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Title: A Walk on the Wild Side - Chapter 22
Author: tbsaver  [ Send a Private Message ]    [ View Author Bio ]
Copyright: btsaver@gmail.com
Content Rating: PG
Disclaimer: You know the score
Author's Note: You know I promised myself I would limit my time til 1am this morning and then off with the computer....well I failed again, but really wanted to post this as I will not be able to update until towards the end of the week!!!!!

As it's so late (or early!) I haven't given it the usual proof read so please accept my apologies for any errors!

Thanks to all who take the time to read, and especially those who comment.....

Van - Yes saying goodbye is hard...sometimes LOL What do you mean Cliff hangers?....Now if I was cruel I would have omitted the last line of this chapter.....you should be thanking me for being so nice to you!!! LOL

OCD - Hey good to see you back. You watch those body parts you hear!!!!!

Bette&TinaForever - Tina's intentions were good and she wanted those last moments to be the right ones...I hope so too!

Leo Paradise - Thanks glad you enjoyed

truBlue - It's easy to forget that Bette has not displayed many of her A personality traits over the last week...That doesn't mean they are not there lurking under the surface LOL

albeez - Me Softie????? Who told you that?! LOL and yes it's great to post more than once a day, but where's the suspense in that???

ut - Well, she's trying to. It's whether the author will let her! LOL

angelak -Why ms angelak - yet again so formal! LOL Yup...just when you thought you were seeing a "new" Bette...and for how she's feeling, well you'll have to wait for ch 23 to know that....I know....cruel or what?

ut - Thanks...well it's not for the lack of trying

cabqbw - What?! No lessons from flair I'm afraid......Although I might just have to give that some more thought!!! LOL I hope this will answer your question...Maybe!

bettyvhall - Well you'll just have to wait and see....have faith

fergz1 - Sorry your heart is feeling the stress....Well she's trying to make it!!!!

mstx - thanks, I hope so too....but hey maybe that will depend on my mood when I write the next chapter LOL

lsbn - Very good point. I hope this chapter answers your question. Sometimes we make wrong decision, with the very best of intentions. thanks I thought the pillowcase was cute too *sigh*

CROO - I hope this and the next chapter will answer your diva statement.......Is Tina spineless, or does she realise she made a mistake? Yes there are now 2 Land Rovers in the story...I just hope they don't breed or we'll end up with loads of Alice Minis roaming around scaring the wildlife!!!!

hope4tb - Yes you remember correctly....last time I promised a date for posting I disappeared for a month LOL....Which is the reason I won't be making that mistake again!!! thanks





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Tina's hand flew to her mouth to stifle her cry. "Bette" she whispered. "Baby I can't let us leave things like this. I love you baby."


She quickly put the hair clip into her breast pocket, and pausing only to grab her car keys flew out of the door, and toward her Car.


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Chapter 22

The tyres crunched on the firm ground within the compound as the vehicle sprung forward. Tina held onto the wheel tightly as she navigated her way out of the small outcrop of buildings before heading into the wide expanse of space separating her from her love.


Tina's heart was beating fast in her chest, her stomach tied up in knots. Shit, she thought. How did that go so wrong. She raised her hand to wipe the tears from her eyes, the landscape in front of her a blur.


She thought back to last night. How perfect everything had been.


They had started their evening, sat round the camp fire, Tina watching the excited look on Bette's face as they had recounted stories of their last day out in the wilderness Together. "Did today really happen T?" Bette had asked, a look of quiet reverence on her face.


They had stopped at a small village in the morning to purchase essential supplies for their last meal together, Tina commenting that it was a shame they didn't have oranges, as the local elephants seemed to like them so much. At Bette's look of disappointment, Tina had picked up a ruby red grapefruit in the hope that it would hold the same attraction for them.


As they approached the slowly flowing river, Tina had pointed out the two females in the distance, ambling slowly along, a young elephant in tow. Tina had stopped the vehicle, and making sure they were safe from any other wildlife that may be lurking, gave Bette the grapefruit, and motioned for her to leave the vehicle. Bette had slowly and cautiously walked around to the front of the Land Rover, as Tina sat, camera in hand, hoping she would not be disappointed.


The baby elephant had looked across towards the women, aware of their presence but seeming to be unfazed by it, more interested in wrapping his trunk around the short tufts of grass in front of him. Bette had watched intrigued that the elephant seemed to display impatience at his inability to grab his meal, each time he curled and lifted his trunk, leaving the grass stubbornly swaying in the breeze in defiance.


Bette had laughed out loud at the spectacle, once again attracting the frustrated and hungry youngster's interest. Bette had slowly reached out her hands and held the grapefruit in front of her silently praying that it was a suitable alternative to oranges.


