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Title: Valediction - Chapter 2 - "Take my hand and lead me to salvation..."
Author: TMerlin  [ Send a Private Message ]
Copyright: Characters and some plot is Showtimes, the rest, such as it is, belongs to me. The chapter description- 'take my hand and lead me to salvation is taken from Les Miserables.
Content Rating: R
Disclaimer: N/A
Author's Note: Thank you all so very much for reading taking the time to comment. I was taken aback by the comments and reaction to the first chapter. I greatly appreciate it. The comments make all the difference in the world. I hope this next and final chapter makes some sense and that it works for you as readers. I promised it would be a short story, so this is the last chapter. Maybe it would've been better to develop the story more, perhaps with more chapters, but I felt compelled to just get it all out and finish it. I still hope you derive some enjoyment from it in any event. Wellhere you go, it's all I got. Thank you all, and have a good weekend.

2005fanforever - Thank you so very much for that. I hope this next one doesn't disappoint.

Van - hope you like this follow up chapter and ending. Man those spoilersugh.

lineke - thank linekewell I'm really glad it worked that like for you. Thanks for reading and posting comments.

slipperynipple - hello slipperynipple- nothing up my sleeve except this last chapter. Wish I had something a little more creative or surprising. I'm afraid to post it 'cause I was surprised by these last comments and I dunno if it's gonna work as well. I hope you like it.

Aria - hi Ariawellooftthese comments left quite an impact me- that you so much for reading and for providing your generous commentary. I hope you like this one too.

lara weave - hello lara weave. My goodnessI hope this one comes even close to doing that. I was pleasantly surprised to see these comments. Thanks for reading and taking the time to let me know.

Seahurst - Thank you very much for your once again kind words. I appreciate you continuing to read and giving feedback. Hope you enjoy this long one too.

Chasemenow - Hello chasemenowwelltry as I did to avoid it, there's more melodrama in this one for you toohope you like it. Thanks very much for your generous comments. I really struggled with whether them coming together in the end was realistic and I almost went the way of a painful plot line. In the end, I just didn't have the chutzpah for that kind of thing.

andreysi - andreysi, thank you for your positive comment. I hope you like this last chapter as well. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Keisha - Hey there Keishait's good to see you here too! Thanks so much for reading and continuing to post. I really appreciate the support and it really makes a difference.

Anonymous - Hello there Honda90. You are far too generous in your praise! Thank you. It's really nice to see that the chapter had such an effect for you. I hope that this lengthy last chapter doesn't disappoint. Thanks so much for continuing to read and comment. Much appreciated.

suetinabette - you guys are blowing me away with your comments! Thanks suetinabetteI appreciate your comments and thanks for reading. I hope this chapter works for you too.

vam - hey vam. Thank a lot of that commentary. I'm taking you in a direction that I hope isn't all too familiarcouldn't get more creativethis lengthy chapter is all I could muster. I hope you like it.

BetteAndTinaForever - Greetings B&TF! Thanks very much for your comment and your support on this site and the other one. I don't think I'm going to live up to that comment with this long last chapter. I hope though that you still enjoy it.

Anonymous - it's a pleasant surprise that it had such an effect. I'm flattered by the comments. I hope this latest chapter is satisfactory. Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment.

amazonlvr - thanks amazonlvr and thank you for sharing your comments. I hope you like this chapter too.

Mad Maggot - hello Mad Maggot. Man, if only I could do that to you with this chapter too. I hope it works but let me know what you think in any event. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. I really appreciate it.

Fresa - hi Fresa. Thank you. I don't know if you'll find this one as intense. I hope you still manage to enjoy it. Thanks for reading and taking the time to post a comment.

Hails2 - Thanks Hails2! I'm really glad that the characters came across well. I hope they work the same way with this last chapter. Thank you for your comments.

mnj33pp - Hello mnj33pp. I'm really happy to see that my writing had that kind of an effect. I can't believe it. But you're right- there are a lot of great writers on this site and others. It's great to see such care put into these stories. Everyone has the ability in them to express art in every form and its wonderful that this opportunity to do it exists. Thanks for your generous comments and for reading my little story. I hope you like this last chapter.

dixirella - Hello there dixirella! Glad to see you again. Thanks very much for your comment and for reading on. Hope you like this one too.

