But to let a woman like you go - well I need to have her CIA file updated to say that she's crazy "
Her other hand strokes my hair - I look up and our eyes met. Oh God she's beautiful and she smells so nice. She seems taken aback as well. We look at each other for several elongated minutes - she swallows and breaks the eye contact.
"Sorry Tina - lets go and see how good a poker player you are. I really have the CIA put that in people's reports "
01/18/2006 ,
15:57:49 PM From:
allyemmerson Comments:
okay gals -- what my story now lacks is a vice president. so i'd like people to help me. give me your L Wing Vice President -- and if it makes me laugh your idea takes office. only one rule -- no ilene character -- or i'll have to assassinate her. love Al x
01/18/2006 ,
16:05:41 PM From:
leogrrl2 Comments:
great story. i think the logical person for vp would be candance, but she would have to have a heavy story line leading to a assassination!!!! LOL. keep the great work. i look forward to reading more.
01/18/2006 ,
16:05:51 PM From:
telizh Comments:
Well if that's the case can we make Ilene the Vice President ;).... Ok just kidding... love your spin, never really watched the West Wing but loving this story.. Oh yes pls continue with your other one as well :).. I am going to think about a VP :)
01/18/2006 ,
16:06:29 PM From:
akalittlered Comments:
I don't know who could be V.P. But I so like where this story is going. Keep it coming. More Soon Please!!!
01/18/2006 ,
16:10:48 PM From:
funnyone Comments:
Geez A.E. you don't have to be a snot! Make up our minds, indeed! It's simple, write BOTH stories. Now let me read the chapter and I'll get back to you.
01/18/2006 ,
16:16:15 PM From:
lovelyangel Comments:
Great chapter and story. Looking forward to more.
01/18/2006 ,
16:20:17 PM From:
B Comments:
OH MYGOD!!!YOU KILLED OFF HILARY! ok i shouldnt be laughing but this is really funny in all the right places...i love it...cant think of any worthy vice presidents right now will have to have a littlet think...lol
01/18/2006 ,
16:22:47 PM From:
Lamentamini Comments:
Hmmm a good VP. Well hell I can't think of anything funny. LOL Dana sounds logical since she's like Bette's total opposite (quiet, innocent, meek) but that's not exactly funny. We could have Ton-Ton just because she annoys the fuck out of everyone. :P
01/18/2006 ,
16:22:50 PM From:
funnyone Comments:
I nominate James for VP, even if he isn't female. We know Bette can trust him, we know him to be competent and thorough. Can't have an entirely female White House anyway.
01/18/2006 ,
16:23:42 PM From:
love_girl Comments:
I agree with leogrrl2, the vicepresident can be Candace, that keeps the tension a bit between madam Porter ;-) and Tina haha... Mayb they can fight over Bette!!
01/18/2006 ,
16:25:12 PM From:
funnyone Comments:
Make Chaiken a senator on the other side of the aisle as we say here, part of the opposition.
01/18/2006 ,
16:27:17 PM From:
badgirl Comments:
Hi Ally I did make up my mind! I want this story and a sequel! It's as simple as that LOL I already love this story, so I hope you continue it! Don't know about a VP, but I think James would make a good VP. Ok, now please post soon!
01/18/2006 ,
16:39:31 PM From:
hansen Comments:
This is soooo great and funny :o)) I actually thinks the VP should be a mann, they can't all be women. James is a good choise, but a bit boring.....what about Mark - maybe he can install some spy cam in the lady toilet and we can all "see" some hot lesbian sex LMAO....keep'em coming :o))
01/18/2006 ,
16:40:06 PM From:
2005fanforever Comments:
I really like this story. Maybe we can start a "Porter For President" campaign :o) It really would not be any stranger than the story IC is force feeding us- LOL. James would make an awesome VP (He's such a yes Bette man).
01/18/2006 ,
16:44:03 PM From:
Megga Comments:
ooOOOoo Loving this story! Hmmm . . .is Dana in yet? She could be VP, unless you want someone conniving then I would go for Candyass. . .Oh hey wait, what about the adoption lady in the wheelchair? Shane could "accidentally" push her down the whitehouse steps. . .
01/18/2006 ,
16:45:05 PM From:
suetinabette Comments:
i just love this and you should have peggy as vp that would shock helena
01/18/2006 ,
16:50:22 PM From:
hookedonlw Comments:
Hrm, VP.... how about a bit of age, wisdom and flamboyance for the VP of such a unique administration.... Peggy Peabody. Or would that be too odd with Helena being a senator. Hrmmmm
01/18/2006 ,
16:53:03 PM From:
Lauren25 Comments:
Great story, And I agree, James is a great choice. Please post soon
01/18/2006 ,
17:03:40 PM From:
StormyOne Comments:
Please not Candace for VP. James gets my vote.
