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I thought we could spend the evening together... PT35 by Jobadge
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Some semblance of feeling was returning to her legs, her knees were still giving slight trembles and she was thankfully for her pillar of support, as she felt the arms pull in her tighter. As the moments passed their eyes met, the dilated pupils remained locked, once in a while a stray tear fell from the darkest of the pools, the pale finger intermittently wiping it away, the intensity of their union overcoming Bette as the wave of emotions continued to travel throughout her body. "Hey…," came the quiet voice. Tina smiled at the words, her heart swelling at the vision before her, the midnight curls sticking to the hot sated woman seated on the edge of the dining room table. Tina stood between Bette’s knees, she lent forward placing a gentle kiss on her lips before replying, "hey, are you okay?" "Do you really need to ask that babe?" "I’m just checking…" "You are amazing, do you know that T?" Tina brought her hands to Bette’s cheeks, looking deep into the loving eyes, "I’m only amazing when you’re beside me Bette." "No T, you are a truly unique, wonderful human being and I thank my lucky stars every single day that I am part of your life." "Oh Bette…" "It’s true T, the day you walked into my gallery, my life became complete, since being a child I never had that, that feeling of completeness, being whole, never knowing if there would be someone who was the missing piece or if I had to live my life feeling that something was not quite right, but when we met, when I looked into your eyes, I saw it, I saw that someone who I was destined to make that journey through to eternity with." "You changed my life too Bette, you know that killer melt you give me, like you did earlier, nothing and no one would of stopped me being with you. I thought I knew what it was like to be ‘in love’, but that was just so insignificant with the love we share Bette, and you know, it just gets deeper and deeper." "T, you do realise that since Thursday evening, I have fallen in love with you so many more times, I fell in love with you by the pool, at the gallery, at Milk, at the beach and last night babe, I fell so deeply last night, and I never wanna stop falling in love with you, because it will never be enough…" The words between them hung in the air, their emotions intense as the depth of the feelings sank into their very beings, their eyes saying everything that the other needed to know. Tina smiled as she stepped back, holding her hand out, "let’s go to bed." The two naked beings made their way through their home hand in hand, toward the haven that was their bedroom, knowing that nothing and no one would ever come between the love they shared, they had peaks and troughs and they survived, and they survived because the recognized that love, really did conquer all.
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06/13/2006 ,
18:52:44 PM
From:
snQQpy
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1st........brb

06/13/2006 ,
18:59:19 PM
From:
baileymom
Comments:
WOW! What a way to finish! if only we could all have a love like theirs! ...oh and a sex life like theirs would be kinda good too! Thanks for the story! Looking forward to your next one!

06/13/2006 ,
19:02:24 PM
From:
coop
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snQQpy, you can't just keep going around put 1st.....brb everywhere and not saying anything, or does the cat have your tongue. Anyway I digress. OMG, why I was drinking hot coffee reading this is beyond me, cos now I swear between that and the story, I'm so hot I can't stand it. You cannot see it, but I'm bowing. Excellent job.

06/13/2006 ,
19:15:07 PM
From:
packer
Comments:
wonderful story i can hardly wait for your return with this new story. this is simplly hot! tibette like it suppose to be. long lives tibette forever!

06/13/2006 ,
19:31:14 PM
From:
akalittlered
Comments:
WOW!!! GREAT ENDING thank you for this story.

06/13/2006 ,
19:44:25 PM
From:
Brooke
Comments:
This was a great story and I can't wait to read your next one. Thanks a bunch.

06/13/2006 ,
19:46:55 PM
From:
wildchildivy
Comments:
i would say sexual love life like b and t is rare and i would be fuckin luckky to have it but your words did somuch for me you have no idea i was sittin on my couch drooling with my jaw hittin the floor imaginin those vivid sceans your words conjured in my imagination .....definatly headin for a cold chillin shower..rightnow i need a beer a really cold beer to bring me back to reality

06/13/2006 ,
19:54:58 PM
From:
wildtouch
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OMFG........I NEEDA COLD SHOWER...THINKIN I'LL BRB.........HOT HOT HOT,,,, SO HOT IN HERE.....

06/13/2006 ,
20:14:48 PM
From:
gogk
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incredible! thet shared a unique love and they need to continue work on it in order to be each day strong! this was beatiful! and a new stori soon? you can bet i will waiting to read!

06/13/2006 ,
20:29:25 PM
From:
funnyone
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And if I recall the rose petals are waiting for them, and we all know what that means. Well, Jo, a most enjoyable ride. Get a little rest and we'll be waiting for you when you have the new stuff.

06/13/2006 ,
20:40:29 PM
From:
BetteAndTinaForever
Comments:
wait, is this the end? bummer, i'll wait for this to come back and also for the new story...this chapter was absolutely amazing

06/13/2006 ,
20:53:55 PM
From:
trecelovinit
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Definitely a crescendo!!!! I loved this story. Can't wait for updates every once in a while and I can' wait for the new story. I love your writing.

