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probably not until the end of the week”

“I’m very proud you had remembered to complete it in time to turn it in. You didn’t tell me on Friday that you had homework”

“I know…I forgot”

As Fran, Angie and I enjoyed the dinner, the house phone rang.

“Excuse me” I said as I stepped away from the table. “Hello”

“Mrs. Porter”

“Yes”

“This is Mrs. Thatcher, Angie’s teacher”

“Oh…..hello”

“I just wanted to find out what had happened to Angie’s assignment. I know she has always been very studious and has rarely fallen behind. That was why I was surprised when she said she didn’t have time to finish it”

 

 

 




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04/14/2007 , 19:29:10 PM
From: wildtouch
Comments: what tha???



04/14/2007 , 19:30:00 PM
From: wildtouch
Comments: lmao.....i was first......hehhehee.....dont think that i dont read this fic chicki....at first, it was very hard to imagine there NEVER being a tibette......but im gettin used to the idea....pps....love ya.....



04/14/2007 , 19:33:47 PM
From: Ness
Comments: Hey there you...... Angie was CUTE!!!! All shy and stuff. Fran was trying so hard to pull info out of Angie. Well.... I am having a hard time focusing on commenting here..... you know how it is. I love you babe.



04/14/2007 , 19:49:54 PM
From: Ness
Comments: Ok, now that the distraction is on hold for a sex.... er..... I mean sec...... I can leave a longer comment. I think Angie is gonna get in trouble here....... I think she thought she was safe, but as she will find out.... it would have been better to have fessed up in the first place. Well.... as you know, I am still a little sick, but getting much better.... LOL.... well.... aside from the explosion in my head today. LMAO.... but you know.... if my head is going to blow up, it's gonna be the best way..... ahem..... well now that I have shared a little much, LMAO I should go.... right?



04/14/2007 , 20:26:17 PM
From: packer
Comments: OH NO!angie,mom left y a opeing and y blew it,so to speak.wink.im think fran/angie will get along better than we think and shellteach bette/angie to learn to love again and live again.lets see how bette handles this info the teacher just gave her. we love youre stories chickster.p.p.s.



04/14/2007 , 20:36:34 PM
From: Ann Ticipation
Comments: I have a feeling the egg parm is just about to hit the fan. Hoping Bette will count to



04/14/2007 , 20:39:43 PM
From: Ann Ticipation
Comments: UGH! I got cut off. ...count to 10 before she goes off. Perhaps she will put 2 and 2 together and figure out the connection btw the assignment and the info. Angie stumbled upon. Gr8 to get a posting from you this evening, thanks!



04/14/2007 , 21:05:07 PM
From: pogo74
Comments: Uh OH, I hope Angelica just comes clean with Bette. Fran is trying so hard. I think it will work our, but Bette should have told Angelica before now.



04/14/2007 , 21:07:56 PM
From: DoubleL
Comments: I'm guilty of being one of those silent readers. I can't help it... it's easier for me to read than write something new each time. Well, I'm going back into invisible mode :)



04/14/2007 , 21:32:38 PM
From: bettyvhall
Comments: It was weird the last couple of days not seeing your name on a story. Angie should have come clean with Bette, even about Tinas death. To avoid the truth is hard, but you sure do get in a lot ot of trouble. Just hope that Bette doesnt blow,her temper in front of Fran. Let her be her Classy self. Sound like your Pillow friend is under the weather take care of her. thanks



04/14/2007 , 22:45:32 PM
From: azmama
Comments: I truly appreciate your consistent and excellent writing and posting on this site. You have a very generous spirit always willing to post shoutouts when it must take you a huge amount of time when you have so much else to do. I love this story b/c it depicts a vulnerable Bette w/o Tina. She so desperately wants to love and be loved. I am enjoying this Bette. You understand her so well. I am always happy to see that you've posted. Thank you.



04/15/2007 , 01:28:29 AM
From: delicious
Comments: Hey Chick, Just wanted to say being a silent reader for so long does not compare to the interaction and satisfaction one gets from commenting about your story/stories . Thanks for sharing, yourself...... I mean errr.... your life with me/us. *wink* And dinner tonight....mmmmm can't put into words....only one cums to mind and that's delicious. *licking lips* Hope you liked the delivery....cause the pizza sure was good...mmmm*double wink* Hi Ness...shy smile....thanks for letting me be in the middle..... I can't think of a better place to be. *blink blink looking down smiling* mmmm.....good times had by all. Until next time....ggrrrr Now I need to read the story...it's getting late *yawn*



04/15/2007 , 02:34:43 AM
From: delicious
Comments: Mama T's DeathMama T's Death



04/15/2007 , 03:38:17 AM
From: delicious
Comments: LOL....Uh something got a little messed up here. I had all this really great stuff to say. Somehow the only thing that posted was "Mama T's, Death Mama T's Death.....all good/bad things happen for a reason. I guess this is one of them. LOL I'm sure I said something intuitive.(Being between your hard nipples and Nesse's soft shoulder for a few hours.....might have something to do with my error but I'll never tell.)*wink* Chick...Chickinoodle..you are one of the good ones. You are like chicken soup to the soul with a lot of heart. As far as the story I said something about being happy that Bette is moving forward. Angie is happy for Bette but still has to deal with "T's death...T's Death" Enter Mrs. Thatcher.....F**k if I know much from there. However it was heartfelt and good....gggrrr this damn commenting sh*t it sucks.



04/15/2007 , 07:16:31 AM
From: Paula53
Comments: I am with pogo on this one.....Bette should have told Angie the circumstances of Tina's death well before now. It is going to be so much worse! As a lifelong procrastinator I can tell you that this is the truth!great tension you are building here Chicki!



