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Title: Of Me... Chapter 3
Author: TMerlin  [ Send a Private Message ]
Copyright: Some belongs to Showtime, some to me.
Content Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: N/A...no representations being made about the necessity of Kleenex...enter at your own risk. Pillow may also be required.
Author's Note: Thanks to all of you for reading and especially for taking the time to share your thoughts with me in your comments and PM's. I'm not sure what to tell you about this next chapter. I tried to edit it, divide it up into two chapters, but, here it isin a form that I couldn't seem to escape, try as I did. So, I'm sharing it with you, for better or for worse. I hope it makes sense, I hope that it works for you as a decent read, and that the characters and their thoughts and feelings come through as you read it. I look forward to your comments. Those of you that comment on not minding the length of my chapterswell, let's just hope I'm not pushing my luck this time!

BetteAndTinaForever - thanks B&TF. I didn't think there was enough heartbreak in there for more tears, but I wonder how it's going to be when Tina finds out. I wonder if she'll be surprised. Look forward, as always, to getting your thoughts on the next chapter.

akalittlered - thanks for reading and your comment. Glad you enjoyed it. I wonder whether Tina can see anything right now and I'm trying to figure out what would make her see. I hope you like the next one.

Seahurst - Hello Seahurst and thank you very much for both your comments! When I read the second I thought 'Oh no, now I've gotten Seahurst all worked up I'm in trouble!' I think you're right and that people are predisposed in a way to not really seeing a nonbiological parent's connection as easily as the natural parent's tie to the child. I can't imagine Bette's position emotionally vis--vis this childher pain as she loses the child (on the show) is immense I imagine. As far as the show itself is concerned, I hope things improve and sooner than in the last season! I really appreciate you reading and commenting. I'm curious to see what you'll think of this next mammoth chapter.

dedpreztourist - uh ohcried again huh? I wasn't expecting it to hit that chord with the readers, but it's good to see that it actually had some effect. Thanks for continuing to read and comment. Hope you like this next one.

Jwet - hey there Jwet, how's it going? It's nice to see your comment. Thanks very much for the compliment. I hope you like this next one.

skslkorty - hi skslkorty. I wasn't expecting this chapter to be a tear jerker, but glad to see that it was thought provoking. Thanks for commenting and I hope you like the next chapter.

adway - Thanks a lot for your comments. That's generous of you to say. I'm really happy that it works for you as you describe. Sometimes it's hard to tell whether the comings and goings of the dialogue are easy to read or confusing, so it really helps to see the comments on that. Thanks for reading and I hope this next chapter works well too. I struggled with it, particularly with not being able to shorten it and simplify the dialogue.

amazonlvr - Thanks a lot amazonlvr. This one's more than 9 pages but I hope that somehow it still manages to be a decent read. I'm frankly scared to post it but I can't seem to change it or do it differently. Hope you like it.

vam - hey vam. Thanks for your kind words and for continuing to read. I really hope this next chapter doesn't tire your eyes out! Hope it works. Let me know.

Clarity - Thank you very much for sharing your thoughts with me. It's great to see such positive comments. Thanks for reading. I hope you like this next chapter too.

Mad Maggot - hey there Mad Maggot. Thanks for your great comments. I hadn't expected Kit to play a bigger role in this story, but it seems I kinda like the friends getting involved with B&T more than they do on the show. I hope you like this one too. Let me know.

twc1296 - hi twc1296. Thanks for reading and commenting. I don't know if Kleenex will be needed on this next one, but let me know what you think.

missyang - hello missyang. Poor Tina. Nobody seems to know what's going on with her on the show and that frustration seems to filter into some of the fanfics. Thanks for continuing to read and sharing your thoughts. Hope this next one works well for you too.

bettyvhall - hey old lady! (just kidding) I don't know if you'll cry with this next one. I just hope you're not tempted to yawn a lot! Thanks very much for continuing to read and providing comments. Let me know what you think of this next chapter. I agree- if this LWORD stuff were real it would be so unfortunate for Angelica to be deprived of Bette. How awful.

