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Chiaroscuro Chapter 28 by Linbooks
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She took a deep breath and turned to Bette, “And the other?” Bette’s arm shook as she moved the light to shine on the other painting. Tina turned back and gasped. She stared at her own face consumed with the passion of being loved by Bette Porter—her eyes half lidded, a golden amber glow they became only at this moment, her mouth open, her head thrown back—she could almost see the pulse beating at her neck, hear herself panting. The feelings she had tried so hard to forget came flooding back. What it had felt like to be pleasured by Bette Porter. She remember Bette’s voice making love to her, urging her toward orgasm, opening her up beyond her wildest imagination. She stared at the painting feeling an intolerable loss. How had she lost this? How had she allowed herself to forget this? Tina moved toward Bette and reached her hand to caress her face softly and then drew it away. “Thank you.” Bette looked at her, questioning. “Thank you for remembering how much you loved me, Bette. Thank you for this—for reminding me how much we had.” “Tina…” Tina moved toward the barn doors. “Please show them, Bette. I’m proud that you remember me that way.” She felt the tears sliding down her face and moved into the moonlit night. “Can you drive me back please?”
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02/19/2007 ,
15:32:29 PM
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Jackiee1
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Bravo

02/19/2007 ,
15:33:14 PM
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sofasitter
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I so love this story, Tina needs to realise they both still love each other and start telling Bette what she *really* wants

02/19/2007 ,
15:36:00 PM
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jp22
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I don't think there was ever a question that Bette would forget how she loved Tina. Nice chapter, thanks, Lin.

02/19/2007 ,
15:38:14 PM
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LetsBoogie
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Been reading this story from the first chapter on, what a precious story and very well written. Thank you!

02/19/2007 ,
15:43:51 PM
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Nanc
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Nice. Really, really, nice.

02/19/2007 ,
15:46:03 PM
From:
BigO
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Ahh, that was great. I just got back from being away for two weeks and caught up with the last 4 chapters....so well done!

02/19/2007 ,
15:49:11 PM
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bettyvhall
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Can't give you a zillion stars.but would be honored to do so. That was so amazing. Love how Tina is our old Tina. sHE HAD GUT ENOUGH TO TELL BETTE. Just thanks for posting.

02/19/2007 ,
15:50:37 PM
From:
IMHO
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Wow! This story justs captures you and doesn't let go for a second! PPS!!

02/19/2007 ,
15:56:41 PM
From:
xxjoey6
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Brilliant chapter, please make Tina beopen with Bette Love it PPS

02/19/2007 ,
16:16:23 PM
From:
vam
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Wonderful story, wonderfully written.

02/19/2007 ,
16:18:21 PM
From:
Emae29
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Simply, excellent, my dear! Splendidly written. I love this story! Please post soon. I am dying to see how the show turns out.

02/19/2007 ,
16:19:17 PM
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mette hartmann
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This is such a great story. The calm and ease with which you portray your characters is just awesome. Truly a beautiful story.

02/19/2007 ,
17:16:02 PM
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Spumoni
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I have been reading your story from the start and am happy every time I see that a new chapter has been posted. Thanks for writing and for sharing and for adding "chiaroscuro" to my vocabulary.

02/19/2007 ,
17:29:44 PM
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marijejip
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At least they are finaly capable to listen to each other. it's about time that both start atmitting that they do not only want to be Angelica's parents again but to fulfil an important role in each others lives again as well. Time for more honesty and admitting the love that is still burried deep inside both women's hearts. Beautiful story. Very endearing.

02/19/2007 ,
17:35:57 PM
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packer
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oh shit!tina dont leave it like this? the love is still there both of ya know it now let the other know.p.p.s

02/19/2007 ,
18:23:09 PM
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pattifloatn
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The long awaited talk did not disappoint me at all. It was thoughtful and heart breaking to read the dismantling of Tina and then to have Tina realize what has happened to Bette during that time. Maybe just maybe they can at least talk and of course in my Tibette world they could somehow become a family again.

