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Title: Foolish Moves 46
Author: unbeknown  [ Send a Private Message ]    [ View Author Bio ]
Copyright: June 2005
Content Rating: PG
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Author's Note: Al, I loved you comment :-)

Summary: THE END
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Chapter 46 - The end


 


Tina: Bette and I made love ferociously. Bette had always been a good lover, generous but this time she made love to me like there was no tomorrow. It was clear to me now that Bette stilled loved me, in fact that had been clear to me before I came here. What I needed to know when I came was whether we could still trust each other. I had no doubts now, I trusted Bette so completely. I know Bette well and despite her best attempts I can still tell when she is hiding something, and she is hiding something. It is like there is something she has not told me. It doesnt make sense, I dont really understand what it could be because Bette has been open and honest about her feelings about what had happened. I made my way out onto the deck, wearing only a light silk dressing gown that was undone, shall I say feeling very satisfied. The sun was setting. Bette said shed be out in a moment. I called for her


 


Tina : Bette, come on its beautiful, youll miss the last sunset youll see here for a bit


 


Bette : Be there in a sec Tee. I sat on the end of the bed thinking about how we had just made love and here I was with the most beautiful woman on a isolated yacht having a most romantic night, but one thing remained unanswered, did she want to be my wife ? I didnt know how much I could take. I decided to leave it until after the main course and if there was no sign of Tina returning my wedding ring, then I would raise the issue, lay my cards out, so to speak. Of course how I would do that I did not yet know, I mean if she didnt get the message by now, would she ever ? I tied up my black silk dressing gown and wandered out onto the deck.


 


Bette : It is beautiful, isnt it ? as I came up to Tinas side. She was leaning forward on the railing looking out to the open sea where the sun had begun to set. The sky was full of vibrant blue and pink.


 


Tina : This is all beautiful Bette. Thank you for making our last night here so special


 


Bette : Thank you for being here with me. Are you hungry enough yet for our main course ?


 


Tina : yes baby, I am


 


Tina stayed looking out, the sun had set. It was everything I had hoped, Tee seemed thrilled. The stars were clear and bright, the moon almost full, reflecting off the water. When I returned Tee had lit the candles and sat waiting at the table. Her gown was open and her elbows resting on the table, hands under her chin. There was the gentlest of gentle breezes. I placed the meal on the table, Tee had poured the wine.


 


Bette : Steak and lobster, hope thats OK. Lobster with smallest amount of thai chilli sauce and steak the way that Tee liked it. Crispy half baby potatoes and an unpretentious green salad.


 


Tee : Bette, I dont know what to say, its, its, Im speechless


 


Bette : Tee, there are things I need to say to you, I, I need to tell you, umm after our main course


 


Tina : Bette, is everything OK, I thought things were going marvelously ?


 


Bette : Tonight yes, Tee, its perfect, you are perfect


 


Tina : Bette, I am not sure I understand what you are trying to say. Tina looked confused, she leant forward. Bette, there is something I need to say to you too


 


Bette : Oh caught off guard. Gathering herself  Perhaps you should go first


 


Tina : How about this, we eat, then we talk, then we have sex again, before dessert ? Raising one eyebrow rather mischievously.


 


Tina and ate our diner, slowly taking in all of each other and all of the fabulous food and surroundings. She let her flap ever so slightly in the breeze and I could see her full breast and her belly, with our child in. Concentrating on dinner was no easy feat ! But the time had come, I wanted to know if we were or were not going home together, whether she wanted to be my wife again. Anxiousness began to creep in as I put my knife and fork down. When I had given her back my wedding ring, the idea was that she knew that I willing to wait, willing to give up some control, was this a mistake to push now, on this night of all night. Bette Porter always trusts her instincts, follow them this time. I put the knife and fork down and pushed them close together. I cleared my throat. Dont hesitate, be strong, if she wants you its all good, if she doesnt be gracious in defeat.


 


Bette : Tina, there are some things I would to say to you. She looked straight into my eyes.


 


Tina : Id like to hear whatever it is you need to say


 


Bette : I cleared my throat. Tee, I love you, I love you more than you know. I know this from the last few months, firstly being with out you being in my life and now since you have been here, I feel we have made real progress. I felt before you came I had begun to make real progress for me. I came here, as you know to think and to feel what happened with us. I know now not to make the same mistakes again. I cannot promise I will not make other mistakes. But I can promise to be loyal, loving and open. I want you and our baby to be my future.


 


Tina : Thank you Bette, that was beautiful


 


Bette : what I wanted to know Tee, is if you feel the same way ?


 


Tina reached over the table and put both her hands into my open palms, it was then I saw it, actually I felt it first, the small cold patch on Tinas finger. She was wearing her wedding ring, was I imagining it ?


 


Tina : Bette, I feel the same way. I love you so much. What happened in the past is now in the past, we must look forward to our future. We both made mistakes Bette but what is done is forgiven. Bette, I trust you and want you to be my wife again, in every sense of the word. With those words Tina put the small blue velvet box on the table. Go on Bette, open it. Sure enough it was my wedding ring.


 


Tee quietly slipped on my wedding ring, I wipe tears of joys away with my other hand. I looked at her and at the wedding ring, and back at her. The only thing she said was I have never been surer about anything in my life Bette. I began to giggle, out of shear relief and nervousness. All I could think of was making the most of the rest of this night and making our way home to LA tomorrow, to our house, our family, our friends. Make the most of it alright.


