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When deep dark brown eyes would look at her like that...

 

 

 

 

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03/19/2007 , 15:33:41 PM
From: Lamentamini
Comments: 1st?



03/19/2007 , 15:45:04 PM
From: B&TROX!!!
Comments: HEYYY!!! omg I was beginning to worry lol I'm soooo glad you posted today, it brightened my day. :) Great chapter BTW I can't wait for the next one:)



03/19/2007 , 15:50:08 PM
From: Oaron
Comments: Breaks my heart everytime



03/19/2007 , 15:50:31 PM
From: Eddy
Comments: Good, good. It finally goes on. Already wait longingly for the continuation. Post soon



03/19/2007 , 15:51:15 PM
From: Lamentamini
Comments: And I still think Bette's a dipshit for not suggesting Tina go find something else to wear. lol Yes, I know how the story goes, but seriously, people are assholes and Bette should've thought of that. I was actually thinking of this story this morning while watching something about chick flicks. lol PPS!



03/19/2007 , 16:22:13 PM
From: Nana S
Comments: so glad you posted a chapter!! Was missing this story!! pps



03/19/2007 , 16:46:51 PM
From: Bealschick
Comments: Happy,happy,joy,joy! Luv'n it! Ppreeaalys.



03/19/2007 , 17:51:13 PM
From: ingeborg
Comments: Give me more and longer!!! Bette should have gone shopping with Tina; maybe she will later on? Post soon, i'm waiting!



03/19/2007 , 17:53:00 PM
From: pattifloatn
Comments: Goodie, I love this story. Those mean ladies will get their due all in good time. Wait till Bette Porter gets a hold of them. You really do feel bad for Tina and only wish that her life will get better. Yoda knows that Ms. Tina is falling for this unknown lady. What would be nice is when these two get together that Jamey comes to live with his mother and then gains another mother in the process.



03/19/2007 , 20:32:41 PM
From: ninety9percentsure
Comments: I think u did it JUSTICE!!! Can't wait for the next post. Quite sure Bette's reaction is going to be priceless. I think Tina needs a friend in the big bad Hollywood land and to show those snubs a thing or two. When u work on commission everybody is important despite the appearance. PLEASE POST SOOOON!!!



03/19/2007 , 21:07:32 PM
From: bettyvhall
Comments: No to the shoulder. Going to have surgery. Maybe after COUPLE of I CAN JUMP SOMEONES BONES. hE (THE DR) said it would take a yr ,so watch out in Aug I should be well Gee I hope so Tired of the pain,and the sling,and using my left arm/ I been in the hospital for about 5 days. that sucks. So glad you did post. I dilike uppity people. Bet they put there pants on the same as you and I one leg at a time. Tina didnt need to be treated that way. Thanks my young friend



03/19/2007 , 23:16:08 PM
From: BetteAndTinaForever
Comments: poor tina, so humiliating...good i know the ending of this story



03/19/2007 , 23:52:32 PM
From: Ann Ticipation
Comments: What an extremely flavorful marriage of storylines. I simply have to go back and read the preceding chapters. Once again, brilliant concept!



03/20/2007 , 01:21:49 AM
From: tylo
Comments: great update post more BOF plus this could b soooooooooooooooooooo much longer



03/20/2007 , 01:45:31 AM
From: gogk
Comments: This was so sad! i want kick those persons!!! how they dare to judge Tina? well there are persons that always judge everybody without reason but Tina won't be to be afraid that Bette will see her in the same way because it won't happen



03/20/2007 , 03:14:54 AM
From: NYGayLady
Comments: Come on, mate, you know you'll always find me in the comments! Need I state again how amazing I think this is? Yes? Oh, well, I think it's great. ;) *hugs* Better be back this way soon, or else! ;)



03/20/2007 , 08:05:51 AM
From: caitlin-jayne
Comments: one word: marvellous!!! keep up the good work.



03/20/2007 , 08:40:28 AM
From: rockingirl
Comments: Hey pal! good to have you back! I just came back from my vacations and I was afraid I had missed your posts, have to check that anyway. Writer's block? doesn't seem so, keep the updates coming! Loved the movie and love your approach of it.



03/20/2007 , 17:00:09 PM
From: sofasitter
Comments: Awww, *sobs* ... but Bette would never do that to Tina .. right? Love this, pps



03/20/2007 , 19:24:47 PM
From: Aisling
Comments: aww nice chapter :) Thank you for posting hun! Was just the thing to cheer me up today!!



03/21/2007 , 02:29:02 AM
From: hansen
Comments: Awwww you're breaking my heart with this post - it was that good!!! But to short, I want more....PLEASE LOL. Great one doc :o))



03/21/2007 , 02:36:05 AM
From: yws
Comments: Wait until Ms. Alpha Bette hears this! All hell will break lose. Love your story, pps.



03/21/2007 , 06:53:14 AM
From: zabo
Comments: Oh my... how my heart breaks seeing Tina like that :( This is more intense than watching the movie... gosh... and don't let anybody harsh words or stares bringing her down... her mom!! Gosh, what mother is that to call her daughter 'good-for-nothing white trash'... that's really really mean... ugh...



03/23/2007 , 23:53:50 PM
From: ut
Comments: Aww poor Tina, my heartbreak for Tina, just want to kick those mean people. Just when you go to store you wear something not expensive or nice they will look at you like you a poor or not have money to come to buy clothes or thing. Anyway wait until Bette find out, she gonna kick those peoples ass. OK post soon please and a little longer please, thanks!



03/25/2007 , 02:40:47 AM
From: jomarad
Comments: Wow girl, you've captured these feelings very accurate, I still can remember and feel these cold stares from those shop ladies when I visited their shops back in the sixties. Me standing there, long hair, peace sign painted on my forehead, long dress, barefoot and asking for a dress to go to the marriage anniversary of my parents. They refused me of course I didn't expect anyhting else. Dit was weer een geweldig hoofdstuk, elke keer denk ik dat kan ze niet overtreffen en dan slaag je er toch in om steeds weer iets toe te voegen dat net iets beter is dan het vorige. Ik wou dat ik eens een paar minuutjes in je hoofd kon kijken...er moet veel schoonheid wonen daar. Thanks for making my day bright.



03/29/2007 , 10:00:08 AM
From: Kword75
Comments: Awww.... So sad!!!! Even though I knew it was coming, i'm still on the verge of tears... That last sentence is as magnificent as it is cruel! Broke my heart... But I know my dear Captain will make it all better!!! At least, Bette will! Looking forward to that! Mission accomplished, dear J, don't you worry, it's just perfect! The effect you were so concerned about is there, trust me! Thanks a lot and please post soon! Hugs!



04/01/2007 , 14:01:34 PM
From: Trolle
Comments: Ohhh lord we want more - this was way to short.....but I did miss this story very much so I'm so glad you postet - please post again soon.



06/17/2007 , 14:41:15 PM
From: Trolle
Comments: Always good to see an update on this beautiful story of yours :O) - let the fun begin.............post soon



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