Slowly the baby elephant lifted his head from the grasses and began walking along the river. He did not stop to graze nor did he look around, but walked with clear determination and intention, towards the awaiting brunette. As he had neared her, he paused, and had raised his trunk fully above his head and had curled it over then under into an almost impossible knot.


The baby elephant had lowered it's head then, and had carefully unfurled it's trunk, before flapping his ears excitedly, and had run over to the waiting brunette, his ungainly gait reminding her of a child taking it's first uncertain steps.


The baby elephant had stopped, no more than a trunks distance away from her, and stared her in the eye. Bette had been mesmerised, afraid to move a muscle in case she scared him away.

They stayed that way for minutes neither moving, a feeling of peace washing over Bette as she had  looked into the large jet black eyes protected by long curly eyelashes, any woman would be proud of. Then slowly but surely the elephants curiosity got the better of him. He reached out gently with his trunk raising it towards Bette's face. She had been shocked at the rush of air she felt as he sniffed her face, the tiny hairs on the tip of his trunk tickling her as he grazed her skin softly. Without warning she had sneezed then, the tickling sensation becoming to much for her sensitive nose.

With a snort he had withdrawn his trunk sharply, a startled expression on his face. It took a few more minutes before he had been brave enough to once again explore the beauty before him, raising his trunk to touch her face, like a blind man feeling his way.


He had finally stepped forward, as his trunk found its way to the treat awaiting him held loosely in Bette's hand. Bette had kept hr arms raised, turning her palms upwards, offering him her special treat. He had wrapped his trunk around the fruit, bringing it eagerly to his small mouth, pushing it in forcefully like a child eating a piece of chocolate cake with his fingers.


The grapefruit burst on contact with his small but powerful teeth, spurting it's juice onto Bette. She had watched as he had moved his jaws together chewing quickly before swallowing his unusual delicacy.


He had continued to stand, watching Bette intently, before lowering his trunk to the grass around them, and had gently grabbed at a small acacia shoot no more than 6" tall, and  lifted it gently from the ground, shaking the dirt from it's root, before laying it gently in Bette's still upturned hands.


Suddenly the spell they had found themselves in was broken, as in the distance his mother could be heard calling him, her trunk raised high in the air. The baby elephant had trumpeted his call back to his mother, and taking one last long look at Bette, the baby elephant turned and walked leisurely towards his patiently waiting mother.


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Tina was roused from her daydream of last night, as she reached the river crossing, the same river they had crossed just yesterday in their search for Africa's most graceful giants, and reluctantly slowed her progress as she carefully avoided the jagged rocks jutting out from the flowing fresh water. As she reached the other side of the river, she put her foot once more fully down on the accelerator, travelling much faster than was safe, but not fast enough to catch a glimpse of Vual ahead of her.



 


Tina had been agonising over Bette's departure for the previous 2 days. She hated goodbye's at the best of times, but this was different.

The thought of that last embrace, before she had to stand and watch Bette walk through the departure gate had torn her apart. The more she played the scene over and over in her head the more she knew she couldn't do it without breaking down completely. She had therefore made the decision that they would part at the studio, where they could say their goodbyes in private, and she could watch Bette leave without the irrational need to fly through airport security after her, and beg her to stay.


Why hadn't she just told her she thought.  She sighed as she remembered the look of joy on Bette's face as she had returned to the Land Rover, tripping over her words in her excitement,. Right then she knew she couldn't replace that look with one of sadness. So had delayed telling Bette her decision.


She wanted them to part with only the memory of their perfect day and night together. She had made all the plans, she had contacted Vual, and given him instructions for the preparation of the studio for their last night together, and had asked him to take Bette to the airport the following morning. Everything had been thoroughly prepared, except one thing.


In fact the one thing that should have been the highest on her list. She had become lost in the moment, not wanting to break the mood between them, and so she had waited, until she had woken that morning, palms sweaty with fear. She didn't know what to say, or how to say it. If only she had been honest from the start she thought sadly.


Tina was so immersed in her thoughts and self recriminations that she failed to notice the increasingly bumpy ride, as the Sturdy Land Rover was being thrown around by the uneven terrain she was travelling. Suddenly she felt a bang, and gripped the wheel tightly as it threatened to be pulled from her grasp, as it attempted to swing right, unable to keep balance with the now completely flat tyre pulling her to the left.


She slammed on the brakes, and jumped from the vehicle, cursing loudly at her misfortune. Oh god, she cried feeling as deflated as the tyre. Please don't let me down now..Not when I need you the most.


She turned and leaned her back against the side of the Land Rover, slowly sliding down toward the floor, sobs escaping from her lips. She sat, head in hands, trying to calculate how far behind Bette this would leave her.