smiley - One tearthat's all it takes! Thanks so much for your generous comments. I'm glad you like the 'full' chapters, but I hope you don't consider this next one WAY too long. Glad the conversation with Helena worked like you said.

honda90 - hello there honda90. Thanks so much for continuing to read and comment. Much appreciated. Thanks for your kind words. I'm happy to hear that the length and wordy dialogue ain't killing it for you. Let me know though what you think of this next one.

poohhoney67 - thanks very much for your considerate comments. This season it seems like the members of the group aren't too aware of what is going on in each other's lives. I find that disconnected I guess. I hope you like this next chapter too. Let me know whether it works for you.

skyblue - thanks skyblue for those nice comments. I'm glad you liked it and hope that you'll like this next chapter too, despite the hefty word count and run-on dialogue. Let me know.

B - hmmmm.see I didn't think you'd need Kleenexjust like I don't think you'll likely need Kleenex with this next chaptermaybe.hmmmm. Thanks very much for your very generous comments. It's great to see that the writing is working for you as you indicate. I hope that you continue to enjoy the next chapters. Please let me know what you think. I hadn't expected Helena to fit in like this and glad you think it works.

charlenestate - thanks a lot charlenestate, for your kind words. I'm glad you find the characters are coming across well. Thanks for reading and commenting, on the other stories too. I hope you continue to enjoy this story.

bonaire girl - hello Bonaire girl. I didn't expect it to provoke emotions to that extent. It's great to see that it worked well and had an effect. Thank you for reading and taking the time to post comments. I hope you like this next one too.


onthebrink - thanks onthebrink. I'm glad to see that you don't find it too predictable. I thought some of the dialogue would sound a little too obvious or overdone, but I'm really happy to see that it worked for some of the readers. Thanks for reading and commenting and I hope you like the next chapter.

azmama - hello again azmama. Thank you for your generous comments. Glad you like the 'developed' chapters. Hope this next one isn't overdeveloped! Let me know what you think.

mnj33pp - hi mnj33pp. Thanks very much for the kind words. I didn't expect it to provoke tears as much this time around. I'm happy to see the chapter was provoking at all. Glad it worked for your. I hope you like the next chapter as well.

Brooke - hi Brooke. I guess you're right and that theoretically Angelica might one day blame Bette. I hope everything somehow works out on the show too. I'm glad you like the story, despite the tears, and I hope you'll continue reading it. Thanks for reading and posting comments.

Marti - Greetings Marti. It's great to see your thoughtful comments again. Thank you so much for continuing to read and comment. Thank you for your generous words. What you said about the characters' issue with lying to 'oneself' and hiding was interesting, and there is a hint of your words in this next chapter. I hope you find that it makes sense in the way I have presented it, in the way I have presented the dialogue and discussions, and the characters themselves. I realized as I wrote that Angelica was becoming, at least to some extent/on some level, the beacon you describe. This is quite possibly the longest chapter I have ever posted, which worries me. Tried as I did to divide it up/shorten it/edit it, I could not seem to salvage it from the state in which it appears following these introductory comments. Let me know what you think.

fergz1 - thanks very much fergz1. Thanks for continuing to read and comment. I probably should play it safe and not make any representations anymore about whether readers will require Kleenex. I guess I should just say 'enter at your own risk'of tears or incessant yawningor laughter, or perhaps a combination of all three! I didn't expect Helena to surface in the way she did. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Let me know how this next chapter strikes you.

Coach - Thank you for your generous comments on my story. I'm really happy that readers are actually enjoying it and following it as they are. I hope this next chapter doesn't push my luck! The characters' distancing and failure to communicate on the show is part of the frustration I think the audience feels. I hope there's a change in course and that somehow their relationship will overcome. I hope I manage to keep you hooked to this story. Let me know what you think of this next chapter.

arkansas jo - glad you liked the Helena part. Yeah, Angelica does seem to be sensing thingsand I hadn't expected that to occur at first. Didn't expect this to continue being a tear jerker, but it's good to see that at least it's working for the readers, at least the ones who have commented. I'm not sure where we'll end up. I hope it'll be interesting at least. Let me know what you think of the next one.

