Title: ~ No Other Love ~ - Chapter 2
Author: Chicki [ Send a Private Message ]
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Copyright: © 2007 Chicki
Content Rating: NC-17
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Author's Note: Hi Gals, I want to thank each of you for the number of nominations that I received for Reflections as well as A Life Denied, and even a nomination for Art & Beauty by Chess (Chicki and Ness).
As I have said before, and it is worth repeating here, I am moved by the readers. They are my inspiration. They are what motivates me. They are the ones who I write for. Your nominations is my win, so I thank you for the many "wins" you have provided me.
As I have shared with so many of you, I do not write for competition, as it isn't a pat on my back which I seek. I have struggled as many of you know, in terms of whether I would stay in, or have my name taken off when it came to awards. I guess I have to go with a number of you who said, in more blunt words than I will repeat...."are you crazy? You must stay in." I took your advice and I have. I don't expect to win any "official" awards and it isn't because of a lack of talent or creativity, because in my heart (and those that know me will know it has always taken a lot for me to accept compliments and feel my work has value), I know that your feedback is confirmation of my success. Remember, for me, it is solely your reading the story which makes me a winner already. I humbly thank each of you that took the time to cast a vote in my direction to reach the state of nominations, for it does further motivate me to continue to provide you with more stories.
I understand the second part of the process, and if done with a level of integrity that it deserves,can definitely be a valuable means of recognition. From what I learned, the intent when the two tiered system was developed, was to eliminate favoritism or popularity contests. The intent is definitely one which was developed in the best interest of the readers and the author's. The webmaster has provided the tools necessary to make it as honest as possible with what she has available to her. The new nomination forms were MUCH easier for readers, and allowed a smooth means of voting. She has done all she could on her level to ensure a fair process, and for that as an author on the site I am grateful.
A friend had questioned how could the writer's have the time to both write their stories AND read ALLLLLL the other author's stories on the site so that they could cast an honest vote and not be moved by other influences? I explained that I could only speak for myself, but when it comes to actually voting for the winner, I personally try to take at least 4 chapters to look at randomly by that author, in that voting period, and then make my selection. I have even started to openly comment on some stories that I read. Although I don't comment on every single one, I do try to show my support to other author's who take the time to share their work.
There are soooo many talented author's that deserve recognition based on MERIT and nothing more. There are three that I am really hoping get a little pen beside their name because their writing is absolutely outstanding. There are two that I did nominate who hadn't made it to that second round, but I have to tell you they are two of the most talented author's. One moves me so much with her writing, and I only wish I could get her to write more often. I have never been moved by the way she details her stories, especially the romantic and steamy chapters. You know who you are...* smiling *.
Good luck to the nominees. The ones who didn't make it to round two.....hang in there, for your time is coming.
Many thanks to Jacky and her staff for putting in endless hours to make this site function like it does. Let's face it, it's a thankless job. The majority of PM's she very likely receives are complaints and whines. I have just become and admin on another site and I'm just waiting for my InBox to fill up!!!! LMAOOOO. No worries, I have a box of binkies all ready to hand out!!! Shell you don't need to whine, I bought you a special one to suck on. ROFLMAO! Ness picked it out!
I have received more and more PM's from silent readers, the first shout out is to one in particular. Those PM's and even many from the consistent posters are THE reasons why my writing is important to me. I try to reach people who are in different places in their lives. In the past I have dealt with breast cancer scare and the need to have mammograms. I have dealt with addiction and how that addiction does not simply impact the addict but those close to the person. I have written about infidelity and the ramifications of that. I have written about the death of a child, the death of a partner and the loss associated with that. I have written about women who are questioning their sexuality for the first time. I have written about society and bigotry of those in our internal and external family. My writing is hard to swallow at times because it is important that somewhere I am touching someone's life and providing some insight into not just problems that they themselves are experiencing, but maybe another persons viewpoint. When I receive PM's telling me that I have helped someone in their relationship, that someone went for a mammogram and they found something but it ended up being benign, that I helped a young woman come "out" and live the life she had never had the courage to live. That my friend is MY award and reward. Many years from now, when there is no Lword show, no website to share our stories, no award icon by my name, I will still be as rich as I am today, for the rippling affect of my writing will remain in the lives of those that set their eyes upon these pages, pages that were not filled with just "fiction" but life, struggles, challenges, and hope. How could that NOT be the best achievement?
