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Finally, I heard her voice, “Hello.”


“Helena, hi, it’s Bette.”


“Bette, I was beginning to think you weren’t going to call.”


I felt a silent sigh of relief course through my body.


“Well, you know how it is taking care of children. They keep you busy,” I offered as an explanation for my delay. In all truth, I hadn’t wanted to appear too anxious.


“Indeed, they do. Sooo, are you still coming by this evening?” she asked.


“Of course. I just wanted to agree on a time. How is 5:30 or 6:00 for you? I’m dropping off Angelica at Tina’s around 5:00.”


“Five-thirty or sixish is fine. I’ll have an assorted cheese and fruit plate ready for us to nibble on,” she said.


At the sound of Helena saying the word nibble, in that sexy accent no less, my mind fell into the gutter. I kept that to myself.


“Oh, that reminds me,” I said. “I almost forgot to ask. What kind of wine do you like? Red or white?”


“Either is fine with me, Bette. Which do you prefer?” she considerately asked me.


“Actually, I prefer red. But a nice chilled white sounds kind of refreshing at the moment. I tell you what, I have a nice French Pinot Blanc, as well as a marvelous Châteauneuf-du-Pape I’ve been anxious to open. Why don’t I bring each, and we can have some of both?”


“I trust your selections. I look forward to our little tasting,” Helena said.


Oh, was it my imagination that I heard innuendo and seduction dripping from that reply?


“Alright, both it is. I’ll see you at sixish then?”


“At sixish,” she answered.


With that taken care of, I set about the next important task. I picked up Angelica and carried her to my room. “Boo Boo, you want to help mama pick out something pretty to wear tonight?”


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 



 


 


 


 


 




 




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03/31/2006 , 15:34:58 PM
From: honda90
Comments: this anticipation is driving me insane..pls post soon....LOVE it!!!



03/31/2006 , 15:48:28 PM
From: justkeepswimming
Comments: “I trust your selections. I look forward to our little tasting,” Helena said. Oh, was it my imagination that I heard innuendo and seduction dripping from that reply? HA! You are getting me so stoked for their in person meeting...hold the reins tighter zheese, these two really want to go at it...



03/31/2006 , 16:19:40 PM
From: Keisha
Comments: OMG POST ANOTHER SOON!Suddenly all these Helebette ships, are suddenly appearin lol!



03/31/2006 , 16:34:30 PM
From: funnyone
Comments: I don't mind when you change voices at all, quite the contrary. I loved how Bette played Alice like a violin. Got her so excited I'm not sure a severe case of 'roids would have kept her ass from bouncing in the seat.



03/31/2006 , 18:10:17 PM
From: miamigrl
Comments: I'm so excited!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



03/31/2006 , 18:22:43 PM
From: DarkAngel452
Comments: dying here, can't wait for the meeeting, absolutely loving it! thank you.



03/31/2006 , 18:48:39 PM
From: azmama
Comments: Zheese...Don't listen to JKS...loosen those reins and let'er rip!!!



03/31/2006 , 18:56:45 PM
From: zoekins
Comments: Anxiously awaiting the continued build up of this one...



03/31/2006 , 19:19:23 PM
From: coop
Comments: OMG, talk about foreplay. This is gonna be good, i just know it. Its strange but I've actually started to think that a Bette & Helena get together may not be such a bad idea. I love T&B but hey she's gone off the deep end, and its time Bette had some pleasure in life. Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm



03/31/2006 , 19:24:58 PM
From: Seahurst
Comments: I'm looking forward to the next chapter as much as Bette and Helena are!! Thanks!



03/31/2006 , 19:45:54 PM
From: obzidian
Comments: Hey Z, bring on the dinner!! Can't wait!!!



03/31/2006 , 20:21:50 PM
From: Angelica
Comments: come on date time! LOL... Great job!.. I'm really enjoying this story! Keep the chapters coming ;)



03/31/2006 , 21:45:13 PM
From: bealsfanforever
Comments: Goodness I'm looking foward to the next chapter. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for some BeLena action. Thank you for this chapter.



03/31/2006 , 21:51:12 PM
From: amazonlvr
Comments: Loving the story, always glad to see an update.



03/31/2006 , 22:45:37 PM
From: BeautifulRagdoll
Comments: God the sexual tension is so thick so far in this story you couldn't cut it if you tried! Great update, can't wait for more!!



03/31/2006 , 23:35:31 PM
From: bettyvhall
Comments: I'm waiting on this date --oop== meeting. Bette and Helena at least Helena will treat Bette like a queen. Queen Elizabeth I'm tired so being silly Thanks



04/01/2006 , 00:05:56 AM
From: Ms Brightside
Comments: Well, I'm grinning as usual. I get so wrapped up in this that when it's finally over and I'm staring at blank white computer screen I feel bad. I just had to read it again. You seriously have these characters down to a science...to Bette's playful banter with Alice, and even with Alice's quirks. Everything was right in sync. Why don't you high-tail it over to Ms Ilene and hand her this story, telling her that you'd probably make a good addition to the team of writers. Yes, yes, that's a very good idea. I can't wait to see what sort of nibbling and tasting Bette and Helena (whoa, almost wrote Tina there out of habit) get themselves into. But, knowing this story thus far, whatever happens will not disappoint. I give this an A plus plus, not that my opinion matters. Oh, and, I'll respond to your note a bit later, it was very nice of you to respond. Looking forward to the next!



04/01/2006 , 01:31:46 AM
From: pandamel
Comments: Oh yeah the innuendo was flying! Sweet! Soo..Bette will get all sexily dressed and then drop Angelica off at Tina's so Tina can she was she will never get again, right???;)



04/01/2006 , 02:38:46 AM
From: Nanouk
Comments: I love it! I love it I love it its all I can say I really can't wait for a new part to come along this is something Id really want to see happening in the series



04/01/2006 , 09:06:24 AM
From: Helenalovesbette
Comments: I love the flirtatious thing going on btn them two. Cant wait till next chpt. Keep up the good work Z.



04/01/2006 , 11:40:36 AM
From: prasnil
Comments: U can't leave us hanging like this, zheese... bring on the date .. umm ..i mean meeting ;-)



04/01/2006 , 14:39:01 PM
From: Jo_Sephine
Comments: I've always loved the idea that it would be Helena, the powerful heiress, who can literally have anything she wants, who has a crush on someone seemingly unattainable to her. Hate/Love is my favourite romantic progression, and Helena and Bette certainly have that going for them! I'm excited to see what direction you'll take them in (as long as it leads to the bedroom somewhere along the line), and it must be said, your writing style and technique are incredible! You're clearly very talented, and I'm glad you're sharing your talent with our little fandom!



04/03/2006 , 13:13:43 PM
From: robbeedee
Comments: Zheese, Another piece of perfection as the slow burn tortuously takes its time in arriving at the main event. The dialogue flows simply and easily allowing an insight into each of the characters and staying true to their voices thus far. This buildup is truly tantazingly as Bette and Helena gradually test each other. They torment and tease one another with the slightest hint of temptation as to what might be. Beautifully written and constructeddd. Thank you so much for this fabulous fan fiction. Can't wait to see where it leads to next. Your Loyal Fan.



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