Anonymous - Thank you very much for that. Well, I decided to not develop the plot further, so it ends and doesn't really get more interesting/suspenseful in the short span of its existence. But it's all I had, so I hope you enjoy it.

Bettyvhall- Hi there Bettyvhall- thank you for that. I'm really glad you liked it and that it had that kind of an effect. I'm pleasantly surprised. Thanks for reading and taking the time to share your thoughts. I hope you like this one too.

azmama - hello azmama- thanks a lot for your very kind and generous post. I really appreciate your words, though they are far too generous! It's great to get feedback like that and I have to say I was surprised by the comments in general. I'm pleasantly surprised that the story had the impact you described. I say surprised because I honestly assumed it would be more melancholy and a little too dramatic to pack a punch, but it's all I had in my head. This next chapter is all I got tooso hope it comes as close as the last one to how much you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts.

arkansas jo - hi Arkansas jo. I hope that you find this chapter as enjoyable. Thank you for your generous comments. I appreciate it and thanks for reading.

ayesha23 - hey ayesha23- thanks for the kind post. Well.this next one has enough psychobabble to last a lifetimeI hope it works as well as the last one- too much drama maybe, but what can I do. Thanks for your comments and thanks for reading.


niknax71 - niknax71, thank you, it was great to see that it worked like that! I really hope this next chapter doesn't disappoint. Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment.

fergz1 - hello fergz1- as promised I'm keeping this one short, so here's the last chapter. I tried to make it more interesting but I didn't want to keep adding chapters. I hope this one lives up to the effect of the last chapter for you. Thank you for reading and commenting.

smiley - Thank a lot smiley. I hope we all continue to like Tinaeven on the show! Damn spoilers! Thanks so much for your comment. Hope you enjoy this chapter too.

Massmom - thanks massmom. I'm glad you like it but I hope you'll like the last chapter too. Thanks for your comment.

mc - I hope this last chapter is as hopeful for you too. Hope you like it. Thanks for reading and commenting.

phyl - phyl, thanks for posting those positive comments. I appreciate it and thank you for reading and taking the time to post a comment.

Phoenix - thanks for the compliments Pheonix. I hope this one works for you too. Thank you for reading and commenting.

Six - thank Six, for those great comments. That's really nice of you. I struggled with whether them patching it up was realistic and then struggled to find a creative and original way of writing the concluding chapter- it's kinda unimaginative but it's all I could put together. I hope you like it in any event.

artgirl- hello there! Thanks very much for your kind words. I hope this next one provides some closure..hopefully not prematurely. Thanks so much for reading and always commenting.

Summary: It comes time - Bette and Tina must say 'goodbye' or 'hello'.
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(Outside the house, Alice, who had driven Tina there with Kit, is sitting in the Mini Cooper, with Shane in the back seat making sure Angelica was comfortable in the car seat.  They are sitting there, in the car, in the rain, waiting for the outcome.  They were parked out front but down the street, hoping that they wouldn't be a quick get away for Tinathey wanted to give her every opportunity if she walked out to think about what she was doing.)


 


ALICE-  "I don't think I can wait any longer, this is getting nerve wrecking."


 


KIT-  "Alice she just went in."


 


SHANE-  "How will we know if they decide to talk all night?  How long are we supposed to wait?"


 


ALICE-  "Well let's hope this one is an all-nighter.  Remember, if she comes out any time soon it won't exactly be a good sign.  Anyway, she said she'd let us know one way or another.  If she's staying for hours, she'll call on the cell.  So no news right now ain't quite good news."


 


KIT-  "I can't believe this is happening."


 


ALICE-  "They're so stubborn.  And right now they're not on the same wavelengthit's like they're at cross-purposes.  Frig, she said she's still in love with her for crying out loud.  You'd think that would resurrect Porterthe Porter we knew and loved."


