"I apologize Kit, things have been more than hectic over here…actually that's why I called, I've got a job for you." There was a brief silence on the other end and Bette was afraid Kit would turn her down.
05/08/2006 ,
16:37:11 PM From:
curious Comments:
this is interesting
05/08/2006 ,
17:32:20 PM From:
De_leish_ous Comments:
it is interesting, im loving danish already! Dana as a cop= hot!
05/08/2006 ,
18:13:09 PM From:
AIDANNE Comments:
Okay, I'll be honest, when I started reading it made me smile at how different the girls are potrayed and already started liking it, never reading the author. When I saw it was you DC I knew why I was liking it, now I love it. Please cont' mate and I'll read on...cheers!!
05/08/2006 ,
23:12:33 PM From:
ut Comments:
This is interesting and let see what's next, thanks!
05/09/2006 ,
00:24:38 AM From:
Akiracolorblind Comments:
This is very interesting, and I really am enjoying where this story is going...It's different from all the others, keep up the good job!
05/09/2006 ,
02:38:48 AM From:
JazzyS Comments:
I like this setting. And you sure know how to write!
05/09/2006 ,
04:31:11 AM From:
blox-tox Comments:
im loving this! shane as an assasin... i could totally see her do that... awesome! fantastic writing please continue!!!
05/09/2006 ,
05:11:33 AM From:
Dani F. Comments:
Your story makes me want to go back and rewrite my first story I ever wrote. Good work =)
05/09/2006 ,
11:53:04 AM From:
coop Comments:
Different, but interesting. All are girls seems to be pretty hard edged. Looking forward to where this leads.
06/06/2006 ,
09:33:23 AM From:
DarknessDescends Comments:
I'm definitely intrigued! This is truly original