenge for leaving me wanting more from chapter 8.and by the way your really ought not to disagree with Chicki and I when we are giving deserved praise ;-) Big hugs



06/26/2007 , 12:55:38 PM
From: famaxiii
Comments: it´s so sweet!!!Can I hope for tibette?!!hugs.



06/26/2007 , 13:02:51 PM
From: bandtfan
Comments: ZL, do you really not understand how wonderful your writing is? This chapter cleared your imaginary bar and then some. This part is just so very true..."She is hugging Lizzy like the other mother I always wanted her to have. Many women have wanted the role that Bette never knew she had. I just could not give them something that was not mine to give." I eagerly look forward to your next chapter. Thanks so much!



06/26/2007 , 14:59:22 PM
From: pattifloatn
Comments: I loved this chapter. You made it sound so real. Something like that could have really happened. The fact that they could talk about it and hold hands as they walked in is a joyous moment. I can't wait to see the girls reaction to being sisters and how the rest of the gang is going to react to Tina and then to the sisters. Lizzy is going to be overwhelmed with all of her family that she did not know existed.



06/26/2007 , 16:49:59 PM
From: OneStorm1
Comments: The girls are going to go into orbit when they find out they are sisters and I am sure they will have loads of questions. Now the hard part they have to discuss the horrible things they had to go through to become friends. And then let nature take it's course ;)



06/26/2007 , 19:57:58 PM
From: phyl
Comments: What can I say? I just love this story!



06/26/2007 , 20:21:39 PM
From: TMerlin
Comments: You're on a roll...keep going...it's gonna get even better 'cause that's how good it is so far.



06/27/2007 , 01:14:13 AM
From: Therese_Belivet
Comments: I love the way you depict all different emotions each one can feel facing each other after years : a mix of contrasted feelings, from embarrassment to comfort, from tears to laughs, from painful memories to forgiveness... Lost time can be both an emotional pain and a salve on old scars. I know the feeling and it's very realistic here. *** By the way, please don't be afraid of all the compliments you receive by your enthusiastic readers : they are truly deserved and, for me, let me say how you own all the essential resources that will always make a talented and endearing author : you have heart and sensitivity, delicacy and empathy. So, don't be afraid by the "bar" : your qualities already passed it ! *** I just adore your story, as simply as that, because I can feel the obvious love it was written with. It's truly endearing and deeply moving... Thank you, it's a gift ! ^_^ A.



06/27/2007 , 07:43:51 AM
From: brighteyez07
Comments: ok, now I can take a deep breath...thats what i've been waiting for, i'm glad B & t r getting along so well.



06/27/2007 , 15:38:49 PM
From: scaper
Comments: Ah, so you were the other blond!;) As for worrying about this chapter, don't! The way you write you draw the reader in so we feel your words & the emotions they portray. Ok, guess I'll have to move from behind this bush & peer through Bettes windows ready for your next chapter! See you by the windows.....



06/27/2007 , 16:02:49 PM
From: gigi1976
Comments: I'm with Probie, I'm already looking forward to the next stage. thanks for writing ZL, love this story!!PPS



07/22/2007 , 20:43:12 PM
From: ut
Comments: AAMAZING!



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