Title:Tina's First Time Chapter one of one Author: justkeepswimming [ Send a Private Message ]
Copyright: 2005jks Content Rating: PG-13 Disclaimer: Borrowed characters. Author's Note: This is an approach I haven't really tried before. It's a completely different voice than usual. I'm just trying to branch out a bit. I hope it's not too much of a disappointment. Comments would be helpful. Thanks.
Summary: Beginning middle and end all in one chapter. Total Views: 3578 times.
Tina's First Time Chapter one of one by justkeepswimming
My God, I cant believe the time is finally here. It seems like only yesterday I had decided to go for it. Theres been a lot of building up to this; I hope it isnt a disappointment. What am I talking about, I know it wont be a disappointment. I knew deep down it was always something I wanted, but maybe Ive let the anticipation outweigh what could possibly result from the experience. I should just stop second-guessing myself. Bettes been so greatso supportive. I really couldnt have asked for anything more from her.
I have to have another drink of water. God, I dont remember ever being this thirsty before. Is this normal? Maybe Im sick? Maybe I should back out? No! Tina, get a hold of yourself, youre just nervous. Now breathe. Okay. Thats a bit better. I can still feel my heart pounding in my chest. Maybe Ill faint and the pressure will be off, theres no way I can do it if Im unconscious right? Bette will just wait patiently until I wake up and shell drive me home and reassure me the whole ride that it just wasnt the right time yet.
I cant believe she just gave me such a great foot massage. She certainly knows how to treat me. Shes such an amazing person. I cant believe how lucky I am to have her. She said she liked what Im wearing today. That I had picked the perfect outfit. But then she said that shed rather see it all on the floor leading to her bedroom. Sometimes she really does have a one track mind.
Damn. Im still lucid. That means Im responsible for the decision. Well, I dont think I can reasonably back out now. Okay. Its now or never. _________
Once we began, it became more real to me. I dont know why it didnt feel real before. I guess its because I hadnt told anyone. Its like a goal that only becomes real once more people are aware of the plan. I really can do anything. I am capable of so much, I cant wait to set my sights higher next time. This is easy. So far pretty much like what Ive done before, but perhaps with a little more intensity. Okay, so it is a little different. But its not like Im doing this on my own or anything. That would be impossible.
Wow. This is going really well. I feel exhilarated. My toes are kind of tingling. I didnt know that would happen. It feels fucking incredible. Every part of me feels alive. I wonder if its possible that Im growing additional nerve endings like the sensations my body is experiencing are so intense, I have no choice but to create new channels to carry the signals. Now Im starting to wish I hadnt waited so long. It really feels like Im getting into a rhythm here. Ive thought about it in my mind so often, but this is even better than I could have hoped for. I wonder if anyone has tried to capture and recreate the hormones that make you feel this way? Im sure they have and its probably illegal
I never thought it would feel so fucking good to sweat in the presence of another person. It makes me feel like Im working, but the pay off so far has been incredible. And there is such a thing as a good ache; that is without question. But if I think Im sore now, I dont think there will be any comparison when tomorrow arrives. I think Im going to discover body parts I didnt even know I had.
I cant believe where this is taking me. Its already been over three hours and theres no end in sight. Its euphoric. This is truly better than Ive ever felt in my entire life. I cant wait to tell everyone they should try it. Wait. I cant do that. Theyll just tell me Im crazy. And that were not all like you, Tina. Yeah, they wish they could feel like this. Oh, what theyre missingMy body moves in ways I dont even have to instruct it toits like I was born to do this! I cant believe it took me 28 years to discover what I should have known when I was a teenager. Okay, I cant berate myselfI should just look forward to the fact that I have another 50 or 60 years of this ahead of me.
Im getting close. God, I cant believe Ive been drawn back and forth along this path so often today and Im only now reaching the end. You couldnt have this kind of experience without sharing it with another person. ______________
I rest with the back of my hand over my eyes, merely trying to catch my breath. I feel Bette sitting beside me and I take a moment to look up at her. Shes smiling. Im glad to see her smile.
You did it, Bette said.
Yeah, I did it, the pride was bursting out of me.
Youre amazing, you know that? she asked.
I couldnt have done it without you, babe, I answered, reaching for some more water.
Your first marathon, and it took you just over three and a half hours. Thats very impressive. Bette remarked.
Maybe Ill try a triathlon next time? I suggested, still a bit giddy from my success.
Lets just see how you recover from this first, okay? she reached her hand to help me up.
We returned to our house that afternoon right after I received my award for completing the race. And I got another foot massage for my trouble.
06/09/2005 ,
19:07:39 PM From:
PennyroyalTea Comments:
SWIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sorry, had to....I absolutely loved it! I am glad that you decided to write something else so quickly...so thank you! but, to be reduntant, WRITE SOMETHING AGAIN SOON!!!! and great job on reeling us in than throwing a perfect twist at us:-)
06/09/2005 ,
19:30:05 PM From:
goldfish Comments:
I loved it! Leading us on is naughty but i loved where it lead. Good job! more soon.
06/09/2005 ,
19:53:59 PM From:
MoreThanSatisfied Comments:
This was spectacular. Very nicely done. Very nicely done indeed.
06/09/2005 ,
21:08:23 PM From:
Bette&TinaForever Comments:
ha-ha-ha, i totally loved it, it was great, post more soon
06/09/2005 ,
21:47:40 PM From:
btownjuli Comments:
Swim...I didn't know you were such a tease! You had me going...
06/10/2005 ,
00:38:26 AM From:
Skipton Comments:
very nice- you certainly had me fooled!
06/10/2005 ,
00:43:21 AM From:
slacker Comments:
Quite fun! Thanks!
06/10/2005 ,
01:11:51 AM From:
vi Comments:
Great! I love it!
06/10/2005 ,
03:41:00 AM From:
CR00 Comments:
holly shit!! I knew it wasn't sex, I though it was bike riding
06/10/2005 ,
05:31:19 AM From:
nik_noodle Comments:
lol i thought it was the rollerblading story!
06/10/2005 ,
11:07:49 AM From:
mstx Comments:
K That was great! Loved it.