Paula53 - It's a really rough ride this season for sure. A lot seems to just somehow not make sense. Anyway, I'm glad that this story is somehow working for the readers. Thanks for your comments. Let me know what you think of the next chapter.

mariam - hi mariam. I don't know if this next one will make you cry. I hope you like it. It's a bit much, to say the least. Thank you for reading and commenting.

allyemmerson - damn alleymmerson, your comments are greatthank you. I really appreciate you reading and taking the time to comment. Please let me know what you think of this next war&peace chapter.

2sweet2bhurt - thank you for your considerate comments. It's great to read that you were actually moved by the story. Yes "the very essence of Bette"that sounds right.
I didn't think the story would manage to hit the chord you describe about family and other issues. I'm glad you enjoy it and hope that you continue to read and enjoy it. Let me know what you think of this next chapter. Thanks for reading and commenting. It takes a while to write up these responses to all the readers' comments. At some point, I may find that I simply can't continue to do it. But the readers' comments are so important and make such a huge difference in this experience that I feel compelled to reply to each if I can.


Summary: Bette and Tina face the roads they've chosen.
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JUSTIN-  (Upon seeing Bette at his office threshold)  "Hey there.  Care for an aperitif before we go?"


 


BETTE-  "Sure."  (Justin walks over to the huge wall unit in his office.  He unlocks the panels and opens them to reveal a wealthy stash of fine spirits and chocolates.  Bette is astounded.)


 


JUSTIN-  "Welcome, to my little kingdom!  Hmmmm.it seems Ms. Abigail has been visiting lately!"  (He looks at Bette and smiles.)  "I only let HER have access, with the only other key.  I let her indulge herself a little, particularly on days when I've been overly prolific on dictation!  Better get on her good sideshe shares sometimes, though it's only permitted with the higher ranking staff and board members.  You do qualify you know!"  (He pours her a drink.)  "Try this.  And have a taste of the Belgian chocolateit's divine!"


 


BETTE-  "This is incredible.  Mmmmmm."  (Justin looks at Bette carefully.)


 


JUSTIN-  "Madam Director, is everything alright?"


 


BETTE-  "Yeswhy do you ask?"


 


JUSTIN-  "Your eyesthey look tired, to say the least."


 


BETTE-  "Long day I guess.  I had to read an awful lot of material today."


 


JUSTIN-  "I know what you mean, that can get painful."


 


BETTE-  "Yes, yes it can."


 


JUSTIN-  "Well, shall we?  The concert is at Carnegie Hall.  After the show we'll go back stage and see my sister.  Perhaps we'll go for drinks.  She's a wild one.  I'm the boring one in the family you see." 


 


BETTE-  "Ah, I thought there was something peculiar about you."  (He smiles, they chuckle, and leave the gallery.  They hail a cab.  During the cab ride, Bette seems distracted.  She's gazing out the window, viewing the New York City streets and pedestrians as Justin glimpses at her, wondering what has captured her attention.  Finally, she turns to him.)  "So, is everything going well for the benefactor's dinner?"


 


JUSTIN-  "Yes, I think we'll have a great turn out this year.  You'll be coming, of course?"


 


BETTE-  "Yes, of course."


 


JUSTIN-  "Give Abigail your confirmation in case I forget and let her know if you're bringing a guest."


 


BETTE-  "No, no guest."


 


JUSTIN-  "Well, it's a while yet before the event.  Perhaps that will change?"  (He smiles.)