06/13/2006 ,
20:55:07 PM
From:
SydneyWade
Comments:
Absolutely amazing! If only the show had played out like your story was written we would have all been such happy campers. Whatever you choose to post next, I'm sure will be a fantastic read. Thanks again for your dedication to this story.

06/13/2006 ,
21:06:20 PM
From:
azmama
Comments:
You leave me breathless. The attention to detail, your phrasing, even your vocab makes this story a brilliant experience. I am a devoted TiBetter and I believe that they share this love. Looking forward to whatever you write. Maestra, brava.

06/13/2006 ,
21:27:07 PM
From:
pattifloatn
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OH GOD! The sweat is dripping off me and sliding down my body. I guess that means that I need to cool down in a very cold shower. I am going straight to ebay and bid on those Portard prono tapes. Now what do I type in to get to those tapes? Do I type in Jennifer Beals or Laurel Holloman or do I type in Bette and Tina prono tapes? I hope that you will continue this story. I really have learned to enjoy those cold wet showers.

06/13/2006 ,
21:55:42 PM
From:
fergz1
Comments:
Jo...absolutely perfect! I can't wait for whatever you post next. thanks..

06/13/2006 ,
21:56:28 PM
From:
Yodah
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lovin' at its best. thank you!!

06/13/2006 ,
22:10:41 PM
From:
smiley
Comments:
Most Excellent Jo!!!! I will miss this story but since you are writing another one, I'll be happy! It has been an aboslute joy and pleasurable expereince to read your stories. You have such a way with words that leaves me breathless and HOT!(lol)I know your next story will be an absolute delight and I can't wait! Thanks again for sharing your talent! 5 Billion stars!!!

06/13/2006 ,
22:16:26 PM
From:
ayesha23
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that was beautiful! thanks for this story.

06/13/2006 ,
22:28:07 PM
From:
gingerbread986
Comments:
Loved your story...thanks so much for sharing it with us! Lookin' forward to reading your next one.

06/13/2006 ,
22:29:23 PM
From:
AmandaMG
Comments:
thank you for your time and this beautiful story... yes this is the way we see bette and tina... and i hope and pray IC also sees it... and what a way to end it... perfect... again thank you...waiting for your return

06/13/2006 ,
22:44:53 PM
From:
miamigrl
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Not only HOT but absolutely beautiful!

06/13/2006 ,
22:56:17 PM
From:
curious
Comments:
wow i was having trouble swallowing too as i read this!!

06/13/2006 ,
23:21:29 PM
From:
tiff_duke
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This was beautiful. A great ending (for the moment) to a really great story. And I'm with funnyone, there are rose petals in that bedroom... Thanks for this story, and I look forward to the next one.

06/13/2006 ,
23:44:14 PM
From:
BeJacks
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Oh my god, that was so hot and so beautiful! Thank you so much for the tibette love!!

06/13/2006 ,
23:49:29 PM
From:
Clarity
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Oh good lord! That was definitely sexcellent Jobadge. It's a really good thing that I turned my fan on before reading this story. If I hadn't I'm pretty sure I would have combusted from the sex on the table...with my computer frying shortly after. Let me just thank you for taking the time out to write this amazing story. Although you write incredibly hot...very hot...love scenes, make no mistake that your writing in general is simply phenomenal and I have enjoyed this story through TiBette's good times and bad times. With that said, I can't wait to read "Do You Remember When..." and I do hope that you'll post chapter 1 sooner rather than later.

06/13/2006 ,
23:55:15 PM
From:
Lamentamini
Comments:
Wow, I get all caught up, and now you're letting this one sit for awhile. lol Considering I studied music in college I should know Ravel's "Bolero," but I'm drawing a blank. I can't sing your praises enough on chapters like these, or the way you write in general. If I had a girlfriend, and she was here all the time, I'd have to take her after every chapter like this. Looking forward to your new story. =)

06/14/2006 ,
00:33:37 AM
From:
jb621
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This was a FABULOUS finish! I can't wait until until return with your next story.

06/14/2006 ,
01:14:38 AM
From:
tylo
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smoking hottttttttttttttttttttttttt longer longer

06/14/2006 ,
03:53:43 AM
From:
B
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OMG...Well Jo,you did this one with so much style...but oh Sweet Jesus...what a Hot one to go out with!...From begining to this chpt,this story has been exceptional,reading this chpt was like closing the pages of a favorite book,..the only thing i can say is that like a favorite book you always have the pleasure of going back and reading it all over again.Jo,its been a complete privilage reading your story,..but an even bigger privilage to have become friends with you through it.....So while its sad to see it finishing up ..for now!?..cant really wait for whats to come...This story has been one of the best to grace our screens,its been Heartbreaking,Romantic,Funny,Mushy and very very passionate,but most of all beauitfully written.Thanks for sharing the stort,your talent....and for all the smiles you`ve put on my face..xx

06/14/2006 ,
07:36:40 AM
From:
vam
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Wonderful from beginning to end! Just wonderful! Thank you and looking forward to your next story. Have a great summer.

06/14/2006 ,
10:31:52 AM
From:
annieb69
Comments:
great, great job, very loving and tender!!!

