It was only moments before she heard Tina’s breathing catch above her and an intense shudder work its way through Tina’s body.
Tina pulled Bette up and almost immediately reached between her legs, her intent clear through her actions. Hands wandered in both directions, neither one the least bit concerned with how much noise they made.
“Lean back,” Tina stopped kissing Bette to make the request. “I can’t wait to taste you.”
Tina’s hand again reached to encourage more desire from her lover. Her fingers moved effortlessly over the aroused flesh before she moved down to taste for herself.
She kissed Bette one last time before beginning her descent.
Tina didn’t hesitate at all, having been fighting the temptation long enough. She reached out the tip of her tongue to run over swollen ready flesh, already slick with desire. Tina couldn’t keep the moan from escaping as she tasted Bette and heard her response. She directed her tongue to Bette’s clit, while Bette reached to either side and attempted in vain to grip at the mattress. Her toes curled against the sheet as Tina’s talented tongue teased at her. She was pushed over the edge when Tina slipped her fingers inside, continuing to attend to Bette with her tongue. She fell into oblivion, the pleasure radiating from the point of Tina’s contact and beyond, engulfing her body in pure bliss.
Bette lay back exhausted while Tina moved up to rest beside her. She leaned in to kiss Bette’s shoulder as her breathing returned to normal.
“One hour down, seven to go,” Tina smiled. “Come here…”
11/01/2006 ,
00:16:22 AM From:
Anngie Mosby Comments:
Great post swimmie! I loved your snippets. You're right - S3 was a figment of everyone's imaginations except the (HA) writers, who used no imagination when writing S3! LOL! Thanks for the story!
11/01/2006 ,
00:17:54 AM From:
curioust Comments:
Oh my...worth staying up late for, like i can really go to sleep anytime soon after this :) Love your snippets. Thanks JKS!
11/01/2006 ,
00:18:24 AM From:
azmama Comments:
swimmie...Always a pleasure to read your stories. Some strange punctuation at the end of the story.
11/01/2006 ,
00:21:13 AM From:
tylo Comments:
hottttttttttttttttttttttt longer
11/01/2006 ,
00:22:55 AM From:
NYGayLady Comments:
I was just thinking about dropping you a line to see if you did, indeed, live, but I think it's clear from this post that YES, indeed you do!
11/01/2006 ,
01:02:59 AM From:
2_much_2handle Comments:
Wow that was Wow. I'm at a lost for words here. Great job on the snippet. Look forward to seeing more.
11/01/2006 ,
01:33:37 AM From:
equinoxgirl Comments:
Swimmie..I dare you to do more! :D
11/01/2006 ,
01:51:37 AM From:
hansen Comments:
Yehaaaa you're back, you've been missed :o)). This was.....WOW, so fucking hot!!!! With that last line from T, you just have to write 7 more LOL....I'm looking forward to it :o))
11/01/2006 ,
03:43:39 AM From:
missyang Comments:
That's hoooot! Glad to see you decide to finish it. ;)
11/01/2006 ,
06:14:45 AM From:
dedpreztourist Comments:
whew! hot stuff. S3? when does it start?
11/01/2006 ,
06:49:11 AM From:
AmandaMG Comments:
season 3 sucked... that god for stories like this one... please continue...oh and welcome back
11/01/2006 ,
06:49:49 AM From:
girl drummer Comments:
Swimmie, thank for this wonderful post. With 7 more hours to go, you can give us another HOT chapter.....PLEASE
11/01/2006 ,
07:03:32 AM From:
Keisha Comments:
mmmhmmm See you read my mind!, that is how s3 should of kicked off!, I don't know what Ilene was thinking!, I was definatly thinking along these lines, Post soon!, Im enjoying!
11/01/2006 ,
07:04:44 AM From:
Jwet Comments:
JKS I so love the way your mind thinks if only other thought the same the world would be spinning on the right axis. Thanks this was just the lift I was in desparate need for.
11/01/2006 ,
07:38:51 AM From:
moho Comments:
JKS, great as always. If anyone gets a chance check out the JKS story called Keepsakes on the Creative Writing Board. You won't be disappointed.