02/19/2007 ,
18:37:56 PM
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phyl
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This is such a wonderful, realistic story. Please, someone make Bette a sandwich or something!

02/19/2007 ,
18:38:11 PM
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akalittlered
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WOW!!! I just hope Tina can tell Bette how she fells about her. Bette the same. Wonderfull Thank you PPS

02/19/2007 ,
18:52:17 PM
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Probie
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This was wonderful and very visual. Thank you.

02/19/2007 ,
20:26:37 PM
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kelika
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Outstanding.

02/19/2007 ,
21:18:49 PM
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divinemu
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Beautiful. So beautiful. Thank you

02/19/2007 ,
21:21:16 PM
From:
BetteAndTinaForever
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this morning i realize that it's hard for me to read post season 3 tibette stories, especially the ones that are closely following s4 development, those stories get mixed with the actual show and i feel unsettled by it but your story, even though there's so much emotional drama in it, is so wonderful and so brilliantly written that at actually helps to watch s4...thank you for the beauty and for the tibette hope

02/19/2007 ,
22:40:51 PM
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gemo
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I've told you before. This is a wonderful story.Your a brilliant writer. Thank you.

02/20/2007 ,
01:55:59 AM
From:
Rau
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well............i was doing a happy dance cuz u posted....now i'm a little sad...pleaz post soon...i love this story

02/20/2007 ,
02:04:39 AM
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robbeedee
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Linbrooks, Good to see the gals are talking and listening to each other. How intense and overbearing was this first meeting. The air hund heavy with unsaid thoughts and emotions. The turbulence of their feelings threatened to interfere with the need to be heard. Big slap on the back for Tina as she finally grabbed her automony and told Bette how it was. To make yourself that vunerable to someone who could eaily reject you is a brave and courageous act. WOnderful to see that Bette has opened up enough to show Tina the paintings and her method of working through the pain. I do want a happy ending but realize that this will take hard work and effort from both characters. Teh gals need to want to change for themselves firstly and secondly for the relationship and child. Jaw-droppingly great writing as I type stunned into silence by the magitude of your words. Thank you so much for this metaphysical experience. Your Loyal Fan.

02/20/2007 ,
02:04:43 AM
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robbeedee
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Linbrooks, Good to see the gals are talking and listening to each other. How intense and overbearing was this first meeting. The air hund heavy with unsaid thoughts and emotions. The turbulence of their feelings threatened to interfere with the need to be heard. Big slap on the back for Tina as she finally grabbed her automony and told Bette how it was. To make yourself that vunerable to someone who could eaily reject you is a brave and courageous act. WOnderful to see that Bette has opened up enough to show Tina the paintings and her method of working through the pain. I do want a happy ending but realize that this will take hard work and effort from both characters. Teh gals need to want to change for themselves firstly and secondly for the relationship and child. Jaw-droppingly great writing as I type stunned into silence by the magitude of your words. Thank you so much for this metaphysical experience. Your Loyal Fan.

02/20/2007 ,
03:12:02 AM
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tiff_duke
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Great story, wonderfully written. Eagerly anticipating the next chapter.

02/20/2007 ,
03:16:38 AM
From:
BPTK4ever
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Wow, a wonderful chapter. I love this story, can´t get enough of it. I´m captured. pps

02/20/2007 ,
13:14:18 PM
From:
coop
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That was great. So glad Bette at least let Tina say what she needed to. But Tina needs to tell her the rest, let her know how she feels. Bette, don't take her back, tell her you want her to stay.

02/21/2007 ,
06:15:50 AM
From:
gingerbread986
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This is so beautifully written. Can't wait to read what's next. Thanks.

02/22/2007 ,
08:47:33 AM
From:
fergz1
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That made me cry. I so want these two back together...in your story and on the show. thanks.

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