 


Bette : Tee, will you dance with me ?


 


Tina : Id love to dance with you Elizabeth Porter


 


I walked around to Tinas seat and took her by the hand. We danced, we made love, we watched the sun rise, never letting go of each other on that night. Even when it was time to go, there was joy. Heading home for the rest of our lives together.


 


The End


 


 


 


 


 




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06/24/2005 , 01:39:23 AM
From: marsupial
Comments: WONDERFUL JOB..THANKS



06/24/2005 , 02:08:00 AM
From: KidRookie
Comments: Thank you for writing such a great story, I'm a little sad it's over. :)



06/24/2005 , 02:23:52 AM
From: angelak
Comments: wow, I can't believe it's over.......beautiful story



06/24/2005 , 02:24:29 AM
From: nzgrl
Comments: I loved the series. I hope you do a sequel or another story.



06/24/2005 , 03:07:49 AM
From: wo`wo
Comments: beautifully written..thx for this stories...love it! yeah,hope you come up with sequel or another amazing story! :)



06/24/2005 , 03:46:41 AM
From: Seahurst
Comments: This has been a wonderful story from beginning to end...sometimes painful, but always beautiful. Thank you for taking the time to share it with us.



06/24/2005 , 04:23:32 AM
From: Trolle
Comments: This story has truely been amazing. Thank you Unbeknown for the lovely story and I do hope you will write again.



06/24/2005 , 04:48:05 AM
From: robbeedee
Comments: Much gratitude for a fantistic fac fiction. Please write and cature us with another superb story soon.
A fan.



06/24/2005 , 05:49:03 AM
From: al
Comments: unbeknown, that was a wonderful story and I was passionately absorbed from the beginning to the end. If I was an editor, I'd love to publish a book of you! By the way, my banker told me "NO WAY!" for the yacht, sorry. So, I changed my mind, and I bought a new cell phone, thus I can check TLW fanfic anywhere and anytime I want with it. It's royal, isn't it ? Anyway, I really hope to hear from you soon (like everybody I guess). So, feel free to write another story again and again, it will give me a great pleasure to read, you make me love english. THANK YOU ************and thank you for your special comment, it went straight in my heart.



06/24/2005 , 06:46:06 AM
From: techgal
Comments: A satisfying end to an eventful journey!
Thank you for doing this story.



06/24/2005 , 06:50:52 AM
From: chilli491
Comments: perfect ending *sigh*



06/24/2005 , 06:57:03 AM
From: Jwet
Comments: I just love this story so much and thank you for writing it. I am a in awe of your talent and thanks for sharing.



06/24/2005 , 07:08:43 AM
From: Chasemenow
Comments: This story has been a favorite of mine from the start. Thanks for taking us on this difficult journey and ending it on a happy note.



06/24/2005 , 11:48:50 AM
From: mstx
Comments: K
Great story, I hope you write something else soon.



06/24/2005 , 21:27:46 PM
From: phyl
Comments: You have given me so much pleasure. I'm purring happily. Thank you.



06/25/2005 , 14:06:56 PM
From: tbsaver
Comments: I can't belive how much I have missed this story. Beautifully told, and emotional it's been a wonderful journey, Thank you



06/27/2005 , 14:44:38 PM
From: zabo
Comments: Beautiful...beautiful...beautiful...
WOw...thanks a lot for the great story... please do come back with another story... I love your story telling style... just so...beaaauuutttiifullll...



07/03/2005 , 11:45:52 AM
From: al
Comments: unbeknown, I just wanna make a little more try.I'd really love to convince you to write another story. I managed to do that the first time I post a comment to tell you I still was waiting for the part 2. I was sure that you already had the end in mind, and it was so sweet of you to let me think it was an update "especially for me".So if I try hard, maybe it will work again, and look at all the previous comments, I'm not the one who loves your style, captivating style. Please, unbeknown, come back.If you write something else than TLW fanfic, could you let me know, please? I hope you gonna read this comment(and understand it if my english is clear enough of course), and if I feel like I miss my dose, I will post another comment.You made me "foolish moves-addict", now, I can't help myself, I need more ! Am I convincing ? Thank you again for this brilliant-46 chapter-journey.



07/03/2005 , 19:45:27 PM
From: unbeknown
Comments: OK Al, I tell you what. I will think about writing another story but not until after July 15th (big day). But I am so glad you enjoyed it. Sorry to hear the bank turned you down on the yacht ! Your english is just fine :-) Umm, how would I let you know if I decide to write another story ?



07/04/2005 , 23:42:37 PM
From: al
Comments: unbeknown, it's so nice of you to reply, I'm enchanted. What about july 15th (big day)? Is that personnal thing or do I miss something ? Ten days will be soon there, I wait impatiently for your return! Thank you for my english, you reassure me, it's a little unusual for me to write in other language than french. If you decide to write another story (i keep faith about it), you can e-mail me at al_inmind@yahoo.com. Merci encore unbeknown ;-)



07/06/2005 , 06:27:20 AM
From: tylo
Comments: Great story waiting to hear from you I hope youy post another story soon



08/28/2005 , 23:52:55 PM
From: ut
Comments: So fucking beautiful and amazing chapter. So happy at the end and they will be happy forever, love it. Thank you so much for sharing the wonderful story with us, and hope you will write the new one for us soon. Thank you!



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