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Apogée by ClosetDana
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"I apologize Kit, things have been more than hectic over here…actually that's why I called, I've got a job for you." There was a brief silence on the other end and Bette was afraid Kit would turn her down.
"Whatever you need baby sis, I got it."
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05/08/2006 ,
16:37:11 PM
From:
curious
Comments:
this is interesting

05/08/2006 ,
17:32:20 PM
From:
De_leish_ous
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it is interesting, im loving danish already! Dana as a cop= hot!

05/08/2006 ,
18:13:09 PM
From:
AIDANNE
Comments:
Okay, I'll be honest, when I started reading it made me smile at how different the girls are potrayed and already started liking it, never reading the author. When I saw it was you DC I knew why I was liking it, now I love it. Please cont' mate and I'll read on...cheers!!

05/08/2006 ,
18:14:02 PM
From:
AIDANNE
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Ooops...C.D.

05/08/2006 ,
20:46:17 PM
From:
xicebrakerx
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Loved it! It's very interesting. Please continue!

05/08/2006 ,
21:27:29 PM
From:
Seahurst
Comments:
This sounds like fun already!

05/08/2006 ,
22:33:39 PM
From:
azmama
Comments:
I like it. A different approach.

05/08/2006 ,
22:45:47 PM
From:
Adelefiz
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I'm definitely intrigued. Please continue.

05/08/2006 ,
23:12:33 PM
From:
ut
Comments:
This is interesting and let see what's next, thanks!

05/09/2006 ,
00:24:38 AM
From:
Akiracolorblind
Comments:
This is very interesting, and I really am enjoying where this story is going...It's different from all the others, keep up the good job!

05/09/2006 ,
02:38:48 AM
From:
JazzyS
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I like this setting. And you sure know how to write!

05/09/2006 ,
04:31:11 AM
From:
blox-tox
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im loving this! shane as an assasin... i could totally see her do that... awesome! fantastic writing please continue!!!

05/09/2006 ,
05:11:33 AM
From:
Dani F.
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Your story makes me want to go back and rewrite my first story I ever wrote. Good work =)

05/09/2006 ,
11:53:04 AM
From:
coop
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Different, but interesting. All are girls seems to be pretty hard edged. Looking forward to where this leads.

06/06/2006 ,
09:33:23 AM
From:
DarknessDescends
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I'm definitely intrigued! This is truly original

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