Now on to the personal shout outs.....
Marie: Doll, thanks for the PM. So nice to see another silent reader coming forward. Your message completely moved me, and it is THOSE reasons which you shared with my privately why I write. I write to reach the readers and to move them. I write to hopefully provide even an ounce of direction somewhere in the stories. I didn't know you would be in Ptown in September. I heard that our anticipated event made the Curve magazine!!! So proud of those two ladies. They are awesome! No doubt Sizz's book will be out. She is one extremely talented and gifted women with a lot of spunk.
caitlin-jayne: Hey CJ!!! Yes my friend, you are FIRST!! YAYYYY YOU!! LMAO! I'm so glad you like the fic. I plan on having some fun with this for sure. Thanks for reading and commenting, it means so much. claricestarling: It's so nice to see you popping in! Thank you for reading and commenting. Yes, you know there will definitely be those dramatic moments. Gosh it wouldn't be by Chicki if it wasn't right??? LOL! Rau: Hi Rau! Thank you so much for reading this and commenting. It means a lot to me when a writer has the time to also read along. I have been trying to make more and more of an effort with that myself. Thanks again. packer: Ahhhh Packer!!!! So nice to see you under this new name. You followed the instructions quite well I see! * wink* Always a pleasure talking with you and the others. It's a little hard to multitask, that is why the headset can be a hoot. Although, it's funny as hell because some people sound alike......okay we won't go there. ROFLMAOOOOO. Hmm...so I am Yoda huh? Hmm...thank you but you know you are always too generous to me. Yes, you are putting pressure on, but it's all good, I wouldn't expect anything less from you my friend. *** wink ***
AmandaMG: AMG!!!! You go girl! Congrat's on the nomination. Hey AMG, as a few of the original writers from way back when, you know there is nothing stopping us. As long as our brains work and our fingers move, we will have stories to write. We will definitely talk later.....*Hugs*
Tylo: TTTTTTTTTTAMMMMMMM....ROFLMAO...yes, how come this isn't 9 pages???? I wonder why? I wonder who I was chatting with last night ??? Huh?? Huh?? Okay, you can only take a small amount of the blame, you were definitely NOT alone. Oh yeah, you know the CLT is ever present. Eddy: ROFLMAO...Edddyyyyyyyyyyy!!!! GRRRRRR you are already wanting 80 years. LMAO~! You mean you honestly want to see them in Depends and on the commode???? Really...truly??? LOL!!! I mean, I can probably arrange it for sure. LMAO!! You are not alone in wanting a sequel to Reflections. I have received a number of personal messages and a few emails about that. Hmmm....perhaps....maybe! : - )))) Thanks so much for reading and commenting. Kendra35: Awwww thank you so much! It's nice to see that you are enjoying this story, even at just one chapter!!! Let's hope I can keep you interested...** wink** Thanks so much for leaving a comment. Tightbackdoor: Ahhh thank you so much for reading and commenting. Hope I continue to please. NYGayLady Heyyyyyy NYGL!!!! I think we are playing tag. LOL!! This is definitely a new take for me, but as always, there will be that Chicki drama and cliffies every so often. Okay Okay....perhaps more than not. LOL!!! No...there probably isn't anything I won't write about. jb621: Hey Goombah! Yes Tina LIVES~~~ LoL, come on now, I kill Tina in ONE...just ONE Fic and I can't live it down eh? I feel bad for this Tina already. She is obviously denying herself one of the very best parts of who she is. I wonder if she will ever be able to "come out" or even if she stayed closeted, to at least live the life with a woman. Hmm......it will be heart wrenching at different moments for sure. ROFLMAOo....hmm...another reader wishes to beg. Well ya know....I do seem to buckle not under pressure, but under begging. ROFLMAOOOo Ciao Ciao Bambino. Lamentamini: Hmm......you might be sensing correctly. I won't tell this soon, you are just gonna have to read. Oh no worries about Jenny...one