 


BETTE-  (She starts off with a brief smile, looks out the window, and responds.)  "No, I don't expect that will change any time soon."  (She sort of snaps out of it, thinking she doesn't want to seem too 'heavy' to Justin, and changes her tone.)  "Well, never say never I suppose!  We'll see."  (And she smiles.  Justin smiles back, but gazes at her as she looks away.  He's concerned about her.  He had heard the rumors about her personal life, and he hoped that she wasn't as unhappy as he suspected.  He hoped that would change with her new life and work at the gallery, with which he already had occasion to be impressed, even in her first few days.  Even Miranda, who was a perfectionist, was very pleased with her work and vision for the gallery.)


 


JUSTIN-  "Here we are."  (He pays the cabby, and they exit, standing in front of the great hall.)  "Do you know of Elgar's cello concerto?"


 


BETTE-  "Yes, I think I do."


 


JUSTIN-  "Well, when it's live, in concert, it's fabulous.  The cellist who performs the solo is, as I understand it, sensational."


 


BETTE-  "I can't wait."  (They enter and make their way to the seats.  It was close to the start of the concert.  As they took their seats, in the first few rows, the lights signaled the start of the concert.  The music began and Bette's struggle to focus suddenly became easier as she let the sounds flirt with her senses and sustain her attention.  She shut down her mind's eye, and focused, both in sight and sound, on the orchestra and its pervasive music.  The time flew and then it came time for the signature piece.  Justin leaned in)


 


JUSTIN-  "Here it is, Elgar's cello concerto."  (Bette nodded.  The show now focused on the cellist, a woman in a black gown with flowing her, caressing her cello in front of her.  She was seated near the conductor, whom Bette hadn't noticed until now.  The conductor's back was obviously turned for the most part to the audience, and Bette hadn't looked when this wasn't the case.  The cellist caught her attention.  This musician was elegant, had a presence, and as she began the thunderous beginning to this main piece, she seemed to commence a very intense musical conversation with the conductor.  The maestro had what appeared to be longer black hair, of an unruly sort, that flew here and there with the motions of the conductor's arms that seemed to beckon to the cellist, replying to her musical intonations and directing her in every movement, facial expression, and passionate striking of the bow along the cello's strings.  There appeared to be a dialogue of great intensity as the musical piece underwent its various cyclical movements, crescendos and melancholy yet intense notes.  The cellist seemed to move her bow with greater passion as the piece progressed, and intensified with every responding gesture of the conductor's arms.  Bette noticed the handsthe maestro's hands seemed to almost tremble in their extended motions of musical direction as the fingers twitched and outstretched, and ordered the cellist to come hither, and then pushed her waves of musical incantations away.  And the music itselfit was engaging Bette in a conversation of its own.  Watching the beautiful cellist adore and adorn her instrument, joust with the conductor in an unspoken tirade, and rise and fall with the musical notes, Bette was captivated and takentaken elsewhere, taken with the music and the ravishing sounds emanating from that stage and that particular cello.  The jousting between the cellist and her maestro almost seemed like an unbelievable rendition of lovemakingdistracting as well as enthrallingmesmerizing and, for Bette, almost arousing.  After the climax of the musical piece, she found herself breathing again, and coming down from the oddest sort of high as the end of the music neared and then triggered applause.  In this case, it became an ovation.  The maestro gestured to the beautiful cellist, who then reciprocated with her elegant arm and hand.  Finally, a glimpse of the maestro as she faced the audiencea woman in black with a white streak in her dark hair.  Now, the maestro descending her podium and gently lifting the cellist's hand, she brought her to the fore of the stage as they both reveled in the applause with their demure bows to the grateful and still captivated audience.  Justin, while clapping, leaned in)


 


JUSTIN-  "Isn't she amazing?"  (Bette nodded hoping that his sister was the cellistand then wondering whether the conductor, a maestro with an intense presence, was this ravishing beauty's muse.)  "Let's go, we'll go backstage and we'll see Lily."  (The two slowly worked they way through the crowd.  After a while, they made their way backstage, to a common area.  Justin spoke to a stagehand who then led them to a private dressing room area.)  "We'll just wait here and she'll come out."




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