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6/2/2004 ,
5:19:57 PM
From:
Bettina05
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Your stories always leave me feeling one way...speechless...I have nothing else to say but bring on another great story.

6/2/2004 ,
5:39:55 PM
From:
Nan
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I am one of you big fans.Your writing is always beautiful. TLW should hire you as their writer.

6/2/2004 ,
5:40:34 PM
From:
aaTnB
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wow that was a very powerful story...excellent writing...great job

6/2/2004 ,
5:45:37 PM
From:
allykat
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Thank you so much, Olives.Another excellent chapter.

6/2/2004 ,
6:35:10 PM
From:
ankus
Comments:
really...really...absolutly beautiful and strong

6/2/2004 ,
6:48:57 PM
From:
MyBody
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Ahhhh! they finally have some physical contact. How big was the bed by the way. hehehe More please.....

6/2/2004 ,
7:15:41 PM
From:
bvhall
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The bed are not big Tina is in a bag way, it so hard to be in love,and also have so many doubts, things will get better in time, Thanks

6/2/2004 ,
7:52:16 PM
From:
techgal
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Nuanced. Conflicted. Lovely.

6/2/2004 ,
10:22:51 PM
From:
wildtouch
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I agree with aaTnB...that was absolutely powerful...you're the best yet...keep going...can't wait..

6/2/2004 ,
10:47:33 PM
From:
Tori
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I love it, as always!

6/2/2004 ,
11:18:46 PM
From:
pesky
Comments:
this is so beautiful!

6/3/2004 ,
1:23:50 AM
From:
phantomframe
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Another great chapter to a very beautifully written story!

6/3/2004 ,
10:18:11 AM
From:
MadWoman
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The MadWoman STRIKES again, only to comment on this LOVELY piece of material. Absolutely FAB-U-LOUS-O! Luv, it was...Shaken, not Stirred. Quite "fly". I was starting to get "emotional" over here.

6/4/2004 ,
5:38:46 PM
From:
tinawho?
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What angst and heart ache...you write so well...please continue, you are great!

6/5/2004 ,
12:50:57 PM
From:
luv4all
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I love the chase! Quite honestly I'm getting tired of all the sex Bette & Tina are having(maybe just jealous). I much prefer some excitement and drama leading up to the climax. Great story as usual!

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