Title:To Live Without You (Chapter 13) Author: ClosetDana [ Send a Private Message ]
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Copyright: 05.07.06 Content Rating: NC-17 Disclaimer: I own nothing Author's Note: Apologies for the short chapter finals have been kicking my ass. Thank you for all of the wonderful comments, you guys really know how to talk me down off of that bridge :)
ackemat- Thank you again, yeah things aren't looking pretty for Cliff I don't think he'll be taking things well. Yeah it's about time Dana quite being a little punk and talk to Alice, but of course Alice has no idea what our athlete is talking about.
Dawsons23- Yeah I like to leave things hanging just because it makes it easier to write and it's fun! Poor Cliff maybe things will look up for him though. Thanks for reading.
Tanja1975- Wow everybody feels bad for Cliff, and I guess he is kinda getting screwed and not in a good way, I try to reveal something each time these girls meet up so hopefully everyone is looking for clues about what's going to happen.
coll- I like cliffhangers and I guess I didn't realize this one was that big until I re-read :) Sorry guys, I don't mean to tease...unless you like it!
rbelinda18- Yeah somebody's not going to be happy in the end, and it's really Alice and Dana decisions that will affect almost every character's happiness. I'm glad you're into the story and I hope you continue to read.
AIDANNE- lol, good to hear you're enjoying the sex scenes, they can be challenging but I'm happy you're even commenting on them, that just means the work isn't in vain. :)
sweetp24- Welcome! Thanks for reading, I try to post as frequent as possible(usually about once a week)
Adelefiz- Yeah Alice still has some questions about the break up and Lara, I think now that she's not in a relationship with Dana she can trust our athlete more like a friend instead of putting all of that trust stress on their romantic relationship. It's good someone thinks Cliff is a moot point, he will however have his day in the sun with Alice.
brteyes- Yeah I wish I could say the raccoon thing happened to me but unfortunately it didn't. I make you feel things? :blushes: frustrated is not my intention....well maybe a little. Yeah Dana's parents are a popular very real stereotype. Yeah the backseat of the car was a throwback to S2E1 when they're talking about the "Rules of Unattraction" and I couldn't have them keep going. You wouldn't want their relationship to be born of infidelity? Shane's timing was pretty bad but you had to see that coming, no one ever gets talk about what they need to the first time they try. I do lots of things, only you can decide whether or not I do them to you ;) Well thanks for the comment, I don't know if you'll still want to continue after this chap. :)
The Pineapple Head- It's good to see a new face...or read a new hand...or...ok well it's nice to see you're reading the story. Thanks and I hope to read your comments on the next chapter.
JazzyS-lol both comments are great, the driving scene actually does happen to me since all of my friends are such smartasses. I'm glad we had a fair trade on the sex scene there might be some bathroom action coming soon we'll have to see. I think Emily will come in to play later on in the story, I kind of like the relationship she has with both of them so she might make another appearance. The break-up will be coming I just don't know when, probably when I'm feeling depressed so if you read it then I'm probably not having a very good day.
curious- Welcome! I don't really know how to react to your comment, thank you?
Just a general question how many of you have read every chapter? I'm asking because I'm wondering if I need to recap here pretty soon or if everyone is up to speed.
Summary: The trip back gets graphic, Shane's mistakes are coming back to bite her. Total Views: 1909 times.
The car trip was silent, aside from the occasional question from Shane. Alice sat in silence, Dana back seat, stewing in sexual frustration and just regular old frustration, the athlete tried to shake the images from their car encounter out of her head but it was impossible. Alice writhing in pleasure inches from her hands, Dana shook her head again trying to forcably remove them from her mind. Shane had finally had enough,
"Ok are you guys going to fucking tell me, or are we going to sit in the horribly awkward and uncomfortable car?" Dana shrugged, looking for a way to change the subject.
"I've got nothing to say...except Alice fucked Gabby in your room on your bed and didn't tell you." Alice's eyes grew wide as she gasped looking at Dana then to Shane, whose face went dead.
"I really hope that's a joke...Alice...it's a joke right?" Alice tilted her head toward the window,
"It was like years ago Shane, I'm sure you've washed your blankets since then." Shane winced and Dana grinned in the back, Alice shooting a glare her way. After a few minutes of silence the writer began tapping on the window in time with the low rock music,
"I forgot to ask whose car this was," Shane slapped her hands on the steering wheel of the white Grand Prix glancing over to Alice.
"The owner of The Lookout, we're friends, my car was at Carmen's so I borrowed hers." The writer nodded, she didn't really care about the damn car, it was just so fucking quiet, Alice was looking for anything to talk about. Shane was obviously feeling the tension too, and making small talk was never her thing, but when they'd sat in the car another fifteen minutes without speaking Shane decided to take the conversation into her own hands.
"So how was the ping-pong match?" Dana nodded in the backseat, running her hands over her face trying to stay awake.