04/15/2007 , 12:04:08 PM
From: Probie
Comments: Those unpredictable teachers.(LOL). So now Bette can find out the truth and go from there. It would be nice for Angie to have someone else to talk to since she is probably very sensitive of Bette's feels as well as her Aunties over Tina's death. Fran seems like the person who can separate her feels for Bette and Angie's need for a sounding board. So when do we get to read the new story? Post already(LMAO)



04/15/2007 , 12:04:41 PM
From: prasnil
Comments: OMG! Angie is in trouble. She should have told the truth, but thats the way with kids. I hope now she tells the real reason and that Bette doesn't blow up. I think Fran will be the soothing hand.. LOL



04/15/2007 , 14:57:40 PM
From: vi2mim2
Comments: Oh oh... Seems that the situation is getting complicated...it's time to talk. Angie had to explain what she did and why (this Mrs That...etc...is hmmm, wow, one mistake and she calls home, wouldn't have liked to be in her school lol), Bette, well, she has a lot to tell to her daughter. Let's see what's going to happen next.Pps.



04/15/2007 , 15:00:53 PM
From: tylo
Comments: A deal is a deal I will have a 9 page one so just get ready!!!!!!!!! fran so far so good let's keeep it that way.. ask her soon bette



04/15/2007 , 15:35:31 PM
From: B
Comments: Hey..well i have some major catching up to do havnt i???...lol..so this one was as good a place as any to start...Yep! i think we all just love Fran...she`s exactly what Bette needs, patient and thoughtful...unless she turns seriel killer on us...well im thinking she is just perfect!..and i have to say i kinda feel sorry for Angie...so the teacher didnt waste too much time in ringing Bette did she??...lol..cut her some slack...she has a lot going on in her little head right now!...i guess that puts Bette and Fran getting `together` on the back burner for awhile..ok im just anxious for them..lol...well cut me some slack then!..im havin a hard time..lol..loved this as always..cya x



04/15/2007 , 17:14:48 PM
From: hope4tb
Comments: Oops... can't wait to see how this plays out.. Hope you don't keep us waiting tooooo long... thank you!!!



04/15/2007 , 20:01:49 PM
From: jb621
Comments: Doesn't really surprise me that Angie didn't finish her assignment. She was probably a little side tracked reading Tina's death certificate. Kind of hard to re-focus on your schoolwork when you have just read something like that. Mrs. Thatcher is a wonderful teacher to follow up with Bette in the evening. Most teacher's call during the day, while your at work & you can't get the scoop from your child. I hope Bette will hear Mrs. Thatcher out and then give Angelica the same courtesy. Fran being over for dinner may help to save Angelica from the wrath of Bette! PS.



04/17/2007 , 03:36:48 AM
From: robbeedee
Comments: Hey Chicki, Good to see you back and posting more of this inspirational tale. Getting over the loss of a lover, partner and soul mate is one of the hardest things to do. I think only the death of a child breaks your heart more. Finding someone to fill some of the empty space in your mind, soul and body is something special. Something to hang on with both hands. Something to shout about. Something to cherish and protoect. Something to savor and help you through the lonely nights and desperate days. Bette has found that something and someone in Fran. Now Angelica is beginning to open up and appreciate the benefits of having two parents is an awesome adventure. Unfortunately finding out about her mother's passing has been a life stopping moment. Now she needs to open up to her mother and tell Bette how she feels. The missed assessment is purely a symptom of this feeling of loss and betrayal. I wnat Bette to stay calm and talk things through with Angelica. Perhaps Fran can act as an intermediary and get these two to converse quickly and quietly. Whatever the ramifications I know that they will be steeped in reality. Thank you for this awesome adventure. Your Loyal Fan.



04/18/2007 , 20:27:21 PM
From: ut
Comments: Good chapter. Angie is cute and a little shy, and a little in trouble too lol. Ok let see more please, thanks!



04/18/2007 , 23:30:47 PM
From: hope4tb
Comments: Hey Chicki... I hear you are holding out on us!!! Chapter 13 has been posted on another site? HMH????? You are so busted... post it here ASAP!!!! LOL



04/20/2007 , 03:19:10 AM
From: jomarad
Comments: Finally....I reached the last chapter of this story, I mean not the last I hope, but the last one you posted. I posted my comments on all the other ones, not expecting you to read them but for my own sake. When I try to come to terms with something I read, I have to write it down to get it out of my system...wel anyway sorry for the rant here. I like reading stories that confront me with myself and where I can find some similarities with my own life. For instance the sentence: Drive carefully, it's something that I used to use very often untill someone said to me, hey I'm not a child you don't have to say that. I use the sentence now in my head and hope they arrive safely. I really hope Bette will not give Angie a hard time about what she just learned. She has to deal with this very carefully. I hope to find your next chapter very soon because reading all those chapters in a row left me with an addiction here. Thanks for making me feel the way I feel now. Btw. can I pass on the eggplant parmesan please, I'm not very fond of it...I'll just take a slice of garlic bread of you don't mind ;-).



04/23/2007 , 15:56:30 PM
From: BeLena
Comments: hey hun, see I got here too finally :). I read this story in one piece and I must say you touched me deeply. i felt so heartbroken about Bette not wanting to go on with her life but I guess that's what happens when you truly love someone. But I'm so glad to see she finally realized she was entitled to go on with her life and I hope she will be²happy again. is it obvious I have a weak spot for Bette LOL.Now what Angie is concerned I think she 's up for some BIiiiiiiiig trouble here.PPS partner I love this one



04/26/2007 , 09:07:36 AM
From: Lamentamini
Comments: I FINALLY got caught up! LMAO I can almost picture Bette asking Angie's teacher if in another life she was a telemarketer since they seem to call around dinnertime. lol Maybe Angie is shy around Fran because she has a crush on her. =O



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