06/14/2006 ,
11:49:56 AM
From:
allyemmerson
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as you know Jo i refused to read this before I went to work. so i dragged my girlfriend home so we could read it together. oh boy -- yoou told me it was good but you might have warned me just how damn good. Your writing leaves me speechless at its brilliance and tenderness and okay -- lets say it -- the ability to reach the parts that other NC17 chapters do not reach. you are a totally amazing writer and person -- thank you for finding the time to share your remarkable writing skills with us. Are we renaming the Best Sex Cold Shower award - the Jobadge ??? wow -- now -- eh --- we need to go and take care of something xx !!!!

06/14/2006 ,
12:14:12 PM
From:
prasnil
Comments:
Wow! Awesome! Thanks Jo! Hope this will continue some time later and looking forward to your new story too ...

06/14/2006 ,
12:31:00 PM
From:
robbeedee
Comments:
Lordy, lordy, Missie Jo, that there wer' sizzingly. You do know how to go out in style. Thank you so much for 35 chapters full of love, lust, desire, tenderness and fulfillment. It has been one hell of a ride!!! I am just so glad to have hitched on to this awesome adventure. You captured the class and realism of Bette and Tina at the end of Season 1. There are so many good things about this tale. It meant a safe haven to retreat to and bask in the joy of Bette and Tina together. You have created a masterpiece with this story and raise the bar for every other author. Thank you so, so much. Can't wait to read your next one. Your Loyal Fan.

06/14/2006 ,
12:48:08 PM
From:
kstt
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Throughout this story u've captured the true essence of B&T. Loved it, your writing is superb and to get the true feel for the chapter cranked up Bolero on the stereo. Your NC-17's are so hot but so sensual, look forward to future posts. Thx.

06/14/2006 ,
13:32:30 PM
From:
hansen
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Hey Jo....OMG - I just had to say that, but I guess you did expect that right???? Thank you for sharing this wonderful, hot, romantic, amazing, lustful, tender, sad, mushy, sexy and very passionate story with us. It has been an absolute delight and privilege to read your work. You're so talented, I've told you many times, so you know that already, but still you're paranoid :o)) But the best is, that we've become mates through this beautiful B&T journey and I'm thankful for that and for you to appreciate my opinion about your writing. About the story, the things I love the most is the timeline, the very tender and emotional dialogues and that all this takes place before the miscarriage, Candy-ass and the dreadful S2 & S3. Things that never should've happened in my TiBette world!!!! About the next story, you know I'm really looking forward to it and I've a list of "first" you can write about, but I'm sure you've it covered. Take care mate and hope to hear from you soon....T xx

06/14/2006 ,
13:46:10 PM
From:
citygirl75
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So I finally worked out what I like about this story so much, sorry I'm a but slow. It's that it's so happy and loving, and you describe it so well. It's been a complete pleasure to read it. Thanks Jo.

06/14/2006 ,
19:25:10 PM
From:
Dainty
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Jobadge this was a wonderful story all the way through. And though I hate to see it end, all good things must come to an end and so must the story. You have done a marvelous job with the story and I can hardly wait for the next one you write. It was wonderful, always loving and exciting. Thank you for sharing with us.

06/14/2006 ,
19:55:45 PM
From:
violet_rose
Comments:
Wow! Just amazing. I don't think it is possible for your writing to disappoint and this just blew my socks off! My heart is pumping so hard I feel like I've just run a marathon! What an outstanding crescendo to a story like no other. I have loved every chapter and I can't wait to read whatever you post next. Thank you so much for sharing this one with us.

06/14/2006 ,
22:57:30 PM
From:
snQQpy
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From: coop Comments: snQQpy, you can't just keep going around put 1st.....brb everywhere and not saying anything, or does the cat have your tongue...............Nope, cat didn't have my tongue. I could have sworn I came back and left my comment; my apologies. Jo, this was awesome. I've always said that I think their sex life was one of the bests things they had going for them. Thanks for making it so HOT!!

06/15/2006 ,
07:24:48 AM
From:
Rau
Comments:
wow, great story..............thanks

06/15/2006 ,
19:12:22 PM
From:
Anngie Mosby
Comments:
That was phenomenal JB! Your ability continues to flabbergast me! I'll be watching for your next story. I'm sure it will be great too!

06/16/2006 ,
01:58:44 AM
From:
nzgrl
Comments:
I loved the series. Thanks!

06/26/2006 ,
23:16:15 PM
From:
ut
Comments:
Damn this is so fucking hot and awesome, love it. They love they have is amazing and lovely, love them. Ok post soon please, thanks!

07/17/2006 ,
22:27:54 PM
From:
arkaycee
Comments:
Wow...I've been reading this series over the past week, and I am truly in awe! You truly have captured the spirit of each character, but particularly Bette and Tina, with all their human foibles that are perfected by their endless love for one another! The hype about your writing was all true, and I am so glad that you have shared this gift with all of us! I certainly look forward to the next series after I recover from this one! The passion, the dialogue, the characterizations (Alice in particular, but really each character) were true to form from what we know about them. Thank you so much! After S3, we Tibetters really needed this!

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