"It was good, Alice's niece is really good at ping-pong and tennis, she actually invited me to her championship tournament next month." Alice chuckled,
"Yeah Dana is wildly popular with the high school girls, I think I heard rumors about your nomination for prom king." Dana rolled her eyes as Shane laughed along with the writer.
"Whatever, I getting tired and I don't think I'll stay awake to be verbally abused." Shane and Alice gave a collective 'awww' as Dana stretched out across the back seat body and mind tired from the days events.
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"Yes Dana...I'm still in love with you...and I'll still be in love with you, tomorrow and the day after that."
"Wait...I can't do this..."
"Then let me watch you,"
Alice sat on the athlete's lap and buried her left hand in Dana's long dark hair pulling herself down into a passionate kiss. It began slow, the writer sucking leisurely on Dana's tongue then pulling the athlete's head back and devouring her neck. Dana moaned as Alice continued to kiss and bite her way down her chest stopping at the top of the athlete's tank top. Dana took this as a sign,
"You want to stop," it wasn't a question it was a statement that the athlete was sure of, but as Alice pushed her hands under Dana's top the athlete's certianity was quickly fading. The writer pulled off the athlete's shirt replacing the fabric with her hands that firmly kneaded her breasts, Dana gasped leaning forward desperate to please the writer, but Alice held her still spreading her legs wider and pinning the athlete to the seat. Alice ground her hips into Dana settling next to her ear, the writer's bottom lip brushing against it as she spoke,
"Dana, God you feel so good." Alice puncuated this by sliding down the athlete's body down to her zipper, the writer slowly stripped Dana's pants off leaving her panties on. Alice could smell Dana's arousal as she took a nipple into her mouth flicking her tongue slowly as her fingers reached lower...
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"Oh God..." Dana moaned in the back seat as Shane and Alice looked at each other a little disgusted, it was obvious the athlete was having a sex dream the only problem was she the fact that she was sharing it with everyone in the vehicle. Alice eyes searched frantically for something to look at, focus on, take her any where but there, Shane only laughed lighting a cigarette and glancing back at Dana.
"Wow, Dana must really have some things going on up in that noggin of hers huh?" Alice stared out the window panicked, looking for a neutral answer,
"It would be a first." Shane chuckled taking a long drag off her cigarette, tapping her fingers on the steering wheel to the music,
"So what's really going on Alice? Are you and Dana ok now or are we back to the awkward thing?" Alice stared off looking for the answer, things would never be perfectly comfortable when they weren't together, but the writer couldn't see how they could be together. Things were too complicated, especially now, with Cliff and that woman...Victoria.
Alice wasn't sure but something was definitely going on there, she could see it in the double's partners eyes, she saw it at the restaurant that night and at Dana's last match. The writer shook her head trying to weigh everything and come to some sensible conclusion,
"I don't know Shane, things are better that's all I can say, I'm with Cliff and...everything is ok." but "ok" wasn't enough for Alice, the writer realized. Dana began to turn in the back seat, her moans growing louder and more uncomfortable for Alice.
"Maybe we should...you know wake her up, she's going to be really embarrassed." In reality the writer was embarrassed, feeling a bit guilty about leaving Dana the way she had in the car.
'What were you supposed to do fuck her in the car? No that shit was just as much her fault as it was mine,' Alice reasoned with herself as she turned to wake the athlete up. Shane grabbed her arm,
"Don't, we're almost home and we should let her have her fun..." Shane grinned, knowing Alice was growing uncomfortable.
"I'm joking Al...she's just going to be mad embarrassed and if there's no need I figure we can just forget. Right? I mean what if it was you?" The writer nodded realizing she'd want the same.
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"What are you doing to me?" Dana struggled to move her body so many different sensations attacking her at the same time, the athlete thought she would jump out of her own skin. Alice continued to move her lips lower, holding the athlete's hips still against the back seat the writer slid her hands down Dana's hips pulling off the athlete's underwear in the process.
"I'm doing what you want me to Dana...I'm fucking you." The athlete moaned, she never thought she could have the writer like this again, it had been so long since she'd had Alice mouth on her skin she didn't even realize how wonderful it really was. The way the writer moved her tongue in perfect sync with her hands, it did something to the brunette, and Dana let Alice know.
"That feels amazing....please...don't stop." And at the first touch of the writer's tongue to Dana's clit, the athlete was sure she couldn't take much more, her breaths became ragged and the blonde could tell Dana was already close. The blonde sped her movements tasting the athlete, spinning her tongue while moving her hands slowly up Dana's stomach.
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"Seriously Shane she's getting out of hand back there," Shane tried not to laugh out loud, but it was becoming more difficult with every moan from the back seat. Dana became louder finally settling down and groaning slowly
"God Alice," Shane and Alice froze the writer's eyes becoming wide and very similar to a deer in headlights, Shane tapped the brakes firmly sending Dana rolling off the back seat into the space between the seat and the floor. Alice cleared her throat, hoping to shake the embarrassment burning at her cheeks. Dana sat up groggily rubbing her forehead that had slammed on the floor,
"Dammit Shane....what the fuck?" Shane shrugged keeping her eyes on the road,