never knows when Tina might end up bitch slapping her. Perhaps when Porter isn't around to grab her around her cute, sexy waist. oOooO LA LA. Dez: Ahhh....sometimes High School B&T's can be soooo much fun. You can make them a little sassy, a little immature, throw in a few hair pulling cat fights, a little jealousy here and there. Soooo many aspects that you have to allow them to grow out of as they mature. Thanks so much for reading and commenting. delicious: Oh come on now, don't you be dummying up on me woman. You KNOW I had this story, and you also knew the name of it and outline of it way before now. LOL!!!! Oh, and like you had nothing to do with me posting this sooner than later huh? Hmmm......yep...dummy up. ROFLMAO. I got your text message in the middle of painting. The fumes and other stuff got to me. I didn't get done all I wanted to, but I did make a big dent. Sometimes my original plans end up being too unrealistic. So...one wall and trim left and it is done. Then I get curtains for her, some new cosmetic things and voila, the project is finished and nothing like it was before. It is SOOOO cheery, and that makes me feel good. Now....as far as smut...I can attest that you do a fine job of that all on your own. You know you can't pull that "innocent" wool over my head right? Right??? ** wink** God we had a ball the other night. I'm telling you, you really had us both in stitches. Hell I never even saw Ness loosen up like she did, and let me tell ya, it wasn't a lot, but it was a hell of a lot more than I have ever seen...um...under the circumstances!! Now...go grab your Pom Poms...oh hell, allow me to. Hey...get your mind out of the gutter. Ahh so you notived Ness has a great set of Pom Poms too huh? I know!!! YUMMMMYYYYYYYYYYY....* licking lips * I hope you know that I wouldn't wake you in the middle of the night, even though I know you want nothing more than for me to call you and talk to you in the middle of the night. What a pleasure to have you leaving your cell phone on 24 hours.....that can be dangerous. ** wink ** blink** Probie: LOL, thanks Probie. I'm glad you like the story so far. I know it is only one chapter, but I'm loving it myself. There is definitely so much potential and so much growth to explore as these woman mature and ease into adult life. Mm-MMm...the possibilities! :- )) Ness: BABYYYYY...Hey you. Waking you in the middle of the night was pretty funny. You were like ...uh...what are you doing up? LOL!!!!! Hell I think we all have known someone like Jenny. We just hope that it was in our more younger and immature days like the days of school. However, the unfortunate part, is that there are actually some adults that have not fully developed and are the adult version of Jenny. In time, they too get a life I guess. Now Now Ness....do you have to wish ill things on the characters in my story???????? My god woman, that was some nasty stuff you wished on Jenny. What did she ever do to you? ROFLMAOO...uh...honey? Don't answer that. ** wink ** Uh huh. Anyway, you know exactly where this is going, and you have had these chapters read to you days before they have been posted. So glad you are a part of my life and share some of these more intimate details of one of my favorite hobbies. Thank you always for your support, your love, your undying faith in me. You are a diamond, and I know I have told you the analogy many times......hold that honey....always. Awwww BIG smooches to you always. Just think this weekend......will be our last one before you go away for 12 days. Hmmmm....I'm thinking that we won't be leaving the bed baby...so plan on getting A LOT of rest this week.....GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR.....Oh yeah, the Tiger has awakened. Love you always. Sara: Hey thanks Sara!!! I hope you like this one. It is a little different than what I normally write, but I figured what the hell! LOL! Thank you so much for fitting time into reading this story, where you read so many. Hansen: LOL ya know Hansen, it truly is amazing when you are happy how it shows. Let's