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You arent alone, you have me, Bettes voice was warm and reassuring. Will you trust me to take you someplace safe where you are welcome to stay as long as you want?



Tina looked into Bettes eyes and believed. She believed she would take her someplace safe. She believed she would take her someplace she would be welcome. She believed that she would not be alone through any of this.


Tina just nodded. Bette leaned her forehead into Tinas Yea..thats my girl. She said softly and with great tenderness.


Tina leaned into Bette as they both carefully and with care moved Marceys head from Tinas arms to the blood-stained carpet. As they both removed their hands, and Marceys body lay there alone and untouched for the first time, Tina burst into sobs that wracked her entire body. Without thinking, she wrapped her arms around Bettes neck, closed her eyes tightly and cried.


She cried for Marcey. She cried for herself. And she cried for all the lives that would forever be changed by the tragic loss of Marcey Fleming.


The Patrol Officers and Paramedics looked on in stunned silence as they watched Bette Porter reach inside this womans soul and give her reason to go on.


They had all heard the stories about Detective Bette Porter and how she used her intelligence, creativity, attention to detail, and tenacity to break her cases. What the rumors didnt describe was just how much Bette Porter cared.


After the sobs had quieted, they watched as Bette provided all the strength to the young women to help her to her feet. She placed her arm around Tina, letting her hand cross her back and securely holding her hand around Tinas waist. To provide additional support, Bette tenderly took Tinas free hand in her own. When it seemed that Tina could walk, they took a few steps toward the door.


Bettes eyes met Jules Thompsons. Loud enough so that Tina could hear, Bette said Jules, will you please take care of Marcey personally. I, we, need to know that she is in good hands. Jules nodded, knowing that nothing else needed to be said.


Tina was leaning heavily into Bette, fearing that she might pass out. As they reached the door, Tina took one more look back at the blood spattered apartment and her lifeless friend. She shuttered and her knees began to buckle.


Bette gathered her more tightly and whispered Its all right. Ive got you, Tina. Ive got you.


Bette almost had to carry the grief-stricken Tina the last few feet to her car. As she pulled the seatbelt into place, Tina groggily said A BMW? I though police detectives were underpaid and overworked.


Bette just smiled. As she settled into the drivers seat she noticed that Tina was almost asleep, the bodys self protection finally pulling her in and protecting her from what she could no longer handle.


"Are we going to the police station? Tina asked quietly as she fought the losing battle to keep her eyes open.


Bette looked straight forward for a moment, then at Tina as she had made a decision. No. I promised you a safe place where you could stay as long as you want, she said quietly.


Tina leaned her head back and asked If its not the police station whose place are we going to?


Bette dropped her head and looked at Tina. Mine, she said simply as she pulled away from the curb.


Tina sighed and a small smile touched the corners of her mouth as she finally gave in to sleep that gave her a small reprieve from her grief and pain.




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07/16/2005 , 21:10:46 PM
From: Polarice
Comments: great update!! very sad!



07/16/2005 , 21:21:24 PM
From: CR00
Comments: sox your doing a great job, so when can I have the next chapter??
Gotta tell you how hot I think BP is as a cop.



07/16/2005 , 21:27:40 PM
From: Chasemenow
Comments: Wow. Those were 2 great chapters with a very original story. The formatting problem: if you are posting from an Apple computer you won't see the editing tools available to Windows based PC's and there is nothing you can do.



07/16/2005 , 21:35:52 PM
From: piscisptv
Comments: Wow!!!!
Sad but great, i like



07/16/2005 , 21:46:37 PM
From: legatoeff
Comments: Good, very good.



07/16/2005 , 21:47:25 PM
From: AvidReader
Comments: Hey Sox, like your story.



07/16/2005 , 21:55:20 PM
From: marsupial
Comments: 2 WONDERFUL CHAPTER...I SOOOOOOO LOVE BERRE BEING A COP...PLEASE KEEP UP THE GREAT STORY AND POST REAL SOOOON.....



07/16/2005 , 22:00:49 PM
From: truthisx
Comments: Sox, you know I have read so many stories, all of them I feel; yet this story, after so many, is the one which has enticed my first comment. I felt inclined to write due to the great imagination, attention to detail and fine writing woven into your story. I love tina/bette stories I must admit and yours, is tops, a truly great piece. Thank you for your effort...



07/16/2005 , 22:01:09 PM
From: Bette&TinaForever
Comments: very intruiging story, can't wait for more



07/16/2005 , 22:06:05 PM
From: shutterbug
Comments: Wow . what an original story. How traumatic but in a bizarre way so reassuring. Can't wait for the next chapter!



07/16/2005 , 22:58:04 PM
From: Seahurst
Comments: Oh my God, I am totally and completely hooked already!! Fabulous job!!



