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"I told you the foot rub would help," Bette said seriously.


 


Tina couldn't help but chuckle at this remark as she brushed a few stray strands of hair from Bette's face. She then ran the palm of her hand over the crown of her head. Bette's eyes closed and her breathing immediately became more measured and relaxed. In moments she had indeed drifted to sleep.


 


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Bette woke up the next day, hardly able to believe how much better she felt. She heard a sneeze from the bathroom. Tina walked out, her robe tied snugly at the waist, fuzzy slippers surrounding cold toes. She carried a tall glass of water in one hand and a bottle of Echinacea and zinc tablets in the other.


 


"Oh oh," Bette said. "My turn to dote on you?"


 


Tina blew her nose into a tissue in response.


 


"At least we have the good sense to get sick at different times," Tina said as she crawled into their bed. "You're nice and warm, let me cuddle up against you."


 


Bette sat up slightly in the bed and waved Tina over to lean on her. She then rested her arm across Tina's shoulders as she snuggled in.


 


"Tell me a story," Tina suggested.


 


"A story?" Bette asked.


 


Tina paused and looked up at Bette with pleading eyes.


 


"Yeah, any story will do. The sound of your voice will help me sleep."


 


"I'm not sure I like that my voice will make you sleepy," Bette replied.


 


"You know what I mean," Tina grinned at Bette's interpretation, in spite of how sick she felt.


 


We all have our ways of feeling better, even when we're feeling our worst.


 


(the end.)


 




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01/03/2006 , 20:17:21 PM
From: pam336
Comments: Sweet, very sweet.



01/03/2006 , 20:19:06 PM
From: pjay
Comments: ah...so sweet...reminds me of my ex.



01/03/2006 , 20:20:47 PM
From: gardengirl
Comments: Yep. That's it, Sister Swim. Perfect.



01/03/2006 , 20:24:01 PM
From: 24betteandtina
Comments: This story is so real that my wife is convinced that I wrote it! Thanks!



01/03/2006 , 20:28:55 PM
From: SydneyWade
Comments: This was so cute. I love your stories ~ anything you want to write.



01/03/2006 , 20:34:24 PM
From: lovelyangel
Comments: So sweet. Thanks!



01/03/2006 , 20:37:27 PM
From: munkies_2005
Comments: *sniffs* soo sweet :)



01/03/2006 , 20:49:37 PM
From: amyisu3
Comments: Awww, I love stories like this! It's always the little things that matter in life! =)



01/03/2006 , 21:03:36 PM
From: AmandaMG
Comments: that was so cute... thanks we need a lot of cute stories... so please reach in and pull another one out...



01/03/2006 , 21:13:30 PM
From: BetteAndTinaForever
Comments: it was really cute, don't bother to explain anything, just write, your stories are highlights of my day



01/03/2006 , 21:30:41 PM
From: Christy
Comments: I think we all need some TLC like that from time to time.



01/03/2006 , 21:32:55 PM
From: missyang
Comments: Sweet and interesting. I believe Bette's good at rubbing feet too. =D



01/03/2006 , 21:47:45 PM
From: Marti
Comments: That was sweet! You just don't think you'll get sick taking care of the one you love, then the roles are reversed. LOL. Thanks for posting.



01/03/2006 , 21:54:50 PM
From: funnyone
Comments: Aw, shucks. You make it seem worthwhile to get sick.



01/03/2006 , 22:29:35 PM
From: dixirella
Comments: Awwwwwwwwww. Cuteness.



01/03/2006 , 22:36:37 PM
From: slacker
Comments: Ha! Very nice! Somehow, I think a sick Bette Porter would be way worse than any sick kid.



01/03/2006 , 22:38:02 PM
From: jjll
Comments: That is soooo sweet...



01/03/2006 , 23:35:16 PM
From: Brooke
Comments: Cute chapter. It reminded me of my father when he was sick and my mom had to take care of him, big baby.lol



01/04/2006 , 00:40:17 AM
From: Lamentamini
Comments: Everyone on the count of 3. 1...2...3...AWWWWWWWWWW! I turn into a big baby when I get sick so obviously I thought this was funny and cute.



01/04/2006 , 00:45:44 AM
From: tylo
Comments: sweet



01/04/2006 , 03:09:03 AM
From: hansen
Comments: Awwww I just loves your little snippets of B&T bliss - you write them so well....and this was so sweet, caring and loving. Thank you :o))



01/04/2006 , 03:32:12 AM
From: hss0310
Comments: JKS...I have been one of your silent readers for a while now. I still continue to read and enjoy everything you write. I wanted to let you know that. You have a true fan in Finland. Kiitos!



01/04/2006 , 09:27:06 AM
From: wo`wo
Comments: awwwwwwww...so sweet..love it!this is all i need to end a day off. thx swimmie..!juz write anything..i'll follow suit. :0)



01/04/2006 , 10:25:27 AM
From: Weavers fingers
Comments: Aww - nice



01/04/2006 , 10:53:10 AM
From: xxjoey6
Comments: Another wonderful chapter JKS please keep them coming



01/04/2006 , 12:37:52 PM
From: Dainty
Comments: AWWWWW, sweet and loving. Just what the doctor ordered. Thanks for the post. More, please.



01/04/2006 , 13:00:29 PM
From: Skipton
Comments: very cute. lemme guess...just gettin' over a cold?



01/04/2006 , 16:09:17 PM
From: brigbeach6
Comments: So did you get a foot rub when you were sick??? Hope you are feeling better, thanks for the story!



01/04/2006 , 16:38:35 PM
From: B
Comments: That was so cute and unfortunatly i can really relate to it ..lol thanks enjoyed it



01/04/2006 , 18:22:56 PM
From: Gumby
Comments: Loved it..reminds me of a wonderful time when I got sick....LOL



01/04/2006 , 19:01:44 PM
From: ut
Comments: They are so cute and sweet!



01/04/2006 , 21:23:42 PM
From: obzidian
Comments: Ahhhhhh!! Sooooo blissful! Thank you for this sweet loving snippet, JKS.



01/04/2006 , 21:36:50 PM
From: albeez
Comments: awwww. so freaking sweet. thanks. even sickness sounds good when you write it.



01/05/2006 , 09:58:33 AM
From: Steph8373
Comments: sorry I'm a bit late to the comment party. :( This was very sweet and wonderful and just what we needed only days again from the start of S3. I hope this wasn't inspired by any recent illness of your own, but that if it was, that you're feeling better!



01/06/2006 , 02:37:55 AM
From: Professional Widow
Comments: word to matzah ball soup! tried it at my pal's sader (sp?) for passover and it was awesome. anyway, good show! it's those little intimacies in your stories that fill the gap when the show gets too caught up in high drama.



01/06/2006 , 02:45:32 AM
From: Professional Widow
Comments: gah! forgot to ask what prompted the story, i'm sure it's not as boring as you think. besides, your loyal readers are positively dying to know!



01/10/2006 , 14:57:50 PM
From: greentea
Comments: Okay, all Bette needed was some Robitussin and Vicks she would have been as good as new. What’s the big deal? ;) Very touching chapter Swimmie. *cough, cough* Think I’m coming down with something…(smile).



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