sing.."If you're happy and you know it ...pick your nose....if you're happy and you know it pick your nose" okay..that was just wrong. I think Delicious and BBR3 are just turning me into pure smut. Okay, I'll reveal BYOT = Bring Your Own Toy. * wink * trecelovinit: Thank you so much for reading! It means so much! Catb: Oh boy, I graduated in the late eighties, and I'll tell ya.....you DID NOT come out during that time, and definitely not in a small community. I can totally understand Tina's position at this place in her life. Bette is more of a rebel, the "I don't give a shit" attitude. Two very different women brought together by love. Love does amazing things. Audi: Ohhhh for sure I would be doing a TiBette story. I just love those ladies. There will be some drama for sure, as we take this journey where love blooms, goes separate ways, and struggles to possible return. Question is, does it ever? Thanks again for reading and commenting. prasnil: Hee Hee...I knew you would approve Pras. You are one of the old loyal ones. Thanks hun. Brooke: Hellloooo Brooke. Long time now see. Yes, this story will be filled with the ups and downs and many thought provoking scenarios will develop before you reading eyes. Biased: LMAOO...yes I was "forced" but you know me, it didn't take a hell of a lot. LOL!!! This is going to be a lovely story as it unfolds. I would say that at different moments, expect the unexpected, and you will be prepared. Oh yeah, and fasten your seatbelts. LOL! Thanks again for you support. B: HoneyB!!! Yes, I did get this posted as promised! ROFLMAO...hey you, I passed that "vibrator" movie clip on. OH MY GOD!!! YOU had me laughing sooooo hard I snorted. I did that around 215am when I was online with Shell. It made her laugh her ass off. ROFLMAO!!!! Now...um..about making things build up and then go BOOM....TMI!!!!! Yes I DO know what you are on about there. Now this chapter may be too hot for you to handle there sweets, so...just..er...go easy on yourself. OOOOO That sounded so raunchy and bad. You love it! Talk to you soon hun. XOXO vi2mim2: ROFLMAO...hey Mim don't close your eyes and dance woman, you'll get dizzy and fall down!! Hee Hee. Yes a 20 year period which could span 350 chapters for sure. I LOVE writing about B&T in their younger years...they can be so foolish, carefree, immature, LMAO!!! I gotta tell you I'll have some fun with them no doubt. pogo74: Hey you, thanks for your emails. You are the best, but then again you know that. Isn't it great about the ECP being covered by Curve? I couldn't believe it. I was so proud of our ladies. Cannot wait to party with them. Ness and I have been trying to make some choices on the ceremony. Why so many choices ????? I say just do it! LMAO!!! Wait, that's the Nike jingle ROFLMAOOO!!!!! Kword75: Gosh I know how you feel when it comes to not having time for things. I haven't had much time either. I have been spending A LOT of time online chatting with friends individually, in conferences, on the IM's....LMAOO sometimes simultaneously. I LOVE writing, don't get me wrong, but the interaction with these woman is far more pleasurable than writing at times. Soo.....my priorities are changing "slighty"...Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. I appreciate it.
Wildtouch: Awwww....you should be use to me leaving you hanging woman!! ROFLMAOOO. I would have posted another, but someone kept me up until 2am * arching brow* Soooo...because I chatted too much, now I wasn't able to comment. Plus you didn't beg enough...like those old days when you would not only beg but kind of grab my leg. ROFLMAOOO....love ya Wild1. bettyvhall: Ahhh you have pegged Tina's family for sure. The whole stuffy prim Donna household. GRRRR...god I can't tolerate people who are stuck up. It is so unbecoming. It would be nice to see Tina be able to get her feet on some solid footing in college, away from her family so she can be free to explore herself. paulinhavet: Thanks so much for reading and posting a comment. :- )) Yes, you are on the 'list'...hee hee. Talk soon.