07/16/2005 , 23:07:55 PM
From: mrave
Comments: Cool. I like this storyline. Great job.



07/16/2005 , 23:10:10 PM
From: Brooke
Comments: Just read both chapters and i am realy liking it.



07/16/2005 , 23:41:00 PM
From: Nanc
Comments: Very intriguing way to begin a B&T, Sox1.



07/17/2005 , 00:53:09 AM
From: wo`wo
Comments: way cool..~!! like it.. but erm..maybe some space in between the lines? post soon! lovin it!



07/17/2005 , 01:14:34 AM
From: mmarchione
Comments: Wow, what a story. Please continue.



07/17/2005 , 01:43:35 AM
From: albeez
Comments: sox - just today on the treadmill with b&tf we were talking about having something like this for b/t. but our thought was somekind of sherlock and dr. watson. but this was great. very original. looking forward to this. post soon.



07/17/2005 , 02:06:41 AM
From: niknax71
Comments: i'm liking this,can't wait for next chapter



07/17/2005 , 02:22:33 AM
From: shifty
Comments: Ahh.....*rubbing my hands together*. What a great start, I know I am going to love your writing style. This story is going to be soooo good. Please post soon!!!!



07/17/2005 , 02:25:16 AM
From: sylcat42
Comments: I love your story and it'll be very hard to wait the next chapter. Thank you



07/17/2005 , 02:52:30 AM
From: nzgrl
Comments: Great start. Thanks for the 2 chapters.



07/17/2005 , 02:57:54 AM
From: honda90
Comments: Got me hook line and sinker!!!! PLS don't stop....



07/17/2005 , 04:59:50 AM
From: incendiary
Comments: Hey Sox1!
Im not usually a b&t fic fan, but this has definetly got me interested, cant wait for the rest!



07/17/2005 , 07:08:25 AM
From: Therese_Belivet
Comments: What a joy to add an other story in my own little list of favorite ones !
You know, you have style. Really. Bringing our famous two in an already engaging and highly dramatic story with an obvious great sense of details and psychology, as well as a true sensitivity - something for which I always have a particular weakness for.
So thank you a lot for this new and very original story ! Cannot wait your next chapters...



07/17/2005 , 08:10:18 AM
From: cabqbw
Comments: THIS IS GREAT. PLEASE POST AGAIN SOON.



07/17/2005 , 08:29:26 AM
From: thepinkravenblue
Comments: I'm really liking this!please do continue.



07/17/2005 , 08:40:31 AM
From: chilli491
Comments: great story, i really really like this. please post again soon.



07/17/2005 , 09:05:03 AM
From: M99
Comments: I like this, very nice start.
Thank you.




07/17/2005 , 09:14:31 AM
From: Weavers fingers
Comments: Wow. Great writing I love it. Looking forward to more. By the way Bette as cop - the potential!



07/17/2005 , 11:01:47 AM
From: mc
Comments: Sox - Awesome beginning! Your writing is so powerful with all the detail and description. Incredibly emotional way for these two to start out. Thanks for joining the fanfic world with your gifts.



07/17/2005 , 11:20:03 AM
From: t-boz
Comments: Great story. You're doing great! Keep the chapters coming.



07/17/2005 , 12:15:21 PM
From: momo
Comments: Hey Sox this is getting Interesting WHOA! Thanks for posted again I'LL Love it Please continue.



07/17/2005 , 12:44:27 PM
From: katiejj
Comments: One of the best stories i've read so far please keep it up!!!




07/17/2005 , 13:02:09 PM
From: robbeedee
Comments: Sox,
Brilliant beginning! Marvelous and magnificent mystery!
Am so glad that you have decided to dip your toes in the fantastic world of fan ficition.
You have created a unique and perplexing story. This writing is breathtaking as you have taken an over-used genre and breathed life into it.
You have managed to transfer the horror of the scene without being unnecessarily full of blood and gore. This connection between Bette and Tina is intact and so palpable in your prose.
I, too, an fascinated and captivated by your tale.
Please post more real soon,
A fan.




07/17/2005 , 15:28:22 PM
From: seven
Comments: I like, especially since it takes place in Seattle. Hmm, Jules Thompson...any relation to JJ?



07/17/2005 , 20:49:39 PM
From: Atg11
Comments: hey great up date ....this is a very interesting story ...please keep them comin....



07/18/2005 , 12:55:14 PM
From: tylo
Comments: This is great post soon



07/27/2005 , 01:17:02 AM
From: ChakaSB
Comments: I'm hooked.. very creative, well written. Looking forward to the rest of the chapters.



08/05/2005 , 01:24:32 AM
From: giasony
Comments: wow simply wow... Like everyone else this story line between B&T is outstanding and so imaginative. Your writing rocks and is so full of emotion. Simply wow...



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