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This made Alice and Shane even happier…“Alright, I guess that is a good excuse… but, later.  You are not getting out of this.”

 

“Ok Al.”

 

 

Kit walks up with Angelica… “Very nicely done ladies.”

 

Bette and Tina smile…“Thanks Kit…Boo, you ready to go?”

 

Kit hands Angelica over to Bette.  The girls say their good byes and the family leaves.  Bette and Tina holding hands, and Angelica tightly wrapping her arms around her mamma B.

 

 

 

 

TBC….

 

 

 

 

 




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06/06/2007 , 05:00:52 AM
From: Rau
Comments: Loved T taking Canned-arse down...lol...more soon pleaszzzzzzzzz



06/06/2007 , 05:22:15 AM
From: Lamentamini
Comments: LOL!!!!!!!! I so needed the laugh this morning. Thanks!



06/06/2007 , 08:08:58 AM
From: ld18
Comments: So, is this Candace-thing really over or are we gonna see her crazy-ass pop up again?



06/06/2007 , 09:11:42 AM
From: Chicki
Comments: Sorry you stayed up late...* wink * You know it takes two to stay up late anyway. LOL!!Hey..seriously, this was FABULOUS!!!! I guess Tina always felt that she had to challenge and deal with the woman who engaged with Bette while Bette was already in a committed relationship. It happens....whether it's g/f's or spouses, or whatever...eventually they have questions, or they may just want a piece of the "other woman/man/lover," and so in time, it just comes out sideways. WOOO HOOO to Tina for giving a go at it. She needed that to feel that final bit of contentment. This line that Bette said to Candace...ouch but so true. "And more to the point, it is clear to me now that you are an emotional cripple without any kind of capacity to understand true love..." Soooo powerful, yet....I can see why it was said. Excellent!! MORE MORE MORE



06/06/2007 , 11:39:16 AM
From: packer
Comments: Way to go Tina,its about time lady...wonderful update.p.p.s.



06/06/2007 , 12:06:05 PM
From: cpq
Comments: NICE, VERY NICE, sometimes you just need "Your pound of flesh" regardless what the law says or time has pass; and I am GLAD that Tina finally got hers. Not to be craptic, but somrtimes when someone harms or do you wrong, regardless of what theLaw does or says, you just need to "Put your foot up their but, or get your pound of Flesh". "If you do the Crime, you must do the Dime", Candace was past due on paying up. PPS :o).



06/06/2007 , 14:08:58 PM
From: Probie
Comments: Well, I hope that truly is the end of Candace since she seems to be a bit off her rocker. Stalker indeed. Bitter sweet revenge is just that, bitter-sweet. I hope Tina found what she was looking for in this confrontation, even if it was just a moment of empowerment.



06/06/2007 , 15:28:13 PM
From: chelseagal
Comments: Well Girl... this was downright HOT, Great, absolutley fabulous darling ....I am lost for words, and I am glad you managed to stay awake and give me the best laugh that I have had in a long while.Gimme more.... is all I am going to sayno seriously more please.....Tina was great and the lines and banter was so funny...thanks for sharing



06/06/2007 , 15:53:33 PM
From: coop
Comments: You almost had us there for a moment. Way to go Tina, that was just so overdue. I'm thinking she may kinda need to do that in S5, not necessarily to Jodi, but something similar to Bette to let her know she's claiming her woman back.



06/06/2007 , 18:52:50 PM
From: OneStorm1
Comments: THAT'S WHAT I'M TALKIN ABOUT! I still wish Tina had slapped that bitch though, but maybe another time? Candace always turns up like a bad penny so I'm sure she will be back sooner or later just not so soon though please. pps.



06/06/2007 , 22:06:22 PM
From: Ann Ticipation
Comments: I never could understand Bette's penchant for women in overalls/coveralls; the contents were never all that. So I am glad to see the carpenter get nailed to the floor and Jodi nowhere in sight. You made me smile, thanks for that. Great job!!!



06/06/2007 , 22:33:31 PM
From: pattifloatn
Comments: Sorry about the last chapter. I must have been floatn through the last couple of days and was late reading it. Loved how Tina kept her calm and flirted with Bette and then how Bette picked up and went right along with Tina. It could not have gone any better than how you wrote it.



06/06/2007 , 23:03:48 PM
From: techgal
Comments: They better watch their language around Angelica. Little Boo is going to have a BIG vocaboolary! Thanks!



07/22/2007 , 18:04:28 PM
From: ut
Comments: That was awesome and love it! Funny about Candace, was a stupid bitch!



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