pattifloatn: Pattiiiiiiii!!! : - ))))) So nice to see you dropped by. Then again, why wouldn't you right? Yes, Jenny is already on the Poo list in Chapter 1, now how could that be???? LOL!!! wizard1: Thank you Wiz, I appreciate your leaving a comment. Yes, 20 years will be a long time in their life. I wonder how many of those years they will be together, and how many they will be apart? Hmmm........thinking hard. ecstasythrumusic: Awww thanks hun. I did receive your invite and accepted it. Hope to talk soon. I agree that there will be a variety of elements brought to the table with this story that people will be able to relate to. Perhaps even just one person's attitude, character, struggle, etc. Thanks so much for reading and commenting. Your support is appreciated. I sent you a lengthy PM back to you. I hope you found it helpful. I meant every word of what I said. We'll talk soon. Hugs. robbeedee: Helloooooooooo Sweetie!!!!!! : - ))))) You know that one in the closet and one not does allow for a variety of things to occur. I do love these two gals at this young age. I am enjoying playing with their young personalities and reaching back perhaps to my own days here and there. NOT that I was out, gosh no. I think I "figured" my life out, er....at least THAT part of it only two years ago. But there are those moments in my younger days that I do reflect fondly on. You can ride me anytime you want babe. ** wink ** Hey you said it, I didn't!!!!! :- ))))))) BBR3: Oh gosh, it's Smut #2 who will be VERY happy to read this chapter. Yes, you are #2, cause Shell aka Delicious is Smut#1. Girl the things that woman has said to me has made my toes curl, and she has said it in Ness's presence even. Which actually is a good thing cause for one, it shows Ness the level of honestly and how forward our friend is. LMAOOO!!!!! She is a sweety and really has brought so much into my life, as well as Ness's. Ness's cheeks turn more and more red, and now she is starting to throw in a few raunchy things in return, which if you know Ness.....she isn't one to really smut it up....except in bed..and then...oh whatever!!! LOL. Anyway, you and Delicious can definitely grab your Pom Poms and show up for practice. GRRRRRRR....bring it on woman! Oh yeah..about the comment....ROFLMAO!! THANKS!!! Hee Hee
Ann Ticipation: Hi Ann!! Yes, this was rather quick, but it has been playing in my mind for abouuuuuuuuuut 8 months now. About time I put it on paper huh? LOL!!! I really hope Bette can help Tina inch out of the closet. I have a feeling it may not be as soon as we would like though. hope4tb: Thanks for reading and commenting, it means so much!! I hope to see you back in the future! Like now! : - )))) anker; Hi Anker! I don't know how I am doing it either! I guess I have a lot of energy and am pretty motivated in my goal to accomplish things. Thank you for your kind words about "Reflections" as it was a lovely story to write. A number of readers have expressed that they really enjoyed the ending. It was light, it wrapped the story up in a poignant way, and it had all the characters in it. This one here...OoOo boy....get out the Rolaids. LOL!!! Hugs. Love and Hugs, Chicki
Summary: Bette and Tina = Car Sex. "My hips turned up at the moment she slid her fingers inside me. I was juiced up and she knew it"
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CHAPTER 2 Previously…. “Forget it…it wasn’t that important. Just try to relax okay? What did you want to do?” I asked, trying to think of somewhere that we might be able to just hang out for a little while. “Point Rock” Tina said in a serious tone. “You sure….we don’t have to” I offered while I kicked my own ass, hoping in a selfish way she would still agree to go. “No….I want to” Tina said. Tina was unusually serious as we drove to Point Rock. Anytime we went there to make out, she was usually pretty horned up and extremely excited about it. This time, she was different. As I pulled down the dirt road that led to the open area that was usually a bit populated, it was unusually empty this night. *********** I parked in the far corner, away from the only other car that was there. It wasn’t really that dark yet, but the area where I brought my car to a stop, had a few trees which covered a lot of the light from illuminating the car. Tonight felt so different, Tina just wasn’t herself, and I wasn’t sure how I could get her to talk if she really wasn’t up for it. “Tee……why are we here?” I asked gently. “Because I love you and I want us to have sex,” she said as she unbuttoned her jeans. Absent from her face was that usual smile, present was a person who was being very ‘matter of fact’ in her demeanor. “You just don’t seem like you want to be doing this, it’s more like you’re forcing yourself or something. You don’t need to prove anything” Tina had lowered her zipper and kicked her sandals