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Comments:Leave Comment (pop up window) 04/03/2006 , 00:03:40 AMFrom: Seahurst Comments: This is wonderfully written. Thank you!  04/03/2006 , 00:08:31 AM From: BetteAndTinaForever Comments: i guess you're going with the rumors that season 3 was all dreamed up by tina who was in coma...i like it...eventhough i would like her to wake up soon 04/03/2006 , 00:26:40 AM From: bettyvhall Comments: I like this. a radio is great.Music ,Alice voice on the radio a tape of the baby laughing or crying. anything. thanks 04/03/2006 , 00:36:06 AM From: honda90 Comments: Your sharmen are frisky bunnies..., oh boohoo, did I say I was sorry to see jenny catch a plane?? sorry, but pls don't bring a max into this bunch...One happy couple on the road to having more happy couples..right??? WAKE UP TINA!!!Tks Portia, love this season your creating!!!! 04/03/2006 , 00:50:28 AM From: azmama Comments: Portia...This is really well written. Lots of detail and description, good dialogue and the comments and tone are spot on for each character. Keep going. 04/03/2006 , 04:29:28 AM From: theotherlife Comments: Sharmen is sexy. I laughed out loud when Alice saw the handprint on Carmen's ass. too funny. 04/03/2006 , 07:18:42 AM From: marijejip Comments: I really like your writting, but I would prefer Tina to wake up or atleast give some reaction to Bette. This must be devestating for Bette. I love Tina and Bette, and i hated what happened in season 3, but they are still my favourite. Make it all better, please! 04/03/2006 , 07:26:56 AM From: AmandaMG Comments: i love this... i have said tina is in a coma... but please don't let her stay there too long... oh and i love alice... i could just see her walking into a room... ok stop fucking... and then just sit on the bed... too funny...please continue 04/03/2006 , 10:52:02 AM From: cpq Comments: I understand your attempt to make since of IC's debakle of S3, but PLEASE let Tina wake up soon. She will have a long journey as it is. 04/03/2006 , 11:23:22 AM From: Ragazzi Comments: Love the way you write Sharmen, that's one hella sexy scene! I can really picture Shane and Carmen behaving that way. HOT! Please keep it up:) 04/03/2006 , 11:33:32 AM From: another Comments: Hey great story. That´s the first chapter I´ve read of your sory and I really like it. Especially the Sharmen parts!Please go on sooon! 04/03/2006 , 14:55:21 PM From: Dainty Comments: Just got caught up with your stsory today and it is very interesting. After reading what Amanda and B&TForever said, do you really mean there were spoilers about Tina being in a coma for all of S3, if so, that would explain a lot. Oh God, I hope that is true, maybe S4 will be about getting us back to the real loving couple. What a thrill. thanks for the post. 04/03/2006 , 19:23:53 PM From: pattifloatn Comments: Please have Tina wake up and the entire 3rd season would have been a dream for all of the characters. Great story but Tina in a coma is scaring the hell out of me. Too close to the real thing for me. Please, Please let her wake up to a loving Bette. 04/03/2006 , 20:56:52 PM From: techgal Comments: I ran my mouse over the 'next post by this author' link, desperately hoping for another chapter. I love the length and denseness of your chapters. I wonder if writing them is as pleasurable as it is to read them. Does Bette ever put Angelica in Tina's arms? I'm sure they both need the bond of touch. Thanks! 04/03/2006 , 20:59:04 PM From: techgal Comments: By the by, does anyone else think that Tony Soprano's coma was an ill-advised choice? I wonder if The Sopranos has jumped the shark with that one. It better pick up or HBO will be going the way of SHO in my household - kaput! Anyone? 04/05/2006 , 19:26:39 PM From: 2BMe Comments: OMG! Your story is great, I just started chap. one today been reading the rest straight through. Alice walking in Shane's room & seeing the handprint on Carmen's ass was hilarious. Keep up the great work. |
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