11/01/2006 ,
08:33:39 AM From:
justkeepswimming Comments:
Hi everyone...Thanks for commenting. Moho just drew my attention to a tidbit of information - the keepsakes story is not in fact mine. It's written by "jstkeepswimming". They've left out the "u". Not me. I haven't posted any stories under any other name. Hope you're having a good day!
11/01/2006 ,
08:40:18 AM From:
Lamentamini Comments:
I think we should get the other 7 hours. Bless Shane's pee-pickin' heart. *happy heart*
11/01/2006 ,
08:42:06 AM From:
BetteAndTinaForever Comments:
where's the other 7 chapters? one for each hour...thanks, this was great to read before work LOL...season 3 didn't happen
11/01/2006 ,
08:53:53 AM From:
dalloway3 Comments:
I like your season3 snippets much better... i refuse to acknowledge the other season 3!
11/01/2006 ,
09:04:19 AM From:
fergz1 Comments:
JKS...how happy was I just to see your name! If only Season 3 didn't exist. So glad to see you back and I hope you get inspiration to write more.
11/01/2006 ,
09:38:09 AM From:
Just Once Comments:
Very Sexy !!! Really enjoyed this one very much - So nice to have a friend like Shane - Thanks so very much for writing, swimmie! *smiles*
11/01/2006 ,
10:20:30 AM From:
prasnil Comments:
Great to see you back, jks and thanks for this great chappy! :) Hope 7 more will follow ;-)
11/01/2006 ,
11:05:07 AM From:
Skipton Comments:
awesome JKS and i too thought it was you on the creative writing site. loved reading this and hope you can come up with more...
11/01/2006 ,
11:10:02 AM From:
akalittlered Comments:
WOW!!!OMFG!!!! THAT WAS HOT!!!! Glad your Back Thanks PPS
11/01/2006 ,
11:38:00 AM From:
coop Comments:
I don't remember this scene in S3, oh, yeah, that was the problem. Could you go help them write S4 cos its got me nervous, any more new people and we won't know what the hell is going on.
11/01/2006 ,
12:53:37 PM From:
sjulian1 Comments:
Damn!!! This was good! Not something I should be reading during my lunch hour. I can't imagine what the next 7 hours will be like. Do we get more?
11/01/2006 ,
14:30:57 PM From:
Bealschick Comments:
Yeah! Now that's how S3 should be. Take time, do what you have to, but please come back, with more of your S3.
11/01/2006 ,
16:30:29 PM From:
funnyone Comments:
Glad to see you back, JKS, and looking forward to more. That sucks that someone is trying to masquarade as you. Really low. I don't know if the other story is any good, but just the fact that they posted under that name guarantees that I won't check it out. Give me the real deal.
11/01/2006 ,
21:00:37 PM From:
onthebrink Comments:
Great to see you back with more snippets.Your words always seem so natural in your stories. Thanks for writing!
11/01/2006 ,
21:12:33 PM From:
brigbeach6 Comments:
Hi Fins, nice to have you back! Thanks for the post!
11/01/2006 ,
21:36:20 PM From:
pattifloatn Comments:
That was a wonderful snippet of a chapter. I kept wondering if you were going to have them fall asleep before they could really enjoy their time together. That would have been my luck. Just hang in there because I always will read a B&T story from you.
11/01/2006 ,
22:32:47 PM From:
skycaptain Comments:
This was so hot....and you have to post more cause they aren't anywhere near finished...
11/01/2006 ,
22:42:16 PM From:
miamigrl Comments:
HI SWIMMIE! You've been missed. That was way HOT!
11/01/2006 ,
23:27:00 PM From:
Rau Comments:
What? Where's the other 7 hours?
11/02/2006 ,
15:08:07 PM From:
yellow12 Comments:
damn, just damn
11/02/2006 ,
16:07:33 PM From:
purpleprints Comments:
That was very hot and sexy. Welcome back and I hope we get another snippet before too long.
11/11/2006 ,
16:16:38 PM From:
ut Comments:
Damn that was hot and Im with Rau!!!!!!!!!!
11/17/2006 ,
05:53:54 AM From:
Professional Widow Comments:
Yee haw! I don't know what was better: the story or the "Tina's talented tongue" alliteration.