off before lowering her jeans revealing a dark blue lacy thong. “I’m not proving a damn thing. What are you waiting for?” she questioned with a level of haste in her voice. “I just wanted to be sure…” My words were cut off by Tina leaning across the car and across my body. She was pushing her slender fingers through my hair as her lips pressed against mine. I felt her tongue urgently request entry as it forced itself against my lips. I wasted no time in parting them, allowing our tongues to wrestle with one another. “Mmm…..I love you,” Tina said between small breaks in our kisses. “I want you so bad” Tina struggled to free the button from my pants as her mouth remained merged with mine. I felt how anxious she was becoming to have contact with me. I reached down and took hold of my jeans, undoing them myself. As soon as I lowered the zipper her hand was inside them. “Mmm……….no…….undies?” she asked in between sultry kisses. Before I could answer I felt her slender fingers slide between my lips, which had become drenched, a confirmation of just what Tina did to me. My hips turned up at the moment she slid her fingers inside me. I was juiced up and she knew it. “Put the seat back” Tina instructed as she started to move her body onto mine. I slid my hand down to the side of the seat and pressed the button, causing her to fall further into me when it went back. Her fingers were inside me, her thumb circling my clit. I shuddered from the incredible feelings she was creating. “Bette….touch me…please touch me.” Tina begged. I took hold of her shirt and in one desperate move, I pushed it up high. When I did, I had taken her bra with it, exposing both of her firm breasts. My eyes were fixed on them as Tina continued to send waves of pleasure through my body. I placed my hands on her back pulling her body into me as I sucked hard on her swollen nipple. Car sex sucked sometimes, and being a rather humid evening, it became rather oppressive inside the car. I moaned as I felt her thumb once again graze my clit while her fingers continued to remain inside, massaging my inner walls that had begun to close around her fingers. “Mmmm…...so good.” I moaned into her breast as I tasted the skin of her nipple. Tina felt her center tighten more and more as her own sense of need heightened. It wasn’t enough to feel Bette’s mouth just on her breast, she needed more contact in a different place. Her blonde hair was beginning to stick to her forehead as her perspiration grew inside this steam filled car. “God Bette…….what ….are you waiting for?” Tina said as she took in the incredible feelings that were rocking her body while I pleased her breast with my mouth. Before I was able to proceed at my own pace, Tina had grabbed one of my hands and slid it down her thong. My fingers were soaked as I slid them over her clit. She was more than juiced up, and her pleas matched how aroused she had become. “Fuck me baby” Tina pleaded as her free hand wildly made its way through my hair, her other hand continuing to stimulate me. I rolled her swollen clit between my thumb and index finger, knowing that the most sensitive part of a woman’s clit was at one o’clock. With my fingers easily lubricated, I continued a crazy rhythm. I felt her hand drop from my hair to the back of the seat as she grabbed hold of it tight. “Jesus…Bette…….Ohhh……god Babyyy………right…there……..right there….yesssss……oh god d..do…don’t move.” Tina begged as her hips began to grind against my hand. Things were getting so crazy in the car, the feelings, the stimulation, the heightened steam inside the vehicle. It was hard for me to hear her as all I could feel was myself getting closer to climaxing. “Tinaaaa……cum with me….. …I’m gonna cummmmm” As both our bodies rocked from the insatiable shots of pleasure that wracked our bodies, we came as close together as possible, our screams of delight barely confined to the car as we rode out our orgasm. Tina laid limp on my body as we both breathed deep and fast. It had become impossible to see through the windows that were hazed with a thin layer of condensation from our hot breaths. We were both sweating, our body temperature high as our bodies began the journey back to their former state. “God that was so fucking crazy” Tina said into my shirt. She removed her fingers and brought them to her mouth. “Mmmm…god you always taste so fucking good. How do you do that when you don’t even wear panties huh?” “Who needs panties? They can’t show off this fine ass if I were wearing them” I knew I was being cocky but hey, I was the Alpha I could be. I pulled my fingers from Tina and slid each one into my mouth slowly, wanting to savor her. If she thought I tasted good, there was no better taste than the flavor of Tina Kennard. “I prefer this flavor” “Good….don’t ever forget it.” “I won’t…..
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