Tina sat with the revelation. She took it in. She knew how to protest. "I don't need a mother, Bette," she said evenly.
But the voice in front of her, when it came, was far away, and directed out the window, overly reconciled already to the wind and snow, the gathering cold. "Oh Tina," Bette said, turning towards her like the truth. "Yes, you do."
02/17/2006 ,
20:33:10 PM From:
ensconsed Comments:
wow... luvrgirl your writing is so emotively powerful. My breath hitches and gratefully won't unhitch as I swim in your beautiful prose. I am just captivated by every chapter, so raw, so peeled back are your Bette and Tina; they are incredible women as they are themselves, and as they are everything to one another. Truly, I cannot wait for your next glimpse into their world of multifaceted and unavoidable passion. Much Thanks...
02/17/2006 ,
20:44:41 PM From:
Seahurst Comments:
Wow! Your dialogue is incredible. Thank you.
02/17/2006 ,
20:46:48 PM From:
walks Comments:
amazing wow dont stop really enoy this story please continue ..
02/17/2006 ,
20:52:44 PM From:
tylo Comments:
your killng me this is great!!!!!!!!!!!!!
02/17/2006 ,
21:01:16 PM From:
dixirella Comments:
This is so powerful and great. Torturous, yes...but great.
02/17/2006 ,
21:18:52 PM From:
BetteAndTinaForever Comments:
so emotional...i hope this will turn into something resolvable...like bette will leave and tina will take the next flight and follow and stay in LA...love the dialog, very emotional and intense
02/17/2006 ,
21:43:36 PM From:
onthebrink Comments:
Have loved this story since ch. 1. Hope they find a way to be together. Please post soon!
02/17/2006 ,
21:44:15 PM From:
missyang Comments:
That's fabulous! For me it's like a TiBette version of Pride and Prejudice, which is one of my favourites.
02/17/2006 ,
21:53:11 PM From:
ayesha23 Comments:
hey you, great post. i missed this story, pls post soon. i hope these 2 find a way to be together.
02/17/2006 ,
22:14:50 PM From:
honda90 Comments:
shoot me, please, anything, just put me out of this agonizing misery...I can't take it anymore pls stop teasing...Tina rip her clothes off or leave the room, just dooooo someting!!!!
02/17/2006 ,
22:18:57 PM From:
fergz1 Comments:
damn..this is still so wonderful. Please post soon
02/17/2006 ,
22:43:17 PM From:
Meiji Comments:
Amazing! You have sustained the intensity of the characters' emotions since you first crossed their paths. Thank you for this story.
02/18/2006 ,
00:20:26 AM From:
T. Comments:
That was...beautiful!! Hope they figure out how to heal together.
02/18/2006 ,
00:35:19 AM From:
curious Comments:
waitin for more LG
02/18/2006 ,
02:10:03 AM From:
nzgrl Comments:
Great!
02/18/2006 ,
03:06:43 AM From:
Lamentamini Comments:
This has to be one of the longest slow burns I've ever read. Not that I mind though because all of these chapters of foreplay and push and pull will lead to a mind-blowing experience.
02/18/2006 ,
07:40:05 AM From:
Van Comments:
MAN!!!!!!!!!!!!! Y DON'T U POST MORE OFTEN????????
02/18/2006 ,
10:07:32 AM From:
AuntieCallisto Comments:
beautiful.
02/18/2006 ,
11:43:16 AM From:
luvrgirl Comments:
For the record, I'm not teasing. So if it's misery to read, can't help w/that. "Doing something" does not equal only fucking. Not in my universe.
02/18/2006 ,
17:06:49 PM From:
B Comments:
OK you are seriously taking my breath away with this...and in your own words this is "Just for fun"...well im truly in awe of this story ...BUT... im not having fun!!!lol... while your dealing with raw emotion in a beauitful manner,its becoming very emotionaly charged,even sad.... when you started this all we wanted was the ultimate sex scene between 2 people that were obviously very attracted to each other....now its so much more than just sex..IF (and im starting to wonder) it does happen then it wont be just sex!!!It will have been so much more, this is amazeing and wherever you go with it,it will still be amazeing, Thanks
02/18/2006 ,
18:52:28 PM From:
bettyvhall Comments:
Loved this story since the first chapter, Can't always comment butI do read,it gets better and better. Just hope that Bette takes Tina with her thanks
02/19/2006 ,
08:49:41 AM From:
gingerbread986 Comments:
Like so many others, I've been completely captivated with this story from the beginning. You've woven what could have been a simple, straightforward pairing, into a wonderfully loving and complex relationship. It's truly a joy to read and I look forward to reading each new chapter. Thanks!
02/25/2006 ,
02:17:56 AM From:
suki7666 Comments:
jamais ma cherie, jamais, mais alors, combien de plus que vous les restez comme ca? ah, ca cette le question ... mais quand vous esquez vous vient je vous attend avec plaisir, s'il vous plait, depeche toi.....translation readily supplied with additional posting
04/04/2006 ,
21:29:57 PM From:
ut Comments:
Wow emotional !