She looked up wearily, knowing that she had to change the wheel in record time to stand any chance of saying goodbye to her love.


As she stood and turned, she failed to notice the trail of dust in the distance heading her way.



 




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08/16/2005 , 21:57:13 PM
From: truBlue
Comments: Oh no, a stampede? May it be the one and only beautiful Bette Porter!!!



08/16/2005 , 22:08:30 PM
From: fergz1
Comments: Bette is coming back to her Tina! What a beautiful chapter that was tb. I felt like I was there with that baby elephant. I hope you get to post soon..love your story.



08/16/2005 , 22:17:09 PM
From: albeez
Comments: really did that happen to you, with the elephant. or was it just your wonderful imagination. hope its bette to the rescue. well whatever your doing it best be fun to leave us hanging like this. does it just stroke the ego to know well all be here waiting for you to get back. lol. thanks this was wonderful.



08/16/2005 , 22:22:16 PM
From: dixirella
Comments: Just caught up with the story, and I love it! But these cliffhangers are killing me! Oh well, something to look forward to, right?
Thanks for the story...



08/16/2005 , 23:48:34 PM
From: hope4tb
Comments: Regarding promises this author made regarding posting… now we know where to find you .. so you can’t hid for toooooo long or we send out the blood hounds LOL

I know this is going to sound sappy as all get out but each chapter is more amazing than the last … I think I never could go to Africa now I don’t think it would live up to the details you have shared with us ….hopefully the end of this week means Thursday at the latest….maybe???

Are you as good as Tina in regards to changing flat tires? (inquiring minds need to know!!!)

THANK YOU




08/17/2005 , 00:36:29 AM
From: Lsbn
Comments: You have such a gift for describing human and animal interaction. The baby elephant is a perfect example. I could almost feel my own hairs standing on end.

Hopefully, the dust is Bette coming back to say good-bye to Tina and apologize. If they meet halfway, then they know they will be able to get through everything else until they see each other again.



08/17/2005 , 01:07:11 AM
From: Bette&TinaForever
Comments: that was really cute with the elephant...and i hope it's bette coming and she'll see tina...i hope it's nothing dramatic, they need to meet before bette leaves so they can leave happy



08/17/2005 , 02:24:03 AM
From: nzgrl
Comments: What a treat for Bette with the elephant, that was cute. I hope Tina got good photos of it and paints potrait of it.



08/17/2005 , 02:36:29 AM
From: angelak
Comments: you are making me so want to go to Africa!



08/17/2005 , 03:15:50 AM
From: CR00
Comments: Watch out tina the herd of rhino's are coming at you with your spine LOL
Oh you know what? have you ever seen harold and kumar go to white castle?? if so I was having a flashback to the cheetha part. LMAO



08/17/2005 , 06:33:01 AM
From: cabqbw
Comments: Meeting each other half way? I hope so. Post again soon.



08/17/2005 , 14:11:38 PM
From: bettyvhall
Comments: The baby elephant gave Bette a gift back. this was so beautifulThe dust in the distance is one beautiful Bette Porter to clain her gift from one Tina Kennard Love. Thanks



08/17/2005 , 17:47:56 PM
From: mstx
Comments: K
Wonderful chapter as always. I hope all will be fine and she gets there in time. LOVE it.



08/17/2005 , 17:52:26 PM
From: tylo
Comments: your killing me here!!!!!!!! I like that this are a little bumpy just like life!!!!!!!!!



08/17/2005 , 19:54:09 PM
From: Leo Paradise
Comments: Nice chapter. Her knight in shining armour to come to her rescue!!



08/17/2005 , 22:46:47 PM
From: ut
Comments: Good chapter, you can't leave us like this post soon please, I want to know is that Bette come back to Tina. Oh what a beautiful about Bette and the baby elephant. Post soon, thanks!



08/18/2005 , 00:26:44 AM
From: shades
Comments: OMG! Please let it be Bette. We can't have Tina getting run over in a stampede. That would be way too much drama for my Tibette heart. Beautiful chapter!



08/18/2005 , 06:55:09 AM
From: M99
Comments: TB what a way to leave us hanging, have now caught up with your story....now i think you are going to have a human stampede of T&B Fans on your hands if anything happens to Tina....LOL...

I hope it is another vehicle approaching that will help Tina out.

Awesome story just want to let you know, love it.
Thank you.




08/22/2005 , 02:53:53 AM
From: TiBetteShipper
Comments: This excitement is killing me, tbsaver!! I'm soo glad that I don't have to wait to find out what happens! I completely loved the story with Bette and the baby elephant. Beautiful.



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