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Notes from Underground - Shot through the heart by BetteAndTinaForever
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Images from her past were circling in her head, haunting her thoughts and keeping her awake. When she was finally able to fall asleep, her dreams continued to keep her restless, though now they were bringing something new. She suddenly saw a dream with the mystery woman from the bar, the one with that familiar sandalwood scent and a beautiful back, clad in a simple white t-shirt. Tina was willing her to turn around so she could see her face. The mystery woman began slowly turning and Tina first saw her hand with long slender fingers, holding a drink. She had a cap on and Tina was peering into the darkness of the bar, trying to see what was underneath. “Look at me…look at me, please,” Tina whispered, waking up in a cold sweat, her mystery woman’s still a mystery. “Damn…” TBC...
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06/12/2007 ,
22:46:39 PM
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packer
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Women welcome back,and i cannot wait for tina to meet that service agent and maybe and heal her ache.alice is soo funny a big kid at heart.who was recording tina and the senators conversation.okay i feel a lot of things cumin into played in the near future.im waiting for the london to come and really soon,please.*wink*
06/12/2007 ,
23:14:56 PM
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mc
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Excellent - glad to read this. More please.
06/13/2007 ,
00:45:58 AM
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gogk
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Always a pleasure read your stories! Thanks for post!
06/13/2007 ,
03:03:33 AM
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robbeedee
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Hey BnT4vr, Great to have another wondrous chapter/ I love it. All of the game playing that is going on. Shane and Carmen finally meeting and so begins a new relationship. One with heat and sexiness, I hope. Bette is prepping for her undercover operation while Tina pines for this mystery woman. I do hope that Bette fills the role brilliantly. These gals do need to meet to see if their attraction is as instanteous as I hope. Great to et some background into bith Tina and Helena's past. Really fleshing out this tale. Alice and Dylan were fun. Sentator Grisham was understanding and able to listen to what Tina was saying. Please continue this awesome adventure soon. Addicted as ever. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan..
06/13/2007 ,
07:02:21 AM
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Techie
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Ooh, very interesting. Can't wait to read more. Thanks for posting!
06/13/2007 ,
09:24:00 AM
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curioust
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I keep thinking that it has to be an inside job as they're being recorded. Now i'm debating whether the real target is the Senator or Tina? You have such great imagination and the pace of this story keeps me in suspense. PPS!
06/13/2007 ,
10:48:09 AM
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prasnil
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Glad to see u post, B&TF! This is certainly getting exciting... looking forward to B&T's meeting.
06/13/2007 ,
14:46:05 PM
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gigi1976
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Great update!! Please do not apologize about the pace or content of your chapters. A good story is like fine wine - takes some time to become really great. The build up is important, just please keep posting!
06/13/2007 ,
16:58:20 PM
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pattifloatn
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I love your stories because you take good care of our girls. Tina is going to get to see her mysterous woman soon enough. I wonder if she will ever put Bette's back and front together (I know that sounds weird, but I hope you know what I mean). Jenny needs to have her manners changed. She is not very professional with her remarks. I can understand being funny but she is rude.
06/13/2007 ,
18:48:02 PM
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brighteyez07
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Exciting update, looking forward to more
06/13/2007 ,
20:30:58 PM
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TMerlin
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Hey old lady! Well this one is interesting! Mystery woman! Hmmmmmmm! Hope you post again soon.
06/14/2007 ,
10:45:42 AM
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albeez
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sorry finally had time to read. been, as fucking always, busy at work. enjoying it as you know. looking forward to more. looking more forward to next weekend tho!!!! should be a blast. thanks.
06/15/2007 ,
01:01:50 AM
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Rau
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oh pleasz...bring it on...
06/17/2007 ,
14:21:01 PM
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Trolle
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Ohh lord this is torture :O) but we love it................please bring us the next chapter soon - it is sooo good. Post soon
08/26/2007 ,
20:02:01 PM
From:
ut
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Good chapter and can't wait to see B&T meet each other!
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