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I think I can manage that Bette said. Lets go get changed and Ill take you out to breakfast first. Should we invite Julie?

No Tina said. Shes been sleeping in so she probably wont get up for quite a while.

Before they left the house Bette left Julie a note letting her know that she had taken the day off and she was taking Tina out to breakfast and they might take a walk along the pier.

They enjoyed a leisurely breakfast together with Bette sharing little things about their life together and after breakfast they took a walk along the pier and found a bench to sit on so they could talk and just enjoy being together. By the time they made it back home Bette had realized something important. This was one of the things that had been missing in their relationship in the last few months, maybe even years, taking time out of their daily lives to just talk to each other and to enjoy being with each other.

T Bette said. I really enjoyed this morning. We havent done anything like that in a long time.

I really enjoyed it too. Tina said. The more time I spend with you the more I want to spend with you.

Somehow Tinas words made Bette feel guilty. If she knew the truth she wouldnt want to be spending time with her at all. Bette knew in that moment that she had to at least tell Tina some of the truth if not all.

Tina Bette said. You know that this isnt real.

What isnt real? Tina asked.

This idyllic picture you have of me Bette said. All you have seen since the accident is the tender, caring side of me. I can be and have been a real asshole to you sometimes. I just dont want you to see me as some type of perfect person when in fact, Im far from perfect.

TBC



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7/8/2004 , 12:29:26 PM
From: halley
Comments: I love how you are going about this, your doing it perfectly. And I like how Bette is going to be truthful and honest to Tina, that way when she does get her memory back, she will know that Bette loves her more than ever. Can't wair for you to continue!



7/8/2004 , 12:48:36 PM
From: Nan
Comments: Love your story.Can't wait for the next chapter.Has Tina's memory already come back and she is testing Bette?



7/8/2004 , 12:55:27 PM
From: BTaddict
Comments: Oooh the dramatic suspense, newwriter! Please continue :)



7/8/2004 , 1:12:38 PM
From: Newwriter
Comments: BTaddict are you making fun of me? LOL. I have to leave you guys hanging don't I or you won't come back and read the next chapter.



7/8/2004 , 1:36:07 PM
From: BTLuver
Comments: I love this tender side of Bette. I especially love that she wants Tina to know shes not perfect........more please



7/8/2004 , 2:12:50 PM
From: hotpepper (Amandamg)
Comments: you don't have to leave us hanging because we would come back to read anyway...but i do understand the need to leave us hanging....and i understand the NEED for feed back.....i like the way you have bette telling her she is not perfect...... and i love the way they are together...please continue



7/8/2004 , 2:18:54 PM
From: BTaddict
Comments: Ha ha - just hoping my teasing will make you post sooner, newwriter :) And I'm with Hotpepper - I'll keep reading your stories no matter how you end it!



7/8/2004 , 3:24:07 PM
From: bvhall
Comments: Bette is being so honest with Tina. We all know she can be a asshole,but she is our ah.Maybe Tinas memory is slowly coming back and she is waiting for Bette to lie to her. great story,cliff hanger tho.



7/8/2004 , 5:00:15 PM
From: tinawho?
Comments: I love each and every word of every chapter newwriter...you do leave us hanging but it makes us want it even more...and yes, we'd come back everytime, regardless of the cliffhangers or not...excellent story...can't wait to find out how you deal with Tina's memory returning...or as others have said, is it already back and she's testing Bette...either way, you'll keep us coming back...bravo!!!



7/8/2004 , 5:25:36 PM
From: texgirl
Comments: As always, another great story, and damn these cliffhangers. I would still come back to read your stories with or without the cliffhangers. I wish I knew everything about this story, but I’m going to have to force myself to be patient and wait to see how everything plays out. Great job newwriter and you can bet I’m looking forward to the next chapter.



7/8/2004 , 8:12:03 PM
From: AvidReader
Comments: Really enjoying the premise of your story. Would like to read by dialogue more about the intimate nuances of their relationship instead of being told about it. I know you can do it by the way your story is crafted. Go for it!



7/8/2004 , 8:12:14 PM
From: Kabby
Comments: I agree with evryone this story has been excellent. I love this side of Bette and I'm glad she is trying to be honest with Tina and herself. Please let Tina be gentle when she finds out the truth.



7/8/2004 , 9:33:29 PM
From: newwriter
Comments: Avidreader would you mind e-mailing at rwolfe4908@aol.com I would be interested in hearing you recommendations for changes to my writing style. I am open to change my writing style.



7/8/2004 , 10:01:42 PM
From: seal
Comments: I LOVE your story your style is your own and that makes your story wonderful to read so just go with your flow. POST SOON.



7/9/2004 , 1:30:18 AM
From: MARTINI
Comments: I LOVE IT ,LOVE IT ,LOVE IT , DONT STOP!!!!



7/10/2004 , 8:02:21 AM
From: ankus
Comments: you developed a really great...wonderful story...



7/10/2004 , 3:05:26 PM
From: rdyfireaim
Comments: nice job Luvie ... you're killing me but in a very good way *w*



7/10/2004 , 3:10:13 PM
From: Kim
Comments: I love your story, but I wish you would write move often...It is hard waiting for the next chapter.



7/11/2004 , 8:55:39 PM
From: MyBody
Comments: So cute and sweet the way Tina crawls into bed with Bette. I'm waiting for Tina's memory to return, the sooner the better so they can make-up! Please continue soon!



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