01/18/2006 ,
17:14:38 PM From:
smiley Comments:
Love this story adn you should continue the ither one, if not atleast gives a honeymoon chapter and then you could do stand alone chapters. For VP, no candyass= too much drama...Dana= you could stick her a s a senator...um ...I'm not sure!!! have to think about that!!!
01/18/2006 ,
17:19:44 PM From:
Van Comments:
So far so good.....but I for one still want a sequel!!!!!!!! R U gonna write a sequel??? UPDATE SOON!!!!
01/18/2006 ,
17:19:54 PM From:
BetteAndTinaForever Comments:
i love it, so funny for some reason, i vote for james...candyass can be another enemy who will attempt to assasinate bette and will be killed in a process
01/18/2006 ,
17:21:57 PM From:
lostinside Comments:
Awesome story :D I would like James as VP..the only man around all this woman lmao i wonder what he thinks about it :P he must get nuts!. Post soon.
01/18/2006 ,
17:45:08 PM From:
munkies_2005 Comments:
LOL now this is wakko.... good.. but pff id like a few hours worth of listening to what goes on in ur head to come up wi this one :D more plz :D
01/18/2006 ,
18:08:19 PM From:
Nanc Comments:
Ivan for VP! (no one knows he's a she!)Gabby Deveax for House Speaker!?S3's Angus, would be an unusual politician Maybe S3's Dylan? she looks intriguingHow about Helena's other ex...Winnie Mann!Dr. Wilson for Surgeon General.Dana as an official speechwriter.Peggy Peabody as the Ambassador to Great Britain (The Court of St. James)... could explain Helena's accent ;-)Jenny as a reporter?And lets not forget an intern for Bette. (Not Monica, ew!) Marina?(oh my) Moira(oh god!)
01/18/2006 ,
18:09:34 PM From:
bettyvhall Comments:
How about Peggy for V/P she will keep the gang in line also Helena. James will be good Bette has always trusted James. They killed Hilary.what a shame. I BELIEVE THAT bETTE AND tINA WILL GO GOOD TOGETHER. Lets keep Candace out of the White House unless she is a H/R or Senator. Maybe in mainatance. thanks
01/18/2006 ,
18:26:36 PM From:
slip79 Comments:
Luv the chapter! Great start to this new story.... we still want all your stories tho hun! As for VP.... not sure, like the others said I'll have to think on it.... ;)
01/18/2006 ,
18:35:24 PM From:
Nanc Comments:
Forgot to add... don't forget Mr. P!... And if you really want to make us happy please recruit the members of Betty for NASA, and launch them somewhere! ;-)
01/18/2006 ,
18:56:08 PM From:
vfullart Comments:
Holy Newton! Nanc is right! Betty should be a ill-fated NASA mission. They are stuck in the space station with no hope of rescue! Vp should be Ruth I vote for her. Oh wait does it need to be someone from the show? James is the best choice but Jenny would be really funny. She could keep saying really strange things. They would get sick of explaining what hse meant and have to send her far far away with moira.
01/18/2006 ,
18:59:41 PM From:
Emae29 Comments:
I think you should make James the VP... unless you want and all-girl cabinet.I would go with Ivan, just for the hell of it. LOL Technically she/he is still female. Besides, she/he could livin up those boring ass formal galas, dinners and fun-raisers they have to attend. She/he could do her/his Elvis impersonation. LOLPlease, post again soon. I am into this story already. Great writing thus far.
01/18/2006 ,
19:22:53 PM From:
Kabby Comments:
Ok you sasid it had to make you laugh.... So it has to be JENNY!!!!! lol post soon I love it so far..
01/18/2006 ,
19:28:56 PM From:
Heather481 Comments:
I really, really like this story! I can't wait until the next chapter. James for VP! No Candyass please!!!
01/18/2006 ,
19:47:18 PM From:
fantasymay Comments:
since illene is trying to break up b,twhy not make dana delaney the vp and have the vp and tina fighting over bettei think this is whats going to happen on the show.
01/18/2006 ,
19:52:45 PM From:
rebakathy Comments:
I'm so loving this story! Sad you killed of Hillary,lol. I vote for James personally.
