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  I’m home.”  Dana entered the room looking happy.

 

“Hi,” Alice said weakly.

 

“Hey, how’s Angelica.”

 

“Fine.  Where were you?”

 

“I was at The Planet having lunch.  I left you a message at Bette’s.”

 

“I didn’t get it.”

 

Dana had walked down the hall and was well into the living room.  “What are you doing?”

 

Alice slammed the screen lid of her laptop down.  “Nothing.  Working.”

 

Dana smiled, but it was guiltily.  Alice was acting funny.  Dana berated herself for having a face that gave everything away; she had a feeling Alice knew Lara had been up here.

 

END PART TWO

 

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Dialogue:  “I think she’s punishing me” Bette tells the doctors (referencing S3, Episode 01, Bette talking to the sex expert.)

 

Helena’s shift in personality when she speaks to the comatose Tina (referencing all of S3)




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04/01/2006 , 01:00:04 AM
From: Seahurst
Comments: As much as I love Bette...and I do, she is my favorite character...I think that was an incredibly selfish thing for her to say...that she thinks Tina is in a coma because she is somehow punishing her. Geez Bette! Thanks!



04/01/2006 , 01:51:14 AM
From: azmama
Comments: I have to agree with Seahurst...Bette is so egocentric and selfish. And, she is my favorite character. Her vows included in sickness and in health.



04/01/2006 , 01:57:10 AM
From: BetteAndTinaForever
Comments: i hope tina will wake up soon and see her baby, so she and bette can start their family again



04/01/2006 , 05:48:20 AM
From: pattifloatn
Comments: When a loved one is in a coma for a long period of time, your own brain begins to wonder why this is happening. You begin to fight within your ownself as to why the person you love is still in this state. In this case Bette can not understand why Tina is not there (awake) and by now she is struggling with life in general. Why is it that some people can wake up within a matter of hours while others never wake up? Tina is there, she somehow has to pull herself out of the gray fog. Hopefully with the new faculities she will get the needed therapy.



04/01/2006 , 06:59:49 AM
From: missyang
Comments: Well, is Bette using daring Tina to wake up by saying that?



04/01/2006 , 09:22:30 AM
From: AmandaMG
Comments: she has to keep talking to her... tina can hear ... coma patients can hear whats going on around them.. so bette needs to keep telling tina all about angielica and the girls and how much she loves her... bette had to stop the negitively... just positive things to get tina back...keep it going... please continue



04/01/2006 , 09:28:41 AM
From: marijejip
Comments: No one can say how you will respond to a loved one on a coma. It must be totaly devestating. I personaly don't think that Bette's remark is selfish at all. It may be irrational, but think one's mind goes into overdrive when you fear lossing the one they love. I cried while reading this story. (Sorry, I am a Tina fan) Please let Tina be alright. let her wake up! Lovely Story!!



04/01/2006 , 11:25:05 AM
From: honda90
Comments: when my dad passed away he was sick before hand for a long time...the last day he slowly fell into a coma, anyway, my point being is that they tell you even though the person in a coma can't respond, the hearing is the last thing to go. They can hear you as you talk to them...and so I talked and talked...Bette get off your confused horse and TALK. Again, we have not had a bountiful story like this to sink our teeth into for awhile...THANKYOU



04/01/2006 , 15:14:22 PM
From: bettyvhall
Comments: Seems like with Bette and Tina its they always need to talk. A person in a coma can still hear, ,radio,TV,and human voices. Bette needs to tak,and talk and talk. Tina always loved Bettes voice. thanks



04/01/2006 , 17:15:52 PM
From: phantomframe
Comments: Ooooh--Bette is a wench for saying that about Tina, but I understand the frustration and doubt she must be feeling about Tina's recovery. I love your footnotes!



04/03/2006 , 20:31:31 PM
From: techgal
Comments: The L Word 3: The Missing 6 Months! Thank you for taking on this task. To quote Nelly (and DeBarge): "I like it,(I know you like it)I like it,I really,really like it.I want it,adore it." ...Glad you're back! Keep up the good work! Reading your writing is my pleasure!



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