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5in">“I know.  Do me a favor?”

“Anything.”

“Dance with me, darling.”

*          *            *            *            *

The next morning, Tina awoke around ten to take Yankee out.  She stopped in the doorway of the bedroom, smiling at the image of Bette still asleep in the jeans and tank.  They’d fallen asleep during their second movie, rousing around three to stumble into the bedroom, climbing in and falling asleep in each other’s arms for the first time after gentle goodnight kisses.  They were still that way when Tina woke up to good morning kisses on her face from an enthusiastic Yankee.

            When they got back, Tina quietly crawled back into bed, and Bette sidled up next to her, laying her head on Tina’s chest and promptly falling back asleep.  Tina drifted off soon after her, smiling as she recalled the heart-warming image she’d noticed when she returned: two pairs of heels by the front door.

It’s not that Tina Kennard was just a happy, content, or fulfilled woman.  She was whole.

 

The End




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01/27/2007 , 17:58:20 PM
From: Jobadge
Comments: Absolutely great... but I'm sure we need a follow up!



01/27/2007 , 17:58:44 PM
From: Jobadge
Comments: Oooooo, I'm first! LOL



01/27/2007 , 18:02:40 PM
From: anker
Comments: I agree with Jo... a follow up is a must!!! This was just beautiful, NY... I loved it... I think you've got it big time!



01/27/2007 , 18:13:31 PM
From: Probie
Comments: Great story. I agree follow-up definately needed.



01/27/2007 , 18:20:41 PM
From: jp22
Comments: That was absolutely lovely. Astaire and Rogers as a metaphor for Bette and Tina, that was lovely too. I can't wait 'til you post your other story. Thanks for this, it was great, NY.



01/27/2007 , 18:27:36 PM
From: ayesha23
Comments: great job on this very sweet journey. and i agree with jobadge, we really do need a follow up!



01/27/2007 , 19:03:36 PM
From: lmack
Comments: Enjoyed the story...sweet, cute, great metaphor...but please post the next story soon, don't tease. We all know where it is going and who doesn't love a good B&T lovin'.



01/27/2007 , 19:44:34 PM
From: CoffeexStained
Comments: that was the perfect ending for these two; absolutly loved it and i hope you post more stories beacuse your writing is beautiful!



01/27/2007 , 19:45:02 PM
From: coop
Comments: Fantastic. Definitly need a sequel. You, know, the wedding, children, growing old together.



01/27/2007 , 19:57:55 PM
From: azmama
Comments: NYGL.....This was wonderful and I so loved the Fred and Ginger comparison. On the show when they are together and not bitching at each other, they are truly soulmates.



01/27/2007 , 20:06:07 PM
From: skycaptain
Comments: NY NY this was a wonderful story...I am sad to see it go but I am okay because you assured us you would write again. You wrote those 2 so well...and I am glad it ended happily. I am looking forward to reading more from you...oh and nothing wrong with being a film nerd...I heard there is a certain sexiness there.



01/27/2007 , 20:58:10 PM
From: BBR3
Comments: Good God woman, you are a hopeless romantic yourself. how could I ever tire of you? Your story was nothing, but first class and deserves a follow up, for us hopeless romantics. I will miss you till you write again. B



01/27/2007 , 21:05:06 PM
From: zabo
Comments: WOw.... I just love the way you write... can you write more? Gosh... I know thise is like the longest chapter you have? But still I can't have enough... and sorry, I didn't mean to rub my hot weather here on your nose... it's just that I need to get out from this country to somewhere cooler for once ;) Post soon... on this story or another once... pleaaasseee... :D



01/27/2007 , 21:19:52 PM
From: Rau
Comments: Lovely...and could be lovlier with the follow-up (raising my eyebrows suggestively here!!!!)...more...more...more...I even like the environment/their work situation, friends etc...so NO STOPPING NOW...



01/27/2007 , 21:21:11 PM
From: Rau
Comments: FORGOT...I love YANKEE...more story evn if its the adventures of Yankee!!! lmao



01/27/2007 , 21:57:28 PM
From: Lamentamini
Comments: I figured there would be dancing in this chapter. I just wasn't sure if it was a waltz, a quickstep, or the horizontal boogie. xD Such a sweet and awesome story. And believe it or not, the two pairs of heels got me all choked up. Don't ever worry about being a movie geek. I'm a music geek and damn proud of it. Here's to TiBette and Fringer (wow that sounds odd).



01/27/2007 , 23:03:31 PM
From: annieb69
Comments: please, please keep going with this story, they are too cute in it!!!!



01/28/2007 , 00:01:33 AM
From: Sploosh
Comments: This was a beautifully written story. We definitely need a follow up.



01/28/2007 , 03:08:48 AM
From: ingeborg
Comments: What a sweet ending to a beautiful story. Thank you so much for posting, you did great! Hope you have another story in store for us, so don't keep us waiting too long ;-)



01/28/2007 , 03:13:06 AM
From: chefette
Comments: Fantastic. What a lovely romantic story, you have to do a follow up...8-)



01/28/2007 , 03:41:25 AM
From: M99
Comments: Well done, your story was fantastic, loved it, Thank you.



01/28/2007 , 07:06:03 AM
From: Kword75
Comments: Amazingly sweet, NYGayLady! I sure hope you'll come back with either a sequel or another wonderful story of yours. Thanks for sharing!



01/28/2007 , 10:19:22 AM
From: Seahurst
Comments: This story had everything needed to warm the hearts of all us romantics. Thank you...this was truly lovely.



01/28/2007 , 10:26:23 AM
From: Just Once
Comments: Thank you for this wonderful and heart warming story!



01/28/2007 , 10:44:32 AM
From: dusktildawn
Comments: amazing great end but ive joined the line with the sign follow up , although id be happy to read any story you post :)



01/28/2007 , 11:27:14 AM
From: bettyvhall
Comments: You gave these two warn memories to keep them warn on cold winter nites. That was beautiful thanks



01/28/2007 , 11:52:55 AM
From: fergz1
Comments: This story was perfect..and now I must go pout like a kid that is over. Thank you and can't wait for more of your writing.



01/28/2007 , 12:04:12 PM
From: ess-n-tee
Comments: i loved your story, from start to end. meant to comment much earlier but always found myself on someone else's computer when i read each of your chappies, and i couldn't remember my password, my login, whatever. anyway, your writing is clean, flows smoothly and is wonderful to read. the storyline was imaginative and uplifting. can't wait for your next pieces! thanks!



01/28/2007 , 15:58:16 PM
From: pattifloatn
Comments: Wow, so Tina feels totally whole now and I also figure that Bette feels the same way. Great story and I can't wait for the next story that you take up.



01/28/2007 , 20:26:57 PM
From: BetteAndTinaForever
Comments: perfect...



05/22/2007 , 00:13:21 AM
From: ut
Comments: That was amazing and beautiful, love it!



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