 


(Back in the house, the intensity was rising. For each of them it was like they couldn't move forward and couldn't take a step back. They couldn't really look far into their eyes at that distance, but they kept looking.  They were paralyzed by the sight of one another.  They were frozenby fear, by something bigger than the minutes and seconds passing as they created this barren space between them that became like a 'no man's land', a last mile.  The upper hand was somehow still Tina's, and the first and last shot in this duel to the last belonged to her as well, though she didn't quite yet know it.)


 


TINA-  (She looked a little worn, her hair a little messy, her clothing a little dirty.  There was a bandage affixed to the back of her head, near her neck.  Her face was clean, her eyes were alert but there was something different about them now.  There was no frigidity in them.  They didn't reflect anger or agitation.  They didn't show fear, but that emotion was in her and it didn't reside solely within Tina.


 


Bette's hair was still glistening with moisture.  She was emotionally exhausted.  She was now in quite possibly the most emotionally taxing context than she's been in a long time.  All she could see was Tinathose eyesshe needed to get closer to them but feared them.  The fact that she had opened them again was a Godsend to Bette.  If she had lost her, Bette would surely, she thought, have lost herself.  But really she was now facing the fear that she had lost her in any event...would that have the same effect?  Would she then lose herself?  Or was that just meant to be?  Bette hadn't felt anything up to this pointjust cognitive shock.  She was numb otherwise.) 


 


BETTE-  (The first word came out first as a whispershe had to repeat it as her voice found itself)  "Whatwhat are you doing here?  Are you ok?"


 


TINA-  (She shakes her head)  "No."  (Bette feels fear.)


 


BETTE-  "Where's Angelica?  With Alice?"  (Tina nods.)  "I'm waiting for Kit.  She should be here any minute"  (Suddenly, she realizes that if Tina is there then Kit isn't coming)  "OhI guess she would have been hereshe was with you at the hospital."  (Tina nods.  Tina slowly takes a step forward.  Bette, almost without thinking, takes a step back into the nightstand near the bed but she maintains her composure.  Tina stops moving forward.) 


 


TINA-  "I'm not going to attack you."  (She smirks.)


 


BETTE-  "I know, I'm sorryI..."


 


TINA-  "I shouldn't have done that.  That was uncalled for, lunging at you like that earlier this evening.  I don't know what came over me.  I was freaking out when Angelica"


 


BETTE-  "I'm sorry.  I didn't mean to hurt you.  I would never"


 


TINA-  "I know."


 


BETTE- "I lost it when I thought I would lose her.  I wasn't thinking straight.  I panicked.  I'm sorry, I had no right.  I'm sorry."


 


TINA-  "You brought her back.  You came to that decision on your own."


 


BETTE-  "I'm really sorry, I"


 


TINA-  "I know."


 


BETTE-  "I would never do anything to intentionally hurt you.  Never.  I had no idea my arm was going to make full contact like that.  I'm sorry, I should have been more careful.  I'm so sorry"


 


TINA-  "I know.  I know.  I know."


 


BETTE-  (Tina seems almost annoyed with her refrain.)  "Are you ok?  I wouldn't have forgiven myself if anything had happened to youyou don't know how sorry I am."


 


TINA-  "I DO know."


 


BETTE-  (She doesn't know what to think and is fearful.  She's trying to stay calm and speaks to Tina in as mild a tone as she can muster)  "Then why are you here?  What else do you want?  What else could you want now?"  (Bette is afraid there's a purpose to this visit that will demolish her already beleaguered soul.)


 


TINA-  "I"


 


BETTE-  "If this about Angelica, please let the lawyers handle it.  I can't do this, I especially can't do this with you NOW."


 


TINA-  "It's not about"


 


BETTE-  (She's not really listening and interrupts)  "I love her."  (She looks at Tina like she is making a last stand on that issue, an issue on which she knew very well Tina had all the control as the birth mother, so all the posturing in the world would be pointless.  Bette's voice seems to highten and strengthen but it hangs by a thread)  "She means the world to me.  She is everything."


 


TINA-  "I know, you said all that before.  I could never and would never question your love for her.  You must know that, somewhere in there, deep down, in that complex mind of yours, in that luminous yet tortured soul."


 


BETTE-  (She's being pushed and now her numbness is giving way to what's underneath.




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