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The evening nurse cleared her throat.  “Sorry to interrupt.  I’ve brought a special little visitor who has been screaming up a storm about seeing her Mamas.”

 

Bette walked over and took Angelica from her.   “Thanks.”  To Angelica, “Hi, little Miss.  Hello, Boo.”  Bette cooed over her daughter, then turned to the nurse. “Could we have a few minutes alone?  I know Tina needs to be turned, but I need a few minutes.”

 

“No problem.  I’ll be back in fifteen.”

 

The nurse left and Bette walked back to the bed.  She placed Angelica on top of her other mother, letting Angie’s ear rest against Tina’s strong heartbeat.  Bette sucked in her lips as she pushed play on the iPod. Bette placed one hand on Angelica’s back and with the other hand, she held Tina’s cool, dry hand.  “Angelica, Mama Tee and I picked this song out for you.  We love you, baby.  We love you and you have a big family that loves you.”

 

Sweet Honey in the Rock, the DC-based women’s vocal group that Bette had loved for years sang their song sweetly. 

 

There's godlike
And warlike
And strong
Like only some show
And there's sad like
And madlike
And had
Like we know
But by my life be I spirit
And by my heart be I woman
And by my eyes be I open
And by my hands be I whole

 

There was no movement from Tina, no recognition of the song they had chosen to play for Angelica.  She simply lay in the hospital bed unmoving, unblinking.  But Tina’s mind heard the song and remembered.  Behind closed eyelids, Tina saw Bette’s sister, Kit, Dana, Alice, Shane, Carmen, and Jenny meeting Angelica for the first time in her mind’s eye.

 

Alice took Angelica from Kit’s arms and smiled down at her Earthdaughter.  Hi there. 'Kay.”  She didn’t hold onto Angelica, but passed her to Carmen.

 

“Aw, so cute,” Carmen said and grinned at the family, then kissed the baby’s forehead before passing her to Jenny.

 

“Hi, little one. You are so beautiful...” but when Angelica fussed, Jenny handed her over to Shane. 

 

Bette watched Tina for any sign that the song, that this moment was getting through to her, but nothing.  Angelica began to cry and Bette gently massaged her back and bent to kiss her head and then Tina’s lips.

 

Tina remained in her illusion.

 

Shane grinned broadly.  She was amazed at the miracle of this baby.  “She has tiny feet.”

 

They say slowly
Brings the least shock
But no matter how slow I walk
There are traces
Empty spaces
And doors and doors of locks
But by my life be I spirit
And by my heart be I woman
And by my eyes be I open
And by my hands be I whole

 

When Shane handed the baby to Kit, Angelica’s aunt shook her head, also marveling at this little one who was so new to the world.  “Oh, Angelica. Oh, sweetie, you are going to have a very, very interesting life, you know that?--Because we are some very, very interesting people.”

 

Bette answered Kit and the group by saying, “This is your family.”

 

In the real hospital room, Bette began to cry and wiped her tears away and Angelica, so connected to her mothers began to cry, also. 

 

“Shh. Shh, shh, shh.”

 

You young ones
You're the next ones
And I hope you choose it well
Though you try hard
You may fall prey
To the jaded jewel
But by your lives be you spirit
And by your hearts be you women
And by your eyes be you open
And by your hands be you whole

 

Listen, there are waters
Hidden from us
In the maze we find them still
We'll take you to them
You take your young ones
May they take their own in turn
But by your lives be you spirit
And by your hearts be you women
And by your eyes be you open
And by your hands be you whole

 

“It's all right.”  Bette said to both Angelica and Tina and somehow, Tina heard.

 

END PART ONE

 

 

 

Dialogue from

the delivery room (Season 2, Season Finale)

the final scene of S2 (Angelica meets the family)




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03/30/2006 , 15:21:17 PM
From: Seahurst
Comments: Wow...heartwrenching...grabbed my heart and didn't let go!!! Thank you!



03/30/2006 , 15:35:25 PM
From: Heather481
Comments: That was excellent. I loved it.



03/30/2006 , 16:03:11 PM
From: cutefacethickwaist
Comments: Excellant post. I'm with Seahurt all the way. Where's that oxygen tank....there...now that should do it...lol:) Please soon. Thanks. Bye now



03/30/2006 , 16:07:22 PM
From: cutefacethickwaist
Comments: I'm sorry for my bad english. I meant Please Post soon. There. Now that should do it.



03/30/2006 , 16:13:59 PM
From: fergz1
Comments: OMG...my poor heart. Thank you for bringing this story to us. One of those "if only"...please post very soon.



03/30/2006 , 16:29:03 PM
From: honda90
Comments: wow, you've got our attention for sure...It's great to finally see all these new stories starting, especially from some writers that we've not heard from in a while...I totally 2nd Seahurts comments!!!



03/30/2006 , 16:33:09 PM
From: missyang
Comments: That's great. Keep on please.



03/30/2006 , 16:35:00 PM
From: phantomframe
Comments: Great to see you back here! Another excellent, compelling story, as usual. Really wonderful--post again soon.



03/30/2006 , 16:40:38 PM
From: Manda L.
Comments: Man, I have to say that I already prefer this story to S3, and it's only the first chapter! Tina in a coma is better than bitchface Tina on the show. You write so well too, and you have the characters down pat. Excellent job! Please continue.



03/30/2006 , 17:32:25 PM
From: techgal
Comments: Portia, I cherish fond memories of your first story, which was so well and densely written. Thank you for coming back and giving us your version of S3. I can't wait to read it!



03/30/2006 , 18:47:50 PM
From: Lauren25
Comments: This is great. Please continue. I love this. And yes, it's heartwrenching. please post soon



03/30/2006 , 18:58:36 PM
From: Just Once
Comments: Wonderful Post. I continue to completely enjoy your writing. Your spin on season 3 is over a kajillion times better than IC's version! Thank you very much for writing!



03/30/2006 , 19:51:46 PM
From: spiveh
Comments: I haven't even read the story yet because I saw your name and got all giddy. Your first story and especially your last story are still part of my favorite few. BRB after I read.



03/30/2006 , 20:03:00 PM
From: mnj33pp
Comments: This is wonderful. I hope in season 4 this is what they go back too (tina was in a coma and none of season 3 happened)



03/30/2006 , 20:23:36 PM
From: bettyvhall
Comments: WOW.sad but also so beautiful thanks



03/30/2006 , 21:10:06 PM
From: BetteAndTinaForever
Comments: it's better, at least we know what's happening in the lost 6 months...please, no henry or dead dana or other drama...just a little drama



03/30/2006 , 22:08:56 PM
From: AmandaMG
Comments: i have been saying it from day 1... tina is in a coma... she has to be ... season 3 sucked... and everyone is so out of character... even helena ia nice... now where else would helena be so nice then in tina's mind... we should be so lucky that this is how season4 starts.. with tina waking up... IC.. you listening...



03/30/2006 , 22:42:40 PM
From: Bailey
Comments: absolutely terrific!



03/31/2006 , 09:03:31 AM
From: Tori87
Comments: Great story :D Please post more soon



03/31/2006 , 18:25:15 PM
From: pattifloatn
Comments: This story was so heartwrenching. Our family just went through this situation with my brother in-law. He lived in this state for one and half years before he finally left this earth. The patient can hear you and if they are able to will respond. It may just be blinking of the eyes, or a squeeze of the hand but they do hear you. Thank you for this take. I to am not happy with the 3rd season. Maybe in your story we can skip the whole guy thing.



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