12/01/2006 ,
22:14:32 PM From:
Chicki Comments:
YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH ------ Gumby I am soooooo happy that you decided to post your story. I know you have been developing this over the last several months, and the idea itself is THE BOMB for sure. You are an extremely gifted and talented writer who is able to convey a great deal of emotion and substance in every paragraph. You have absolutely no idea how happy I am to see you expressing your creativity. It is a privilege to be able to read anything you have to write.I just can't express how happy I am that you are writing again Hun. ** HUGS **
12/01/2006 ,
22:30:24 PM From:
divinemu Comments:
Nicely written. Keep going. I like your characters and story line.
12/01/2006 ,
22:36:14 PM From:
smiley Comments:
G-Woman, your BACCCCCCKKKKKKK,Ohhhh YEEEEAAAAAHHHH! Awesome start! It's realistic that Angie would be faced with the these kind of problems in school even if it's like 2019(?). Although I don't advocate for violence I am glad she beat that BITCH down!lol Obiviously the girl is HATER and Angie probably looks better than her as well. I already see your going to be creating a sexual haze between TiBette and I'm already looking forward to it. I hope your Tina is different than on the show and thus far she seems like it. What's going on with your previous stories, I so want to re-read them again. Who's ass do I have to kick to get them back? Question: Should I be buckling up for another dip on the dramaroller-coaster or is this going to be like a ferris wheel ride? I gotta know so I can prepare! lol Post soon!
12/01/2006 ,
22:37:22 PM From:
LadyD Comments:
The storyline is defiantly an original. I am interested in reading how you develop their relationships. Please continue!
12/01/2006 ,
22:43:59 PM From:
wildtouch Comments:
I am not first....blah blah blah...i'll get over it....i reckon.....great start gumbo.....i love this....please feel free to post as often as you like......lmao.....like tommorrow.......and chicki......u were only first cuz you probably posted the fic for her.....you aint right.....you cheated......lmao......later beautiful ladiz........
12/01/2006 ,
22:52:07 PM From:
miamigrl Comments:
GUMBY IS BACK! Hurray!!!!!!!!!!!!!! We get an early X-Mas present. Hey, Gumby I'm a lovin' this story. Sad to see what Angie is being put through but glad to see B&T taking it on together.
12/01/2006 ,
22:57:47 PM From:
NYGayLady Comments:
Poor Angie. I can't even imagine. But... B&T seem to be in a good place with LOTS of potential. Mayhaps? Hopefully.
12/01/2006 ,
22:58:32 PM From:
pattifloatn Comments:
Glad to see you back. Poor Angie. Some one needs to teach these kids some manners and respect. Maybe with the help of Bette and Tina she will be okay. On the B&T front, anyway to get them on the same page as far as being a couple again? Maybe B&T should show up to school and let all those Jerks take a good look at both of them and see if negative comments continue come flying out of their mouths.
12/01/2006 ,
23:00:24 PM From:
azmama Comments:
Hey, Chicki didn't you promise us our NC-17 today, Friday, Dec.1???? Gumby, I love this new s/l. very original. I like TiBette having to handle a confused and somewhat defiant 7th grader. Tough age. I like that B & T are still into each other physically although they are separated. Do you intend for them to try to reunite, make some overtures for reuniting in more than just friends way? After literally tens of B & T stories, it is great to see a fresh and different approach especially in the capable hands of an excellent writer.
12/01/2006 ,
23:10:31 PM From:
Seahurst Comments:
Wonderful start! Glad to see you are back...thanks!
12/01/2006 ,
23:11:43 PM From:
superdaddy Comments:
bring it on Gumby, the attraction and stubbornness is there already, and so is the slow burn. LOOKING FORWARD TO UPDATES!!!!
12/01/2006 ,
23:25:41 PM From:
bettyvhall Comments:
Thanks for posting again. Bette and Tina really didnt expect this. Some children are just mean. Maybe she will realize this after explaining what the fight was about..Maybe that is where she learn all this from her parents. thanks
12/01/2006 ,
23:49:14 PM From:
Lamentamini Comments:
OMFG it's Gumby! So some of Angie's friends have a crush on Bette huh? Can't say I blame them. ;) Looking forward to more!