01/18/2006 ,
19:56:06 PM From:
T. Walker (cornwel) Comments:
I vote for Shane's old boss from season two for VP, augh, I forget her name, the one that was always throwing stuff. She's pretty tough! Great fanfic so far
01/18/2006 ,
20:31:52 PM From:
smiley Comments:
what about Billie the promoter?(eww..maybe not)
01/18/2006 ,
21:36:39 PM From:
ecstasythrumusic Comments:
This story is so good. Made me laugh.How about someone who is not related to the show at all to be the V.P.
01/18/2006 ,
22:06:23 PM From:
qellafiama Comments:
How about Lisa the lesbian-identified male?
01/18/2006 ,
23:17:25 PM From:
wo`wo Comments:
a vote to James as VP. always a trustee to Bette i'm sure.
01/18/2006 ,
23:55:45 PM From:
fergz1 Comments:
ally..I am loving your story...it is making me laugh and I can't wait for the President to get laid. Now for VP----I am for James. Need a token, trustworthy man in there. I just can't believe you killed Hillary. Thank God she had Bette Porter as VP..what we could only dream of here in the good 'ol U S of A. Can't wait to see what Dana is? Jenny..is she going to be part of the White House Press? OH...and I think that Bette and Tina should do "IT" in Lincoln's Bedroom the first time.
01/19/2006 ,
00:10:49 AM From:
T. Comments:
OPRAH...or Ellen even :)
01/19/2006 ,
00:18:01 AM From:
dixirella Comments:
Holy cow, I laughed so hard at the story of how Bette became president...I can't believe you offed Hilary! At least it was for a good cause. ;) No "sex scandals" in Bette's Whitehouse, eh? RIGHT. Hmmm...who'd make an interesting VP?... Maybe somebody obscure and not too provocative like Tim or James...or maybe the opposite with Lisa or Gabby...haha. I totally dig Nanc's Betty/NASA idea...or you could just have some terrorist group called 'The Ziffs' and have them meet some horrible end. Maybe Peggy could be the British Prime Minister, too... whee!!! what fun!
01/19/2006 ,
03:13:42 AM From:
ph03nixx Comments:
i think jordana brewster should be vice-president *drool* LOL :P *giggles madly*
01/19/2006 ,
06:16:06 AM From:
ayesha23 Comments:
love this story, how about Peggy Peabody for Veep?
01/19/2006 ,
07:29:06 AM From:
spiveh Comments:
Peggy Peabody would work. Another could be Helena for VP. You know what they say, "Keep your friends close and your enemies closer."But for laughs, I think Tonya would be hilarious.
01/19/2006 ,
07:30:45 AM From:
spiveh Comments:
By the way, I really like this idea. Very different. Looking forward to the next one.
01/19/2006 ,
13:06:08 PM From:
hawkeye1982 Comments:
I am loving this story already! Please keep it up, I can't wait to see where you take us this time.
01/19/2006 ,
15:28:27 PM From:
gogk Comments:
Nice story! i think this team will improve all!!! i am agree with James for VP is a hard worker and loyal to Bette. Post soon
01/19/2006 ,
17:37:16 PM From:
TiBetteShipper Comments:
Hey ally!! *Waves* I've finally found the opportunity to catch up with you. I am loving this story!! Excellent idea. :) I don't have any suggestions for VP, but I'd love to see Bette in charge of a man. Hehe Awesome job so far, I love how different this story is. More soon please! P.S. - Congrats in your blossoming relationship. I wish all the best for the both of you. :)
01/21/2006 ,
18:56:08 PM From:
Buffyken69 Comments:
i just love it! its soooo completely different, but soooo good AND ORIGINAL!pls continue this...and ok i wanted a sequel too for "god she's beautiful" but now that you got another good story, i want you to write on this one ;) i'm not saying i don't want a sequel anymore, just that, spend some time on this one:)))
01/22/2006 ,
00:04:19 AM From:
Satchmo Comments:
hmmm - uber xena turned uber L Word - love it though
01/26/2006 ,
18:25:20 PM From:
Professional Widow Comments:
lol! the comments were as much a treat as the story itself. i like james as VP. Somebody threw out Veronica Bloom as VP, but I think she'd be fabulous as leader of the loyal opposition (or whatever the American equivalent is called...)
02/05/2006 ,
02:15:48 AM From:
ut Comments:
This is good and funny!
02/12/2006 ,
07:43:41 AM From:
asrai Comments:
you probably already have your vp by now as i have only just started reading this, but how about that activist dude from season one? who they did counselling with and dug up the dirt on faye buckley?
07/29/2006 ,
18:38:32 PM From:
albeez Comments:
catching up honey. have finally found some time, some times.
