07/04/2005 ,
06:40:22 AM From:
Avanda Comments:
Hmmmmm very interesting turn of events here, Bette a professional golfer and T and photographer, hmmmmm, so far so good, looking for more!
07/04/2005 ,
06:57:45 AM From:
momo Comments:
Hey Lauren Whoa! Another Great Story that I need to catching up anyway I love it but don't forget the In sickness and in love I still love that Story Thanks for this Awesome Writing Story I'm still reading it and I can't wait for next chapter Please post soon HAVE A GREAT 4TH JULY.
07/04/2005 ,
07:00:13 AM From:
cpq Comments:
Oh come on, don't leave me hanging like that. This is a very interesting twist or take on the gang. Please post again SOON, this has the makings of a great story.
07/04/2005 ,
07:15:25 AM From:
Newcomer1 Comments:
Very nice I'm liking where this is going! Post soon
07/04/2005 ,
07:57:57 AM From:
btownjuli Comments:
Give me more...I love B/T beginnings!!!
07/04/2005 ,
08:03:43 AM From:
Therese_Belivet Comments:
Ah, very interesting start indeed ! And what an excellent idea to link the gang (... and Tina, of course !) with Bette through Dana's character and sport. From now I'm waiting the next chapters ! ... and I fully agree with Momo : please don't forget your other wonderful story. I love it. Thanks a lot for your great works, Lauren ! You're truly gifted.
07/04/2005 ,
08:30:11 AM From:
Keno Comments:
i love it... and i love the way you have dana and bette friends... and the rest as friends... so yes please continue
07/04/2005 ,
09:24:22 AM From:
sophie88 Comments:
You just made my fav list;) I really like it. Can totally picture Bette in golf wear! Post soon!!! Thanks
07/04/2005 ,
09:36:40 AM From:
hansen Comments:
Very interesting beginning - you got me already... :o))
07/04/2005 ,
10:02:58 AM From:
marsupial Comments:
WONDERFUL START, I LOVE THE MIX OF FRIENDS..PLEASE DON'T LEAVE US DANGLING TO LONG ON ANY OF YOUR STORIES I AM INTO BOTH STORIES..YOUR WRITING IS WONDERFUL THANKS YOU....
07/04/2005 ,
10:30:07 AM From:
kasbre Comments:
Wonderful start Lauren. This is a good twist. Keep it coming.
07/04/2005 ,
11:45:13 AM From:
psyche Comments:
Come on now, please do not leave us hanging.....I can't wait to read your updates! Interesting indeed, Porter is a golfer? Tina a photographer? Hmm...hmm....looks like a match made in heaven.
07/04/2005 ,
12:23:31 PM From:
Marti Comments:
I really like your story. The twists - Tina a photographer and Bette a pro golfer...very interesting indeed. Can't wait for your next chapters..thanks for writing.
07/04/2005 ,
12:50:15 PM From:
CR00 Comments:
I really like how you tied everyone together like that. And the thing I like about this story is golf I have just started playing,I find it fun and relaxing and the golf carts kick ass. Can't wait for the next post.
07/04/2005 ,
12:51:57 PM From:
sasha Comments:
Yeah! that was great!! I would never of thought of making Bette being a pro golfer! Thats so cool!! Will she ever get a hole in one?
07/04/2005 ,
13:11:57 PM From:
special_ed1845 Comments:
Congratulations , you've made my fav aouthors list. Please post soon.
07/04/2005 ,
13:44:22 PM From:
cogent53 Comments:
Interesting alternate universe story, I like the start and would love to see what you do with it next. Do keep writing.
07/04/2005 ,
20:55:39 PM From:
ut Comments:
Wow this is good and I like it. Bette play golf is awesome, Tina is a photographer so cool, like it. Please post soon, thanks!
07/05/2005 ,
08:58:42 AM From:
justkeepswimming Comments:
I'm sure you've received enough comments that you'll be continuing this story, but I thought I'd throw in one more...look forward to how it unfolds. Thanks!