12/02/2006 ,
00:05:08 AM From:
jb621 Comments:
Gumby, great story! I love reading your stories. You are such a fantastic writer and this story line is definately unique. Hopefully, Angie will be able to work through her school trouble. Kids can be so cruel!!! PPS.
12/02/2006 ,
00:31:14 AM From:
asia Comments:
Hey Gumby, very original.. It's great that Bette and Tina are working together to help comfort Angie and hopefully this hidden desire they have will bring them back together as well.
12/02/2006 ,
01:37:07 AM From:
Rau Comments:
I had to get over my fearfactor first, I hate stories of B & T apart for several years...but then I faced my fear lol...and roared uproariously at Angelica's comment in the car about the HOT BETTE PORTER being able to make time for her; and then when Bette arrived and u described T's reaction to B and B's reaction to T...I got all happy, excited and hopeful that they would get together thru this crisis over Angie!!! Well written...thanks...PPS
12/02/2006 ,
01:40:35 AM From:
Rau Comments:
Can u help me out? I have no idea how old a 7th grader is?????
12/02/2006 ,
02:30:55 AM From:
BetteAndTinaForever Comments:
glad to see you back and with such an interesting story...maybe angie can bring B&T back together
12/02/2006 ,
03:13:49 AM From:
skycaptain Comments:
Well hey there Gumby! Welcome back. I am loving this story out the box. It's sad that Angelica has to go thru that. I think this expierence will bring them all closer together...once they talk to Angelica and she sees that her moms are behind her. There is clearly still an attraction between B&T I hope they see it thru. Keep posting we want more.
12/02/2006 ,
04:17:01 AM From:
curious Comments:
gumby u have been missed this was awesome as usual
12/02/2006 ,
05:22:38 AM From:
lostinside Comments:
woo hoo! Gumby is back :) Poor Angie life is already getting hard for her..must be hard to listen to all those craps about her moms every day. Post Soon!.
12/02/2006 ,
07:35:38 AM From:
Paula53 Comments:
wonderful start, Gumby.....welcome back...Please post soon!
12/02/2006 ,
08:40:39 AM From:
2005fanforever Comments:
WELCOME back Gumby! Your writing has been missed!
12/02/2006 ,
09:21:19 AM From:
akalittlered Comments:
WOW!!! Gunby your back, and with a Another Hit on your hands. Poor Angie. I know kids of this age are so mean to each other. I know my son is in the 8th grade. I hope B&T can help her through this. It sounds like B&T are still Hot for each other. Maybe they will get back together please. Glad your back. PPS
12/02/2006 ,
10:36:12 AM From:
justloveB+T Comments:
So Angel is questioning their break-up eh? ;) So am I! Especially seeing they are still so attracted to eachother! Tina is so yealouse about this Kirsten/Kristen person O.o I wanna know moreeee!
12/02/2006 ,
12:49:51 PM From:
tylo Comments:
GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG your back with a great story to boot kristen has to go so far looks like tina is the alpha.. i like her but shhhhhhhhhhh 4 pages could be longer butsince it is your first post in a while i will let it slide longer
12/02/2006 ,
18:24:24 PM From:
Brooke Comments:
Glad to see you back with this fresh new story...I am already wanting more, much more. Post real soon
12/02/2006 ,
21:01:01 PM From:
Ness Comments:
YIPEEEEE welcome back G. I know how much writing means to you. I like this story so far. B&T still sound as hot as ever. I hope that they will live happily ever after... (HAHA.... we are far from that, but I can hope, right?) Poor Angie being picked on for something that is way out of her control. Kids can be so cruel, eh? I know chicki is waiting to post until after I post a comment, so I will post it now. Again, great to see you back. Ness
12/02/2006 ,
21:27:23 PM From:
Fresa Comments:
Hey - awesome start! I really enjoyed reading this and I can't wait for more!
03/25/2007 ,
23:50:19 PM From:
ut Comments:
Good start!
