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Tina got back in the car and began dialing Alice. No, she hung up. This is between Bette and me.


 



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09/13/2005 , 08:47:21 AM
From: Ira
Comments: Interesting story, I'm eagerly awaiting your next post!



09/13/2005 , 09:24:33 AM
From: firefly7
Comments: very nice beginning. well written. Letting go but never really. I love it. keep it coming.



09/13/2005 , 09:25:26 AM
From: moonshadow
Comments: I love it so far! I love how you're able to paint a picture in mentioning small details, like the plants...I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm wondering if Tina is with someone (please not Helena!) or if she, like Bette, isn't able to commit to anyone else...hmmm...it will be fun to see where you go with this. Thanks!



09/13/2005 , 09:56:11 AM
From: Satchmo
Comments: Thank you for writing a piece about the processing of pain in a relationship - it's more true to life. You write well and the piece is evocative and sensitive to the characters. Cheers



09/13/2005 , 10:04:42 AM
From: Chasemenow
Comments: Well written and a good depiction of the characters and what they are feeling. I sure hope Tina is only "with" her daughter.



09/13/2005 , 11:18:08 AM
From: albeez
Comments: wow - loving it. cant wait to see if her daughter is a product of marcus allenwood. or whoever. on to the next



09/13/2005 , 11:28:45 AM
From: Bette&TinaForever
Comments: wow, does bette kows about her daughter? it's getting exciting, they need to talk



09/13/2005 , 11:34:47 AM
From: momo
Comments: I see you posted again and I'm just catching up I Love it Thanks!!!



09/13/2005 , 15:40:35 PM
From: bettyvhall
Comments: She could feel something is different, so she and the little girl goes to the house. A potted plant on the step. How will Bette react to Tina and a little girl. thanks



09/13/2005 , 18:23:05 PM
From: fergz1
Comments: Ok..you realize we will want a chapter per day. Great story and I will be watching for the next post



09/13/2005 , 23:59:51 PM
From: ssw
Comments: i like it, i really like it! (you are sneaky!)



09/18/2005 , 02:28:26 AM
From: ut
Comments: This is good and let see what's next.



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