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They were exactly what Tina use to make for her; brownies with raspberry filling and dark chocolate chunks and powdered sugar on top. Bette looked up at the young man smiling "I'll have a B-bar" "these are my favorite too" said Sammy handing Bette the yummy treat. One bite told Bette everything. "Kit, we need talk.." "Baby girl isn't this the sweetest little store" Tina heard voices and wanted to go greet her customers.

Tina loved Sunday afternoon's in the store all the out of town people with news and gossip from outside the Hollow. Tina put on her apron and swung through the door. "Rachel" As she turned to the center aisle and middle of the store a woman at the bakery counter turned and life as Tina knew it changed forever..

tbc..




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11/19/2005 , 01:36:30 AM
From: Nanc
Comments: Nice start, Chaka!



11/19/2005 , 02:13:28 AM
From: azmama
Comments: Keep it up. Great start. Can't wait to hear their words to each other. Alice and Kit are pretty devious. I like that in them. lol



11/19/2005 , 02:13:58 AM
From: lovelyangel
Comments: Like this so far. Looking forward to the next chapter.



11/19/2005 , 02:20:14 AM
From: 2005fanforever
Comments: Really nice start! Looking forward to the rest of your story.



11/19/2005 , 02:53:27 AM
From: curious
Comments: chaka continue soon!



11/19/2005 , 03:33:03 AM
From: Lauren25
Comments: Great start, please continue



11/19/2005 , 03:33:54 AM
From: allyemmerson
Comments: hey this is really good - you are doing great for your first attempt. please post chapter two



11/19/2005 , 04:07:19 AM
From: KAREN GLOVER
Comments: Keep it coming.



11/19/2005 , 04:40:50 AM
From: tylo
Comments: you left me hanging!!!!!!!!!!!! nice start! post like now make them longer!!!!!!!!!!



11/19/2005 , 09:17:46 AM
From: sutj
Comments: fantastic start...pls continue!



11/19/2005 , 09:26:08 AM
From: momo
Comments: Whoa! another Beautiful Story nice start great Chaka I Love it Please continue post soon Thanks!!!



11/19/2005 , 11:04:22 AM
From: fergz1
Comments: Chaka..thank you for giving us another great story. I am hoping you get to post before next friday.



11/19/2005 , 11:39:09 AM
From: BetteAndTinaForever
Comments: i can never take B&T separated, please get them back together



11/19/2005 , 11:46:14 AM
From: xhawg52
Comments: Great start, but you are soooo wrong for ending it there. Hope we hear from you soon.



11/19/2005 , 12:44:51 PM
From: ladichi
Comments: Alice and Kit...don't you just love them? Nice start! Please continue!!



11/19/2005 , 13:02:03 PM
From: Van
Comments: ChakaSB U are certainly off to an excellent start!!!! I was so excited I started clapping.....now I gotta wait till a week b4 another post....maybe u'll surprise us all and make a post sooner and also on the dat u promised????!!!!! HUH????? HUH?????



11/19/2005 , 15:30:23 PM
From: bandtfan
Comments: this is good! can't wait until friday.



11/19/2005 , 20:15:49 PM
From: colgan
Comments: Amazing start. Totally involved now so please continue on.



11/19/2005 , 20:24:05 PM
From: Chasemenow
Comments: Hey, this is a great start. Fate always has a way of intervening, doesn't it. Oh, can I get a B-bar too?



11/19/2005 , 20:40:04 PM
From: pam336
Comments: Hey...nice beginning. Looking forward to your next update. Oh, I'll take a B bar, as well. They sound great.



11/19/2005 , 22:17:18 PM
From: mc
Comments: Great beginning - a whole new twist with the 4 years apart - looking forward to where you take this.



11/19/2005 , 22:27:13 PM
From: albeez
Comments: great start. lets see where you take us. please put breaks between sentences. its hard to read in one long paragraph. other than that great. thanks.



11/19/2005 , 23:03:10 PM
From: Brooke
Comments: Great start! will be looking for your post every friday. Thanks a bunch.



11/20/2005 , 02:22:26 AM
From: ut
Comments: This is awesome start and interesting and please post soon, thanks!



11/20/2005 , 13:44:20 PM
From: hansen
Comments: Hey Chaka - what a wonderfull and promising beginning. I love the way you write and I'm already addicted to this story, so please keep going.This is maybe a silly question...but is this a happe B&T story - my heart cant take a no... :o))



11/20/2005 , 13:45:59 PM
From: hansen
Comments: I meant HAPPY and not happe...sorry :o))



11/20/2005 , 22:47:08 PM
From: artgirl
Comments: Wow, great start! I don't know if I can wait till next Friday for another update. Please hurry.



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