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The Journey 1 by unbeknown
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It is late but it's LA, there are lots of lights. It is good to be home in LA but I cannot help but wonder what my home will look and feel like. We reach our house, after what seems an eternity. I look out the window, it is dark, I can't see clearly. I hesitate just a second too long.
Kit : "Bette, honey you don't have to do this tonight, are you really sure ?" She puts the car in gear. "Lets do it tomorrow when you've had some sleep".
Bette : I reach out and put my arm on hers to stop her. "I am really sure. Let's do it now." I open the door, get out the car and step on the grass. I think to myself "breathe, just breathe." I mutter to myself "welcome home Bette."
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09/13/2005 ,
04:23:54 AM
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Bette&TinaForever
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another interesting beginning, let's see where it will lead us...thanks

09/13/2005 ,
11:12:52 AM
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albeez
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hmmm. interesting. on to the next one.

09/13/2005 ,
11:24:32 AM
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momo
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Whoa! Another Story you got here Hey I Love it PLease continue post soon thanks.

09/13/2005 ,
15:32:57 PM
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bettyvhall
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After 18 months This would be hard for Bette. thanks

09/13/2005 ,
18:18:26 PM
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fergz1
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I am going to the next chapter but I must say I love it all ready

09/13/2005 ,
21:11:55 PM
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ssw
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well, well, well.........what do we have here? i'm liking it, A LOT!

09/18/2005 ,
02:12:37 AM
From:
ut
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This is interesting story and let see what's next, thanks!

09/21/2005 ,
23:33:39 PM
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al
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Ok I can't read right now and it's killing me.unbeknown, I'm so glad you're back!

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